Douluo's Xiaoyao Villa

I have read novels from the past seven or eight years, and I have been reading fan fiction and science fiction. Recently I have found several Douluo fan novels. They are basically the same routine and have no freshness. Either it is not a post official, or it is too pretentious. It says that the martial arts is very powerful, so it is beaten all the way. If it is not for seeing a woman, it will stop. Alas, I can't stand it anymore. There is no plot at all, and the grasp of emotions is very poor. Some even write the protagonist as a special character, and the heroine has criticized it. She just likes it and is speechless. Liking and love are different, okay? The description of the heroine is also not good. Many of them are written in a sloppy way. It's been a long time since I've written so many words, bye , let me sigh, okay?

Although you wrote a fanfic, the time you traveled through was obviously before the beginning of Dou Yi, and the ending of the plot is basically the same as Dou Yi. What the hell, could you wait for Tang San to time travel and come back again? The character settings are also very similar. The protagonist's father is a blacksmith, his mother is an assistant, Tang Hao is a blacksmith, A Yin is an assistant, Tang San is practicing on the mountain, and you are also practicing on the mountain. Tang San is an assistant, an attack and a blacksmith, and you are the same, one is an attack, the other is an assist, plus the weapon refining you have learned, they are too similar. The people in charge when awakening the martial soul are all beast martial souls. You are a tiger, fighting a wolf. It really makes people who have read the original feel like they are copying a book. Unless you don't write that you will finish the book or leave this world before Tang San appears, otherwise it will collapse too easily. Fan fiction, fan fiction, is not the same text. You can learn from it, but the plot direction cannot be so similar, it is too confusing. Furthermore, you, a child of Emperor Jun, practice Eastern things, and you give him a superman's body. What the hell, it's really too poisonous. Didn't you travel to DC and be directly restrained by kryptonite? Also, Dachao's basic magic resistance is negative most of the time. The power system of the East is not weak. Don't say that your body is not strong enough to withstand it. Since you have so many techniques, I don't believe you don't have a physical training book. Where do you put the ancient witch clan? Let Da Chao knock down a pillar of heaven and earth, Bu Zhoushan. Originally, most people in the East can be classified as the type of magic warriors. If your health is not good, why can't you practice physical fitness? They are not superhuman, which is a bit nondescript.

Could the author add a supporting character, the mysterious uncle of the protagonist? Name: Di Jun Strength: Almost the same as the protagonist's father. The protagonist meets him while traveling through other time and space, but the protagonist does not know that he is his uncle. 🙏🙏🙏

I was struck by lightning but got a new plug-in. This wave of operations is gone, and I still traveled to Douluo Continent. What kind of material is this thunder made of? Can I be guaranteed to travel? 😂😂 However, my little brother is still very positive. It is not easy to make a name for himself in Douluo Continent.

Aren't Tang San's parents Tang Hao and Ah Yin? You said that Tang San's parents after time travel and Tang Hao and Ah Yin's eldest brother? Black question mark, what the hell kind of logic is this?

Wuhun: Dark Angel Name: Tang Huixuan, originally called Shadow ①, or the ultimate weapon. Age: 40 Soul power: 99 (still one step away from becoming a god, about the same strength as Sendaoliu) Personality: freedom, justice, (freedom and unwilling to be restricted by others, even if the world thinks it is wrong, if you think it is right, then it is right), he is a good person Life experience: Kidnapped and trafficked since childhood, bought by a small family to train Deadpool. I have never seen the outside world so I hope to be free. She was rescued by the teenage Tang Hao and Ah Yin (he was 12 years old at the time) and named her Tang Huixuan. Since then, he has been traveling across the mainland with Tang Hao and the others. 28-Year-old and Tang Hao went to sea separately and were never seen again. It wasn't until Xiao Wu was recognized as a spirit beast that he appeared again.

The more I read, the more speechless I become. Being a newbie is no reason for you to type casually. As a novice, you need to narrate the story with a serious and rigorous attitude. Similar to the large dragon clan in Jiangnan. Mother of Dragons I haven't found a single typo so far. From here you can discover what a master and a novice are. It is not unreasonable that details determine success or failure. I give you five stars before I leave, although this is a bit against my will.

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The souls of the nine dead children among the ten sons merged into one As the protagonist, who doesn't have a decent appearance configuration? The scope of the author's intervention is quite broad, and the combination has a unique flavor. Especially when the Demon Emperor introduced Li Yu's identity, I was so shocked that I dropped my melon seeds on the ground. I couldn't adapt to the local environment and only accepted Li Yu.

Really, I feel that this book is very well written. I think other Douluo fans are writing about the same stage as Tang San, but the protagonist of this book was born decades earlier than Tang San and belongs to the uncle generation. Before the main plot of the original book begins, it changes the entire plot pattern. There is a big hook at the beginning, to obtain the skills, and to pave the way for the source of the skills of Xiaoyao Villa... This book is the kind of book I like, I have a very high vision! But unfortunately, this book is free! And I'm just a poor student