Simultaneous Time Travel: Be Invincible Starting from the Comics!

From the beginning, the world setting was not very good, what was it? The world of Sword Art Online was born for Sword Art Online. If Kiritani Kazuto had not entered Sword Art Online, the world of Sword Art Online would have lost its meaning of existence and would collapse and be destroyed. What the hell setting? How many years ago was this setting? I'm afraid this means that it's not written according to the original work, so it can't be written, right? In Tongchuanliu, you first write about the beginning of a world without transcendence. Others write about Tongchuanliu, which starts with a world with extraordinary beings. In the middle, sometimes they write about daily time transitions and so on. The same goes for the system, which is still half started and needs to be entered before it starts. It feels outdated.

The story is well written, but the protagonist will not refuse a woman when he sees one. He has central air conditioning. He also says that he is rational and does not want to be an "Assasi" man. He will not refuse a woman's request, just like the idiot heroine in the oracle.

Don't say much. Sao recharging is too outrageous. What Kayaba Akihiko wants is to create a real different world. How could I let you cheat? And the protagonist also has a system. Isn't it better to use the system to cheat? I have to write a recharge that is disgusting.

There is a problem with the spell setting of the spell return battle written by the author. In the manga, Gojo Satoru said that except for shikigami and barriers, other spells are basically born, that is, innate. You said that the protagonist can use shikigami, so it is definitely wrong to judge that his shikigami was born with the technique and is from a family of curses, because shikigami and barriers can be learned. The strange setting of Spell Return is said to be a spell, but in fact it is a super power, a physical alienation, so the brain occupies Xia Youjie's body and can use his spells. In the comics, except for those who are related by blood and have a high probability of having the same magic spell (because some Zen masters may not even have a magic spell, so there is a high probability), everyone's magic spells are like scratch-off tickets, and you don't know what will be drawn, so you can't tell that the protagonist is from the curse family based on how he can use shikigami. I remember there was a curser in the manga who played shikigami.

When I write Chapter 18 of the same novel, I still only have swords. The plot of Swords is a lot of private settings. Let's not talk about the nickname Sealer. I'm speechless just because of the krypton gold. I have never seen a Japanese game where krypton gold is a gold coin. I can accept your krypton point props. Asuna started the game with a friend who had participated in the closed beta. There are so many private magic modifications, and you still complain about the lack of popularity of Death Fire Sea. It's strange that you, Death Fire Sea, a blind idiot like you, can't be criticized💩 for making random changes.

I was originally reading this type of article, with the same starting point of Death in Fire, and wanted to write something else, but what was the result? Sure enough, you still have to die in the sea of ​​fire. Even if it is a bad street, there is still popularity. After all, how many people really like the second dimension (ToT)/~~~ Is it true that there is only a sea of death and fire among fandoms, and there are only migrant workers in the second dimension?

The subject matter is time-travelling, but there is basically no feeling of time-traveling. It's such an old-fashioned way of writing comics. Especially the part where the protagonist thinks Asuna likes Kirito was so embarrassing that I almost got cancer. This plot is too ancient. I felt like I was ten years younger.

What a rubbish! The main disadvantage is that the world you travel through is illusory, you have to follow the world plot, and you cannot destroy the plot, otherwise the world will collapse! What a fool!

Chapter 900 is still invincible in the demonic high school world. Just think about how quickly the protagonist improves his strength.

Let's complain, why don't you marry Hoshino Ai? I wrote that I met him in high school or was a star like him. Why did I write that Airi Hoshino also had a child, but you just gave birth? I was so speechless. I felt very sharp when I watched that anime.