Thousand Machines Hall

The most annoying thing about fairy tales is that having a group of women there is disgusting.

Haha, just by destroying the whole family, your biggest secret will be revealed. Where is your wisdom? The protagonist is so sure that these people are not traitors. Your wisdom is like this. When I saw the protagonist announcing his identity, I immediately quit! Oh, what's the use of telling your identity? Let the protagonist's senior brothers and sisters be surprised, and then all your secrets will be known! I just laughed!

Are you trying to steal a woman from a boss? Can this clichéd plot be spared? Even though they have a bond, they still take revenge and force the drama. I don't understand how the male protagonist falls in love with the female protagonist? Without any foreshadowing, just because it saved a life? Is this consistent with the male protagonist's early character design?

It's obviously a revenge story, but it has to have a female protagonist, and the female protagonist is not smart enough. She clearly knows that the male protagonist is here for revenge, so the relationship has to be made public

The author's biggest problem is. It's actually a very ordinary plot. It's embarrassing to have to be a clever ghostwriter.

To be honest, as a human being, if you don't do it for yourself, you will be destroyed by heaven and earth. If you, a person who traveled through time, destroyed your family, what does it have to do with you? Just practice hard and become invincible and re-establish order. There is no need to squander your skills and disfigure your face, right?

Write slowly, take your time, readers need to be cultivated

Big egg, come on! I am coming! ! ! ! Support as always

I have been studying fantasy novels for ten years, and this book is already very good. No matter what others say, this plot is really very clever. The author has put a lot of effort into it. For someone who is not good at talking about it, asking him to make up one or two plots may cost him his life. The plots in this book are interlocking and exciting, and the characters' personalities are also very accurate.

Writing about resourcefulness, I suggest that the author read Dao Jun's book, and if he doesn't write about things that women post on their own, they won't be able to write about it. What the hell.