Lord of Mysteries: Taiyi

How can I put it, the future is promising, but in my opinion, we are already standing on the edge of a cliff. First of all, there are the two mysterious forces you created, the Church of Nothingness and the Church of Truth. It has been 100 chapters. I basically don't know anything except their names. I don't know whether they are hostile or friendly, help or resistance. I don't know anything. At least I will give you a general introduction. It always makes readers guess. Too much mystery can easily have counterproductive effects. Secondly, that Alice is inexplicable and really abrupt. Is this a foreshadowing? To be honest, I can't see it, and as a reader, I find it very annoying. There are too many mysteries, and everything is too much, and too many of the same plots are really annoying. Especially in the last chapter, the protagonist was still selling formulas. This chapter suddenly jumps to the role of Alice, and the drama is gone in an instant. All the sense of substitution is gone. There are so many self-created supporting characters and forces that I haven't mentioned at all, and it's so confusing, such as the girlfriend Deng Li in the previous life and the friend Liya in this life. To be honest, I couldn't tell who was who at first. There were too many different kinds of lives in the first few dozen chapters. Foreign-type names are originally for us. It's hard to remember. You throw out all these characters at once. When you read a certain chapter, you see this supporting character suddenly talking to the protagonist and you have to remember who he is. You can't remember at all. The protagonist is also obsessed with it and has a lot of inner drama. I always feel that you haven't handled it well and the book is about to collapse. But in fact, aside from the self-created plots, it's still pretty good. There's nothing serious about it, and the minor flaws are innocuous. It's pretty good in terms of mystery.

There's no other way to do it. Some people have told me not to fix the bad things, but I still have to fix them.

To respond to some of the protagonist's early questions, the protagonist was a little unclear about his position in the early stage, so he subconsciously followed the original Klein's approach in doing things, being cautious and subjectively malicious towards the true god. So there was some suspicion in the early stage. After readers responded, I also changed the protagonist. Kurt gradually discovered that his "God's Favored One" seemed to be a little different, so the matter was finally resolved. The protagonist will only cover up the traces symbolically, and will no longer be timid in doing things. There is also the attitude towards Klein. Some people say that my protagonist licks Tianzun (Klain?), Em. So far, the protagonist has not given Klein a penny or provided anything in kind. Moreover, the protagonist has a good impression of Klein, and investing in Klein is also a high investment return. Why can't the protagonist help? Currently, the protagonist only provides Klein with relevant information about the Hidden Sage, asking Klein to pay attention to Old Neil's anomalies. Then he provided his honorary name, and at most he was given a few powerful spells for free. Now in the early stage, the protagonist can't charge for it, right? And this does not harm the interests of the protagonist... The development of Tarot will be of great benefit to the protagonist without any harm. Is it a shame for the protagonist to reveal some knowledge for free? Will this be helpful for the protagonist's subsequent promotion? And since my protagonist is a generally good person, there's nothing wrong with being helpful, right? After that, at most, some 0-08 information will be provided. The protagonist will not go to Tingen to get involved in this muddy water. It's not like Klein can't think and act on his own. The protagonist will just help along the way. I personally feel this is not licking... Of course, it's still a matter of my writing skills, which I will pay attention to in the future. I still want to thank all readers for their valuable opinions. I will change it. Of course, I am not good at writing, so I will post to explain. If you have any questions, you can ask.

The single heroine Lilith, ho ho ho, lead the party.

In order to make the story more exciting, I need some interesting magical items to add to the plot.

Pick it up yourself, why do you need to publish ten words?

The author-related words are not used well, but too many are used, often with several buts in a row.

Generally speaking, the author should be writing a book for the first time. Generally speaking, there is no climax point in the writing. I have read more than 60 articles so far, and there is no plot that I can remember. After writing more than 60 articles, there should be one or two small climax points, otherwise it will not retain readers.

Come on, author, the writing is beautiful.

My outline is quite empty. If you have any interesting characters and stories, please submit them.