Mystery: the Good Witch

In fact, I was frowning all the time. Because it feels very different from Lord of Mysteries, but I have to remind myself at the same time that this is not Lord of Mysteries. This is just a fanfic. In fact, I only saw the first Tarot Club and knew that the writing styles of this book and Lord of Mysteries would be very different. Maybe the author himself didn't feel it. The three people who were pulled above the gray fog for the first time showed little respect for Mr. Fool. Talking too casually. The heroine is just that, a person who has just traveled through time can understand the lack of common sense. Audrey can also understand that she just came into contact with the mystery book and doesn't understand anything. But what about the Hanged Man? Alger has been a captain for such a long time. He also received a lot of education from the mysterious book in the Church of Storms, a strong man who could pull him into a space silently. Doesn't he know what the quality is? Without knowing anything about it, he actually dared to discuss business with a stranger he met for the first time. Is he crazy? So the author is actually too impatient. They directly skipped the stage of testing each other and started the daily Tarot meeting. This is not mysterious at all.

The writing feels like the original work (the pace is really slow/, the heroine is very cute, the emotional line is very sweet, I hope she will get married)

The Templar's soul travels, and then hesitates in various senses, which is completely inconsistent with the setting of the protagonist's previous life. Moreover, Piccolo appears to be a coward and a novice in various original plots, which is completely inconsistent with the setting of a Templar chasing demons. Moreover, the intelligence is severely reduced. Why can the way of making bullets in the past life be seamlessly connected to the way of time travel? Can the squiggle English font be as capable of leveraging spirituality as the Hermetic language? (Bullshit, why is Chinese just a language without any mystery)? A golden finger is forcibly set, but the character is completely unable to match the characteristics of the golden finger. Decrease wisdom

I didn't spend any money on the original work, but I didn't expect that you would pick it up

If you have been persecuted by Squid's "Circle of Destiny", watch The Good Witch to mend your broken spirit. If you have not been persecuted by "The Ring", then you need to watch "The Good Witch"! Because you can continue to see the unfolding of the mysterious worldview without contamination! See the real Lord of Mysteries, Klein! Not that AI Gehrman, nor that highly resurrected Celestial Master Klein with only a few mental fragments left! The first half of the plot basically overlaps with the main plot of "Lord of Mysteries". The heroine and Klein join the Tingen Nighthawks team at almost the same time to start the story. Except for some branch content about the witch and the City of Disaster that belong exclusively to the heroine, the heroine and Klein grew up simultaneously (but this also caused the heroine to replace some of the original Klein's interpersonal relationships and highlight plots, which was a bit awkward, but the writing was reasonable. It's not a forced highlight, so it's acceptable); and the heroine's branches will naturally be introduced to various clues in the City of Disaster line in the second half, such as Trier of the Fourth Age, Morola, Man in the Mirror, Prime in the Mirror, Dream Festival, Sephiroth, etc. These are the main copies in the Circle of Fate. The subsequent processing of these is better than that of the Ring of Fate, and the basic settings of the Squid are continued. It is not like Lumian who has low combat power and can only be a tool in each copy. The subsequent plots and endings of characters such as Amon, Adam, Feng Zhibai, Tarot Club, etc. Are better than the world written by Squid in "The Circle of Fate", and Adam's oppression remains as strong as ever. In the early stage, Ya and Meng fought against the protagonist group, and in the later stage, they had a tacit understanding with the outsiders, and the characters were full of tension. The characters Elaine, Sherman, Tracy, Triss, and the witches of the Witch Cult that were expanded in the original plot are all stand-alone in the follow-up, and each has its own character arc. The combat description is quite good, not as good as the Mysterious Period of Squid, but it is much better than the Shuhuan period anyway! The Doomsday War was still handled better than Suhuan. The Earth side took the initiative to start the war and finally signed an armistice contract with a large advantage. Generally speaking, the writing power is not as good as the original "Lord of Mysteries", but it is definitely much better than the perfunctory "Circle of Fate" written by Squid. Although the setting of changing to marry (changing: transforming means changing gender. Marrying: marrying someone and falling in love.) Is a bit weird and not popular, but is it any better than the winter-burning "Circle of Fate"? ! After all, "The Good Witch" is a BG from the beginning to the end in terms of biology, 1v1 pure love (the protagonist was a native of China before time travel, and homosexuality is normal). In "Circle of Destiny", there are both men and women, so the conjugation of gay lesbians is even weirder! The protagonist Angel fell into the city of disaster and traveled through the source material later than Zhou Mingrui. At that time, extraordinary events had already occurred on the earth. The original body is male, and the body he traveled to is also male, but he has taken the witch's potion and has changed his gender. So it's a female body from beginning to end.

I can accept the transformation story, but I can't accept the transformation story, especially the transformation story, but at least the plot of this book is enough to attract me. However, in fact, the element of transformation and marriage in this book is not obvious. The heroine is more like a woman from the beginning, and the previous life is just a memory.

Judging from the trend in the comment area, it is probably changing marriages Looking at this kind of transformation literature, most of them either raised her as a daughter or brought her into it. As a daughter-in-law, if you see your daughter with an excellent man and write a sweeter story, it will be acceptable; but if she is a mentally retarded trash, it will be poisonous. When you bring them in, they usually want to hang out with beautiful women. Of course, there are also a few who are single. However, if you write a change order, the audience will generally be wider, and it will not offend those who have changed, nor those who have changed.

A question comes to mind. The protagonist's soul is male and his body is female. Then he and Klein like each other. So does it mean that the protagonist is Nantong (I am really a genius )

Does it count as acting if Xiao An makes Ke Miao's waist extremely painful 30 times a day?

The combat plot is written like shit. No one can beat the witch with such a powerful path in the hands of the protagonist. He lives cautiously like a mouse all day long. I doubt that any homeless man passing by could give the protagonist a slap in the face.