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I saw in the latest chapter, the protagonist's legion besieged the city with 300,000 troops, which caused concern. It looks very exciting, but the author please don't forget that in the previous book, it was the three northern kingdoms that were trembling under the front of the orc soldiers, rather than the orcs struggling to persevere under the front of the three northern kingdoms. The author has used thick and vivid colors to describe the high combat power of the elite forces of the Orcs (the five royal families), and also used pen and ink to describe the consumption of the Orcs' cannon fodder troops on the human race. But only the middle power of the orcs is not depicted at all, not even mentioned at all, nor is there any representation on the battlefield. The result is that the orcs in the book, except for the five royal families, are all cannon fodder. This is a precursor to the collapse of combat power, and also the imminent collapse of the orcs, a race that was shaped with a lot of ink in the early stage. A race cannot have only elites and cannon fodder, and no matter how elite troops face off against troops that are not cannon fodder, it cannot be one-sided. Throughout the ages, mankind has gone through thousands of years, and there have been countless wars, large and small, but nothing like this has ever happened. As mentioned above, the five major orc royal families are sparsely populated, but now in the book, except for the five major royal families, no orc army other than the five major royal families on the battlefield can fight back when encountering the human protagonist's army (is the protagonist's army really the ceiling of the human race?) (The protagonist's encounters with other orcs are all one-sided massacres). Such an orc clan has few elites, and except for the rare elites, they are all cannon fodder. What ability does it have to fight against the three northern kingdoms? Author, you spend a lot of pen and ink to polish the elites of the orcs in order to highlight the difficulties of the three northern kingdoms, and it may also be foreshadowing. But no matter what happens, the combat power of the orcs cannot collapse. The current plot may not seem like a big problem at first glance, but as you write it later, you will find that the loopholes get bigger and you can only add some random other hybrid orcs or other things. It's still early, the war has just begun, the painting is not finished and can be retouched. A race cannot only be composed of elites and cannon fodder, and the strength of a race does not depend on the strength of elites and cannon fodder. The power of race looks at the middle power, which represents the majority. Even if the Orcs have capable cannon fodder, that is the advantage of the Orcs. It does not mean that the Orcs have few intermediate forces. They only lack tauren and jackals, two races that do not look like cannon fodder, and have no performance on the battlefield. Except for a general who commands the ape-men, the soldiers are all cannon fodder, and not a single word is wasted on the description of their race. The only ones described are centaurs, and the centaurs were not gathered into an army again, they were used as orc archery troops. Generally speaking, except for the five royal families, the orcs currently use wooden sticks to fight against the five scum. This is just what the protagonist is currently encountering. Even the orcs surrounding the capital were shirtless players with wooden sticks. Except for thousands of Behemoth cavalry, no one can fight. I racked my brains and couldn't figure out how shirtless people and wooden sticks could surround a regular human army that was no less numerous than my own. Even if the other general's pants are frightened and all the generals and nobles in the country are disabled, they won't be blind, right? They all have to be blind and stupid to do this (the protagonist knows how to fight, isn't he emphasizing the advantage of heavy infantry over shirtless + wooden sticks? That proves that I don't say all, most of them are shirtless + wooden sticks). This has fallen apart a bit. I really like this book and really don't want it to collapse. Since you have set an outline for the book, you should grasp the strengths and weaknesses of the orcs, and don't let the protagonist ruin everything by himself. What I like about this book is that what fascinates everyone is the world in the book, not the protagonist alone. The protagonist is possessed by a halo. You have 10,000 reasons to make him awesome, but once the world in the book is formed and you modify it, it will completely collapse. The combat power, the balance of the races, the position of the human race and the position of the orcs in the book need to be described bit by bit, including other races that have not appeared in the book. Let the characters follow the world in the book. What kind of alien world do you want to build as the author? Let all the rules set for you be implemented. In your outline, the Orcs are powerful, then the Orcs must describe their power, high-end, low-end, and mid-range. The human race is strong, and we must also show the strength of the human race (the current performance is quite good, with mid-range forces guarding the Bear Castle). Even if it's an heirloom elf, whatever your definition of them is, then go and enforce your definition. Don't write a race as useless just to highlight the awesomeness of anyone, including the protagonist. Think of yourself as the rule of heaven, and the world in the book must follow the trajectory in the book. Ruthless, indifferent, but treating everyone equally. Treating all things as a dog is the greatest ruthlessness and the greatest kindness. As I said before, although Zhao Zilong, who was victorious in all battles, was a hero, Manstein, who ultimately failed but was invincible, was just as wonderful! I'm not asking you to abuse the protagonist, but please note that the protagonist can win, but not so easily. This is only 200 chapters. You should also have a definition of the protagonist. What level does the current protagonist fit into your definition? Military training is the god of war? The commander is the god of war? The only one in mainland China? If not, then don't put him in this bracket. Now if you tell me that he is not the God of War or the God of War, is that nonsense? Is the protagonist's army the pinnacle of the human race? But in your description, your country's most elite cavalry cannot take advantage of the Behemoth cavalry, and they rarely have the courage to fight in the field. Now that the protagonist has done it, tell me what is his army if it is not the ceiling of the continent? If his army can become a ceiling in a short period of time, calling him the God of War would be an injustice to him. If not, what explains his performance? Everything can be faked, but the record cannot be faked. The protagonist has killed all five royal families. The number of the five royal families who died in his hands was close to tens of thousands. The cannon fodder could not be counted. There were too many and I was too lazy to count. There were more than a hundred thousand. The fact that the Orcs can hold on until now without surrendering is really embarrassing for the Orcs! Are you surprised yourself? Unknowingly, the protagonist has strayed so far from your outline? I don't believe your outline can reach this level in Chapter 200, so it's useless to write it. The reason why there is a deviation is because every time the protagonist fights, there are no casualties. I know you wrote how many people the protagonist died. There were a lot of casualties, but that was fake. It was just a word from you. You didn't show the pain of the army after being injured, and there was no recuperation. You just recruited people and trained troops, and then a more powerful army than before was released. It would be strange if it didn't collapse. Even if the protagonist wants to establish a country, he doesn't necessarily have to use extreme military power to suppress it. Aren't there aristocrats who you wrote so well about? I don't know if you can see it or if you have the heart to read such a long article. If you don't really like it, I can't waste half an hour of my life talking nonsense. 2120 Words are enough to write a chapter of a novel!

Writers who write the same thing over and over again will get tired of it and it will be difficult to make progress. It is right to try to make breakthroughs. You see, Lao Wang has also made various attempts. Only the last two books have a small span. At present, the author's book is okay, and it incorporates the author's historical style, but there is an obvious shortcoming. The author lacks understanding of European classical culture, religious culture, and aristocratic culture, which leads to a Western feeling from a Chinese perspective. Well, the author still needs to make up for the aristocratic family emblems and complex etiquette, add appropriate religious legends, supplement the psychological activities of nobles, commoners, and even servants, etc., To make the world more complete. As a fantasy world, there are other races behind it, and there is a lot to write about, such as language, trade, and conflicts. By the way, the grammatical accent of the aristocrats should be deliberately different from that of the common people, and it would be more interesting to point it out accidentally. You can read more about The Lord of the Rings

In the latest 5 chapters, the protagonist is ordered to switch from accepting refugees to reinforcements and go to the front line. From the beginning, it is said that the king is stuffing troops and stuff for the protagonist's team. On the one hand, he says that the king's order must be followed, and on the other hand, he says that this will not work and that will not work. Then the story does not advance at all. I have finally summed it up, 40% of the length is the word count, 10% of the length is to advance the story, and then 20% is water, 10% is advancement, 20% is water... And the water is extremely nutrient-poor, there is a stalemate on the front line, the protagonist is on the road, both sides have reasons not to fight, but they are afraid of the other side coming, the protagonist is on the road, the king is stuffing things, talk about the conflicts between the protagonist and other nobles, and there are also conflicts within the enemy. Conflicts, the protagonist is on the road, there are also conflicts within the human race, the protagonist is on the road... Except for the protagonist being on the road, other content is just like the setting, crazy water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, and these have been talked about before, just like "Old Wang's son is called Xiao Ming, Xiao Ming is Lao Wang's son... Xiao Ming is Lao Wang's son... Xiao Ming is Lao Wang's son..." On the other hand, the emergence of the old soldier is a big failure. I thought that the protagonist's performance depends on the protagonist's wisdom, the "elite" of his subordinates, and his own strength after the bonus of the Earth Bear. But you told me that the combat power of the Earth Bear is a lot... If you want to forcefully explain that the human race is pressed and beaten in front, 1 the protagonist's response to other people The wisdom is so strong that it can lead the troops of World War I to fight the troops of World War II. 2. The cannon fodder under the protagonist can crush the elites of the human race in terms of combat power with just extra training. 3. The top combat power of the human race is broken, and the older generation will not come out... Well, I am not afraid that I can patch it, and then the patch can be watered down by 80% of the word count... The word count is not that bad either! Branch plots, backgrounds, and details are used to foreshadow and enrich the story, not to make up the word count. You write ten branches and add the background ten times. I can bear with it. You take a section of an existing branch and repeat it ten times in the article... Whoever wants to read it will read it... I will go back and make up for the outdated and unfinished system cool articles like Dalong. They are better than this. Finally, when I first read this book, I really couldn't stand it. I thought the scene at the beginning where the brothers killed each other and the stepmother got sick, and the protagonist punished the younger brother and took compensation from the stepmother. This kind of plot of subduing others to show his "online IQ" was really poisonous. I endured reading it because there were a lot of positive comments in the comments, and I really like this kind of subject and there are not many novels of this type. Now? Bah, I'd better go to Station B to check out the toilet paper from another world.

Why is the update so slow? Can it be updated soon?

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Not bad I feel that the battlefield descriptions and some extraordinary descriptions are too weak.

Since this is an extraordinary world, the protagonist is a novice, but I have never seen the protagonist practice.

It's a failure that this bear can share plug-ins. Spend money to raise ancestors. We can't deny the potential and role of bears, but there is an uncertain factor in it. It's very annoying if the things in your body are not controlled. It would be great if the protagonist takes the initiative to give it. But it is passive. After all, people are unpredictable. Although it is a bear's heart, as long as there is an intelligent life, there is no 100% control. I hope there will be an explanation later. Everything I have read so far is pretty good, but I don't understand it.,,,

There is no character description, no scene description, just describing the nobles back and forth, saying that the nobles have brains, yes, they are brains. But compared to the main character, the characters in the scenes are all idiots. I can't bear to go back and forth to confirm that all the characters in the scenes are human beings. Summary: The original text is all white writing, the content is white, the words are white, and the people are even whiter.

My stomach hurts as soon as the protagonist enters the battlefield. I can no longer tell the difference between extraordinary and ordinary people. Extraordinary is dead. Except for the extraordinary element, everything else is acceptable.