Bard of Hogwarts

I can't stand it anymore after reading more than 80 chapters. Fairy tales and bards are just coaxing, and they are all stupid egoism. The protagonist and the author are exactly the same as they are superior, obeying the rules and subverting the rules. The protagonist looks at the good old man who is actually nodding around everywhere, bullying the weak and afraid of the strong. The author writes fan fiction but does not respect the original work. There are a lot of OOC related to Lord of the Rings and Harry Potter. They say kindness is a virtue, but their hearts are full of calculations. Author, just continue to be complacent and self-hypnotize, and you will get the answer if you subscribe.

Everything I wrote up to this point was fine, but things started to go wrong at chapter 360. Do you really want the heroine Hermione to die once? They are also working on revivals. If you don't know how to write emotional dramas, you don't have to write them. Literary youth is a disease that needs to be cured.

I feel that the author wanted to write a relaxing fan story at the beginning, but later I felt that the writing went astray and became a plot for the sake of plot, and the large number of cracking detective plots seemed boring. The overall book is okay, but there are many details and flaws. The biggest flaw is that the character of the protagonist created at the beginning is not humorous? How did he become a 60- or 70-year-old saint after entering school? I gave your protagonist a handsome boy who is very lucky but hardly wrote any emotional scenes Then why did you write so many confidantes for your protagonist? The story you wrote is from a Western country. Children in the United States and Western countries start falling in love at the age of 12. Hermione and Pansy keep showing love to the protagonist, and the protagonist stupidly pretends they can't see it? [Emot=default,04/]It's just that the fourth movie of the original story has male and female roles, but I can't understand what the protagonist is doing. [Emot=default,04/]The story of the Harry Potter series also revolves around the school plot, but the author doesn't seem to want to write too much. I feel like he just jumps around the plot and time at will and a few months have passed. Does the author want to write: The plot of the Harry Potter mobile game? There is something wrong with the outline of this book. Instead of writing movies and fairy tales, why not actually write fairy tales as the protagonist? The plot of Goldfinger ➕ Harry Potter's seven parts will be much better than it is now. This book should have the protagonist fall in love with several beauties and easily get through each plot instead of being a miserable monk

In terms of setting, the protagonist can travel to those fairy tale worlds, and the protagonist really knows how to measure, and his IQ is online. However, I feel that the heroine is Hermione (if the heroine is not him, I will feel that the author is disgusting. There are all kinds of ambiguous descriptions, but it is not the heroine). But, I don't like the heroine. After seeing the latest chapter, I most likely confirmed it and slipped away. If you like to see a heroine or don't care about the heroine, you can read it. After all, this novel is really well written.

The last time I saw the heroine in a plot, she used her own mother to haunt her. I didn't expect that someone would still write such a clichéd and bloody plot.

I tolerated writing Hermione as the heroine, but usually a decent author would write it in the introduction. After all, it's a fan story called Hermione and she has an official co-star! As a result, in the later stage of writing, in order to assign Hermione to the protagonist, you described Ron as a fool again and again! Since you make money from the original Harry Potter book! You can't even show the least respect for the character! You don't think Ron and Sirius can be reduced or taken over at once, but you have repeatedly described them as idiots! ! ! ! In the early stage, he repeatedly said that he was not afraid of Voldemort's resurrection, and kept writing about the protagonist's various powerful methods. As a result, Voldemort was resurrected, and his methods were useless. He could only wait for Voldemort to give him ten years! ! ! ! ! Still relying on cheats to accumulate time! This treatment makes the male protagonist become the arrogant idiot you caricature Ron is the main character! If you can't handle it, don't change the plot so early. There are so many fans and you are the only one who changed the plot and had to rely on Voldemort to give up the props and give him ten years to survive! And since the original OOC novel was planned, Hermione was assigned as the protagonist, but it turned out to be a big mess near the end! Even if she was written to death, she was still solved in front of the protagonist! How could the protagonist be so awesome and end up like this? ? ? ? Later, Hermione was written as a ghost and resurrected, but the condition was that Hermione would be controlled by the male protagonist forever! ! ! I have always emphasized that I won't really control it, but I just wrote this plot! The underlying logic is just to assign an underage heroine with an official supporting role to an adult protagonist who has been emphasized to have lived for many years! Finally, I had to write this character to die once, just so that Hermione could be completely controlled by the male protagonist! It almost turned into a fetish, even if it was later written as a ghost resurrecting, this plot would be like swallowing a fly! ! ! This is the first time I'm so angry and so defensive! It's too late to give you a chance to avoid lightning! ! It's so exciting to see the ending coming! ! ! ! ! !

What a great book, it has become a silly drama for me. The male protagonist was originally unable to be shot, but the female protagonist swooped over and forced the hit. She lay in the male protagonist's arms and spun around, leaving behind a few intermittent sentimental sentences before dying. Author, please go to female channels in a mellow manner.

Classic mother-in-law Wen Qingbing: Even if you say you don't want it, you still want it

Today I saw a lot of book friends talking about Eno's character, a bit indifferent and just being an audience. Xiao Di wants to say, give Ino some time, and give this book some time. It's only 90,000 words long. The plot is also about Christmas in the first year of school. Bards often tell stories in a eloquent way, slowly unfolding, and the story ends right at the beginning, which makes you feel baffled. Similarly, the protagonist needs an opportunity to change, just like Rome was not built in a day. If it changes suddenly, it would be really random writing. Only two days, tomorrow... Including entering Slytherin, there will be an explanation, although it is not much, but the big guys will understand it.

No, bro, why don't you write this one about Hermione? Damn it, I have to jump to read it and feel uncomfortable. Who will read the heroine you wrote?