Holographic Pirate Age

I hope the author won't write too many realistic plots. It's really a bit messy. It's better to have more online games. The rest of this book is pretty good. Besides, Momonosuke must die!

There is a problem with the bounty. The first bounty is 5 million beli, but the second bounty is 12 million. The protagonist Luffy was rubbed on the ground by Smoker when he was in Rogue Town. It was 30 million beli. It's not that it's not possible. The protagonist can even push Smoker to the ground. I'm sorry, it's only 12 million. It's a little unreasonable. The book is pretty good, but the bounty is a bit fake. Come on, author, I'll improve it later. Just a few suggestions. Let me say it first. I'm poor and can only read Doudou on other book sites. I hope you don't mind. I've been reading books for more than 10 years. It is difficult to find a good novel in the book shortage nowadays. Don't be a eunuch, otherwise I will directly kill you at your home , break your three legs, and shut up in a small dark room,

I have admired three men, one is Xu Xian, the other is Dong Yong, and the third is Ning Caichen. One dares to sleep with a snake, another dares to sleep with a fairy, and the last one doesn't even let go of ghosts. It wasn't until I watched Hua Qiangu that I realized that Luo Shiyi was a real man who dared to sleep with a caterpillar. The most despised thing is Sun Wukong. He immobilized seven fairies and he actually ran to steal peaches. But I have to admire Sun Wukong's father for being able to make a stone pregnant. I was also drunk! Some people say that I have no experience in water, and I just slap them in the face when I go up. Isn't this nonsense? How to upgrade without experience? This comment has experience. Upgrading requires experience, so I copied and pasted this comment. I will comment once a day and it will flash after I comment. I am just here to earn experience.

1. The system data is always 18 years old 2. The author chooses who is the most reckless person in the game and the fan. It was an online game at the beginning, but later became a fan. [Emot=default,42/] 3. The first paragraph is about writing about reality seriously. Where is the school beauty Bai Xue, where is the orphan girl at the same table, and where is the special department? Even if I don't want to write about real life, it's okay to explain it before. I thought the protagonist had been playing with a gaming helmet for several months without going offline. [Emot=default,49/] 4. The most important God of War is gone. Shouldn't the game be inseparable from God of War? I'm so confused 5. What's more worth complaining about is that the appearance in this game has not changed. If a big family in real life sees the photo on the protagonist's bounty order, especially in the early stage when the protagonist is not very strong, they can definitely find the protagonist in reality~_~. There is still facial recognition technology. Not to mention finding it directly, at least it can be focused on. The protagonist, an orphan, suddenly has the strength of a genetic warrior, and he becomes B-level while playing games at home. It should be a direct hit. [Emot=default,31/] 6. The most important thing is that I want to read the Empress. [Emot=default,68/]Asshole author, This is the only motivation for me to finish reading this book. Other pirate fans either dare not write it, or the protagonist is not in a normal human form, or they are not interested in women, or they just brush it off. Just before the author, Tina and Kalifa drove a car that made my heart surge, and later with the empress, you and me, gave me hope. But in the end, you just gave me a name to appear in the wedding list. What does it mean? [Emot=default,32/]It would be nice to drive a few more cars! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! (Because of my deep resentment, just wait for me to send you the blade ) To sum up, I think this book is divided into three stages as shown below. At the beginning, the author's writing was a bit immature, but then it gradually got better and better, but some plots made people uncomfortable to watch (especially the scene on the empty island, where people treat you as a trophy and take the initiative to take action. If you don't do it to death, people have done that and should have corresponding awareness. The protagonist I was so used to it, soothed and made to look like a god, and I almost stopped reading it several times.) Overall, it was pretty good, but in the end it felt so perfunctory. I turned it on at 8x speed, and used a quarter of the pen and ink to write what took 10 times the time. And I hate the way of describing what happened so many years ago, and what happened so many years ago Let me complain about the author's description of reality again. If I remember correctly, after that description of reality (the part where he went back to school and killed a genetic warrior and then tested his physical fitness), there were only a few sentences after (the protagonist went on a forced mission to make a breakthrough) (the protagonist returned to reality to have a meal after Luo had a heart surgery in one sentence) (and then at the end, the protagonist was forced to unify more than a dozen cities and used one sentence). Some of them really only used one sentence. Why are you so embarrassed that the actual situation in the last four-fifths of a book you use is less than one-fifth of the words in my book review? [Emot=default,12/] Especially the ending is too perfunctory, too lazy to complain But if you don't take it too seriously, don't think too carefully about following the protagonist, and don't be too intellectual, it's still a very good article. It is very comfortable to take a look and smile after working hard. In short, I still support the author's hard work and labor results. [Emot=default,80/] I hope the author will give a response after reading it. It took me an hour to write the book review, and my hands are numb. [Emot=default,51/]

I want to read Guina. Author, you can't write the protagonist to death in reality. It would be great to live in the online game all the time. In the finale, it would be great to reshape the body of the protagonist and kill all the enemies. I don't know what other people think. But, I read online game novels mainly to read the content of the game. If I want to read the city, I won't click on the online game novel.

Die! It cannot solve the problem. We need to proceed slowly and step by step, first let him see the hope of revenge and then let him despair, feed him bowl after bowl of soul-toxic chicken soup, care for him like the big brother next door, and then design an accident to create a little eunuch and throw Momonosuke into the peach-colored ladyboy island for a few months. Then ask the ladyboy king to get some estrogen (male to female), turn Momonosuke into a lolita and then sell it to the Queen of Happy Street. Thinking about it is a little exciting.

We will be permanent in the future. Waiting for you here. Support you! Your idea is very original. It's very interesting, come on, keep writing, we will all support you. , Don't trust those people, stick to doing your own thing. There are dogs in the world who spray me, abuse me, scold me, and humiliate me. You tolerate him, let him, avoid him, hide from him, Just wait and see him in a few years.

The non-pirate part is too watery

Alas, the book has left me since then

You have to spend more than 20 chapters for three days outside. Our world has more than three days, right?