The Glory of Black Iron Reborn

There is also a friend who is a book writer. If you want to scold me, go to Qidian. In fact, I also think that the protagonist is rubbish. Everyone knows how huge the resources of an alien world are. Once you have the strongest firepower, you can just attack the alien world directly. And people in the alien world are not stupid. If you open a portal, they can't sense it. Are the people in the alien world mentally ill? In an inferior plane, even if garbage can't defeat magic, isn't that large population a resource?

The logic of this book is normal, the characters are well portrayed, their IQs are all online, and their outlook on life is normal. Some of the settings are rather blunt, but compared to other sandbox fast food novels with incorrect views, too short sofas, holes in the brain, and self-centeredness, they are many times better.

Is the protagonist's modern positioning fake? According to the author, a person who hangs around in shopping malls should be considered an elite, but how can he be such an idiot in another world? There are also those who are hesitant in doing things. A time traveler doesn't even make basic preparations in advance and still keeps a low profile? If you don't prepare anything, any accident will kill you. Ask your teachers and classmates what "chemistry and physics" are, are you being low-key? Is this elite? Aren't you going to beat around the bush? He also asked directly, if the people at the top know that Shan doesn't want to publicize this shit about you, then he's just throwing himself into a trap. He's so successful in the workplace. If the elites were like this, most of the world's elites would be like this.

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Want only magic after rebirth? ? Also experienced ups and downs in the mall! ! ! Can't you plan your own future development? ? Don't you know how to use the current advanced knowledge to make a business plan to get rich? ? Would it be easier to learn magic if you had money? ? Is it easier to buy magic materials when you are powerful? ?

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I have read dozens of chapters. They are all about the trivial matters of life in another world. There are no characteristics of earth travelers at all. Even if there are chapters about earth, they only have a few poisonous points.

The author started to feel confused as soon as he read the first chapter of this book. Why did he write a whole chapter about the past life? Is it just to be nostalgic for the past life? It can be passed through in one stroke. It is okay to intersperse some cabinets in the later chapters, but it feels dragging. Then there are a few chapters that detail the history of the kingdom, the history of the fathers, etc., But they have nothing to do with the protagonist anyway. I don't feel the presence of the protagonist. I have also read a lot of Western fantasy books written by Westerners. I feel that the book you wrote is interspersed between two authors and does not have a suitable position. These first few chapters will probably dissuade a lot of people. An online novel cannot be without a protagonist, not to mention the first few chapters are an important part of whether an online novel can be attractive. The author didn't handle this well, so some people will leave negative reviews without thinking.

Forget it, I'm leaving. The name is too long and hard to remember. The key is that I was listening to a book. After listening to about a hundred chapters, I didn't even remember the name of the main character.