Ke Xue Arms Dealer: Start with One Billion Yen

The cuckold story confirmed the relationship with Xiaolan, and also let Conan live in her house to receive all kinds of care from Xiaolan. It's not like Conan has given up, evil

It feels like the protagonist is in a stalemate. The mission cannot be completed. There are no points. Mercenaries and arms have to be scored. It is difficult to move forward. The system is basically non-existent. Especially among the mercenaries, there is Naruto, which is too much in Conan. Unless the infinite flow is changed and travels to other worlds, the world of Conan as the main world still has a head start, otherwise the sense of existence of the subsequent system will be zero. There are also cheap mercenaries that you can consider the Death Legion in Warhammer, which are the first choice for cannon fodder.

I didn't rate it before, and I forgot why, but I think it's because many of the plots in your book were too rigid, which made me uncomfortable, but the heroine is Xiaolan, which made me interested in reading further. But in the last fifty chapters or so, the plot has been too bad and the author has not written it carefully. He must have reached a bottleneck. But I want to say that the quality of your books has plummeted since chasing Xiaolan. It's not that I'm tired of aesthetics, but that you are too indecisive. Although the system can recruit talents, you have to develop realistically. Do you think this will highlight the protagonist's ability? No, it will only make readers think that the author is writing a few books. The more reasonable way is to recruit talents systematically, let alone recruiting teams but not individuals. That is unreasonable. That's why I feel that the author is struggling, and the most important point is that when recruiting talents from the system, the author does not need to emphasize over and over again that all his subordinates are loyal, which really makes people feel uncomfortable. Many authors will digitize loyalty in system articles, such as 1%, 50%, 100%, MAX, etc. Because human nature cannot be controlled, so this is one of the cool points in some books. But you seem to be quite good at provoking readers with your writing, until I can no longer stand your books anymore. I have subscribed to many chapters, and I don't want to give up. But you said earlier that you didn't want to be involved with the black organization, and you tried your best to give the plot to the black organization. What is this? I just mentioned that the three little detectives in the detective team are annoying, but in the end they have not been dealt with. It is not to kill them, but to stay away. Even if they give their parents a sum of money to keep them away from Yoneka Town, it will be fine. You say they hate this plot and don't deal with it, and because they put themselves in danger, knowing Xiaolan's character, she can't be indifferent when she encounters a child who needs to be saved, and you tell her that there may be problems. Are you protecting her? You know, your way of writing has no audience at all, and may even lead to misrepresentation of Xiaolan's style of writing. Everyone seems to think that in your novel, you basically assume the role of the protagonist, but you let Xiaolan's kindness deceive the protagonist, or in other words, the protagonist deceives himself. Knowing that there will be a chemical reaction between the three little ones and Conan, but always ignoring them, this is an extremely irresponsible behavior towards Xiaolan. You can protect Xiaolan, yes, taking the danger away from Xiaolan is also protection, and even nipping the danger in the cradle is still protection. But I don't understand you. There are more and more questions, and your writing is becoming less and less serious. I suddenly feel that my subscription money has been wasted. Damn it. Besides, without the black organization, wouldn't it be possible to write a plot? To study immortality drugs, it is possible to use dying elderly people for clinical experiments. If the life is successfully extended, but if the death is unsuccessful, the family members can still receive a large amount of compensation. The protagonist has a system and can completely redeem a life-extending injection formula for production. It is not a real experiment. This is endorsed by the system. What's more, they are not competing with black organizations. They are doing their thing secretly. The protagonist has a pharmaceutical company on the surface and can openly announce that he will start research on biological life-span drugs. The author thinks about the plot himself, I only provide directions. This is not only about daily life, but the powerful old men who are dying all over the world will become the protagonist's moat. Unless the black organization can provide life-extending drugs, they will not be able to touch the protagonist. Even in business, all pressures will be wiped out by those old men, because the protagonist can save their lives. It can even be announced that this drug is just a technology derived from the study of immortality to increase the natural life span of human beings. Because it is a positive research, the derived effects have no side effects. It is entirely due to the injection of natural medicine into the human body that the body's resistance is greatly improved, the oxidation effect is weakened, and the body's delicate The vitality produced by the cells can make an elderly person ten years or even thirty years younger. This is the human body's natural response to this medicine. It is the body's independent evolution, not the impact of the medicine. Therefore, there will be no side effects. It is just that the medicine can increase the life span of everyone. It is not uniform. This may be based on potential? Or something else, or fate, or other unknown factors. There are obviously so many ways to write, but you insist on using this awkward way of writing, which makes readers uncomfortable. I believe your writing is not very comfortable either. I hope you can calm down and take a look at the content of your last hundred chapters, or pause the update first. From the first chapter to the last chapter, you will find your own problem. If you can, then modify it. Although the workload is heavy, I can re-subscribe. For a good novel, readers are willing to pay for it twice, but one thing is, be more serious, the author There are not many books with heroine Xiaolan. Originally, your book was okay. Since the second heroine appeared, the senses have become worse and worse, and your own writing style has become more and more perfunctory.

Not so good. You can tell just by reading the title in the book. It's 100 million yuan, not 1 billion yuan. Also, were you a special forces soldier or something in your previous life? I've been following Kudo Shinichi for a month, oh my god

In addition to the two appearances of the system at the beginning, the task was never completed because ten people had to be recruited to form a team. Then the system became a decoration, and everyone actually knew about the protagonist's borrowed knife to kill people at the beginning, which was outrageous. Later, Toru Amuro came to the protagonist in person, and the protagonist could only reveal himself in frustration and flipped the table. It wasn't cool enough, it really wasn't cool enough.

This is another soul-wearing-hat novel. I'm really speechless. How come everyone likes to use other people's bodies to start a harem?

Public Security Zero Team: Affiliated to the Security Planning Section of the Security Bureau of the National Police Agency. Historically, this thing was a notorious high-tech company during World War II. After World War II, it was secretly supported by the military of Eagle Sauce. It is normal to have some privileges. It is also the only organization in the island country that is not controlled by chaebols and whose main service targets are the military industry of Eagle Sauce! So I think it's normal for them to monitor the island nation's chaebols and have top-secret information. This can also explain the reason why Toru Amuro is dismissive of the Zaibatsu in the original work, because unlike the guys at the Metropolitan Police Department, he is really not afraid of those Zaibatsu!

The writing is very good. Nowadays, Conan fans all start as detectives or fall in love. They are all about bland daily life and following the main plot. I can't say how good this book is, at least it surpasses 90% of Conan fans.

I have read Chapter 377, and the plot design in the previous chapters is quite brilliant. It is quite a novel Conan fanfic. But as we get to the end, we don't know what the author is thinking. The protagonist has become famous, his own strength and power have grown, he has cooperated with the boss of the organization, he has subdued Shuichi Akai and Toru Amuro, and he has let the Kudo family join the winery. But I don't know what the protagonist wants to do (what is the protagonist's own main plot) With more than 370 chapters alone, there are already a lot of comments from readers who complained about Xiaolan's disgust, and there are no changes made by the author. Readers have a God's perspective. The protagonist and Xiaolan are together. This is because Xiaolan is the goddess of luck. But what is shown in the story is that Xiaolan likes the protagonist because of the protagonist, helps her parents live together, and her father returns to the Metropolitan Police. She already knows that Conan is Kudo Shinichi, and she has offended a childhood sweetheart with a huge power. Xiaolan was written really...

The Detective itself is just a comic about teenage migrant workers. The setting itself is imperfect and can even be said to be full of loopholes, but many people still like it because they don't care about those loopholes and he has his own shining points. And this book is filled with a lot of second assumptions and speculation about those loopholes. No matter whether these second assumptions are reasonable or not, or whether they are more in line with your so-called logic, he has deviated from the famous detective himself. To put it bluntly, for fan fiction, the original work is the basis, and a large number of secondary designs directly change this basis, which is actually specious. To put it another way, if you change the names of the characters in this book, from the Suzuki family and the Kudo family to the Ye, Lin, Xiao, and Chu families, and then remove Conan, you will find that this is not a typical urban system novel. In addition, a few words of "little friend" pop up from time to time, does it make it more interesting?