Mercenaries and Adventurers

No one has commented, hey, even if they are scolding me, please tell me what you think of my novel! You can say anything.

It's not for nothing that the author couldn't sign the contract, because it was too clumsy. It would have been 25 years since the author wrote this book until the protagonist became a high-level player. Many scenes that can be described in one sentence are repeatedly described. In addition, besides the intense battles, there are still battles, relaxation and work-rest. After reading the 400 chapters, I have no patience. This is either an adventure novel or a chronicle.

I have been listening to it for more than a week. The writing style is very good. The success lies in the details, but the failure lies in the procrastination. There are some contradictions. I can say that there is no excitement. It is a very ordinary novel about another world, with rich content and good setting. It is worth mentioning that there is a book next door with the same different world setting, but with a game background. The highlight is the battle for lords, which has a lot more emotional descriptions than this book. The protagonists of the two books are both rising types, but they have embarked on two different paths. Really nice.

I hope this book will not be finished. Although the author writes the book at a very slow pace, it is very detailed and makes people feel immersed in it. After all, slow work leads to careful work. It is a very good book.

I have read more than 600 chapters. The protagonist is still a knight and his entourage. It is quite interesting. Although the pace is slow, you can see that the protagonist is slowly growing up. Now some online articles are cool, but they look more like the author is bragging rather than telling a story.

If you want to write as plain as water, just like the previous volume, that's fine. In the second volume, it's fine to start taking risks. At least there's some growth in strength, and there's a level division. There aren't more than 500 chapters. Are you a quasi-knight? Sorry, I couldn't stand it anymore and I skipped a few glances. I think it would be fine if you kept doing it like the first volume. It felt so comfortable to watch, just like the farming novel. The beginning of this second volume... What the hell do you think you are a wizard when you write the 1000 chapters of Super Dimensional Warlock? Personally, I think the author's writing is good, but the plot concept is sparse. I can't understand it, so I wish the author good luck with his book. I'll take my leave

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Let me explain here: in the future, daily updates will be changed to once a day, but the number of updated words will remain unchanged, still around 4,000 words per day. The main reason is that it is very troublesome to come up with a name for each chapter, and it can also easily cause the story to be incoherent. After all, the story advances very slowly, and the actual story changes in each chapter are very small, making it uncomfortable for everyone to read. The progress of the plot will be increased in the future. The end of the first volume will probably end after the Harvest Festival in Kendall City. After that, Zhao Ji will leave the Novice Village, officially leave Kendall City (after all, the slime monsters are almost hunted), and be active throughout Kendall County as an adventurer.

Like the title, do you think that based on the world shown in the story now, where should the protagonist's military development go? What I have temporarily arranged is a force system with warrior combat skills as the basic subject, divine blessings as passive enhancement of body functions, magic props as the trump card, and magic weapons and armor as the main combat equipment. There is also an alternative option, which still uses warriors as the main body, and weapons and armors mainly rely on strange gadgets obtained through adventures. I can expand on all kinds of magical weapons and props, and add related adventure stories. Of course, the first system can also be filled with adventure stories. In fact, there is not much difference between the two in recent stories. After all, the protagonist's strength is actually very low, and there is plenty of room for future growth. Finally, I hope everyone can share their thoughts and development directions. After all, any arrangements and changes to the combat system will greatly change the protagonist's story experience. I hope everyone can speak enthusiastically. Thanks.

Good-looking, although the pace is slow, but it is really good-looking