Big Fairy Tree

The author doesn't know how to write a book at all. It's too exaggerated. For example, when I went to kill the Fire Spirit Fox, I actually said that I could smell an unbearable stench from a distance? How is this possible? Unless there is such a strong smell in the nest, let alone an intelligent animal like the spirit fox, it shouldn't smell it. Also, the power of monsters and humans was exaggerated too much from the beginning. Wouldn't it be easy to overturn the world? There is always a growth process. If you don't have that profound skill, you shouldn't have that level of power. The inside is just for foundation building, not for releasing mana... And there are often confusions between inner and outer doors, since many outer doors are written as inner doors. Also, since only those under the age of 20 are admitted every time the gate is opened, then the gate is only opened once every 20 years? This is not reasonable at all... If you read it carefully, you can see that there are too many unreasonable, self-contradictory and exaggerated things in this book. There should always be an outline when writing a book. Based on the outline, it can be unexpected but must be reasonable.

I used scheduled publishing the day before yesterday. After publishing a chapter, some chapter errors appeared on the QQ Reading APP, and one chapter was missing. Fellow Taoists can use QQ on their mobile phones to watch, or log in to Chuangshi and Qidian to watch. I tried it, and except for QQ Reading APP, I can see the missing chapter.

The writing up to this point is really good. We still have to look at the subsequent plot and see how the author writes the supporting characters and villains... I hope they use their brains and make reasonable choices. Maybe it's because I read a lot of martial arts novels. And a good martial arts novel requires everyone to have brains and not be brainless. So I pay more attention to supporting characters and villains. And looking at supporting characters and villains can better understand the author's skills. Hmm.. I wrote some random things. I hope the author can keep up the good work.

The book is okay, the female protagonist is the only downfall. Of course it would be better without a female protagonist.

What's the use of a protagonist who can't walk around women?

I gave it so many votes and recommended it. Get a stamp!

Couldn't stop at all. . . I finished reading it all at once, waiting for the update

How many wives will pig's feet have in the future?

You're too novice, you shouldn't be cultivating immortality, you can just go home and have your children

Originally, I wanted to get it to 70 W words for free. After much deliberation, I still chose to put it on the shelf. The word count has reached this point, so it should be considered fat. However, this work has too many words. Now that I choose to put it on the shelves, I must invert it (that is, set part of the previous chapters as paid chapters). This is a rule that I must abide by. The first subscription is very important, as it determines how far this work can go and how far I can go. I know many fellow Taoists have read the previous chapters. But for the sake of achievement, I still sincerely hope that fellow Taoists will give me a first order. Just like it could have been put on the shelves for 35W, but I did not choose to put it on the shelves. In order to let all book friends see more free chapters, I have stayed up until now. There are very few works with 68W words that have not been put on the shelves in the entire creation. Whether it's the support from fellow Taoists or the encouragement that I have written so many free chapters. I still sincerely request a first order. After writing for so long, I have never asked for anything, and I rarely even ask for recommendation votes. This time I really hope that fellow Taoists will make an initial reservation. It can be regarded as a consolation for my hard work over the past six months. Thank you all.