The Heavens Begin from Da Luo Hall

Other aspects are basically above average. What initially attracted me was the label "no heroine", because I personally prefer to read books and take on the role of the protagonist (in fact, I like to imagine what it would be like to be the protagonist). My personal preference is that the protagonist should be free from worries (it's okay to have family members, hide them in a safe place, and be able to lift them up if you become a powerful person, and have a worry-free lifespan. The main reason is that there is less plot) There is no heroine because I personally feel that it is still a single-minded path, and there is no need for dual cultivation. After all, to be honest, it is very rare to see someone who purely relies on dual cultivation. It is probably because there are fewer harems. Also, (●'◡'●), if we can't do it in reality, we naturally hope that it can be done in fantasy. The protagonist can abandon the world and be unrestrained. Naturally, there is no need to find a Taoist companion. After all, even if he has no family, it is not impossible to make friends (I still like this very much. The protagonist has his own friends, but too many women feel a bit artificial. Since there is no female protagonist, we can also write more about men, such as those with extreme personalities or perfect personalities, similar to those senior brothers who are dedicated to the sect) Let's talk about the problem. The main thing is that it is indeed relatively bland. In this regard, the author can try to write a more exciting plot, as if every time the protagonist improves, almost all the enemies become stronger. Occasionally, you can write about someone who can easily defeat the enemy, or directly suppress the enemy with coercion. Since the plot is bland, write some plots that can make people feel that the protagonist has indeed become stronger, with some ups and downs at least (not too much, just a little, otherwise it will become a slap in the face) Also, the character of the protagonist is surprising from time to time, and feels short of immortality (similar to the temperament of the protagonist of Dao Zheng Zhan, who is not surprised at every change). The protagonist has lived for two lives. Since he is pursuing the Dao, he should naturally know novels and myths, and he has met Taichu Taoist. Don't write about being surprised when you enter the world with some relatively small stimulations. Another reason why it is dull is that when the critical moment comes, the author's description is not enough, not urgent enough, and the writing does not have a sense of grandeur, so the overall situation seems to have been low and low. This point still needs to practice writing skills (this is what I can think of for now. If the author sees it, he can also reply and interact more with readers. After all, those who can read it are acceptable, and naturally willing to continue to support)

Visualize nothingness, God merges with nothingness, out of nothing comes a Qi, evolves, accommodates endless concepts in one Qi, swallows the body, evolves the Tao, the Tao is infinite, evolves and gives birth to the only true blood, so there is the spirit, energy, spirit, name of three yuan, the three yuan transforms into Tao, obtains the immortal essence, becomes the true self, the true self gathers the Tao results, is the Tao, the Tao, I accept all the heavens and ten thousand ways, realize the Tao for me, God is the same as the Tao.

Witches, there are people in heaven and earth, and they are one and the same, supporting each other, relieving illness, resolving confusion, resolving disasters, and relieving all pain. He is a witch who controls etiquette and upholds traditions so that the human race can continue to spread throughout the Nine Provinces.

Why did Blue Star give that woman the Five Qi Thief Yin Technique? Even though that woman had nothing to do with him, he had to give it to her.

There is no heroine anymore, why should I write about a woman? If I write it, I can only enjoy it, and I can't describe it in detail. It's better not to write this kind of plot. Don't say that the protagonist is a eunuch, even if he is a eunuch, you can write it as having this ability.

Can anyone tell me what you wrote? There are a lot of words that I can't understand. You have to stay there for 20 years. Why do you stay there for 20 years? Just practice elixirs! Why do you write so widely?

The author is average. The protagonist seeks death from the very beginning, and there is a saying that life is like being fucked by a strong girl. If you can't resist, you can only adapt. At the beginning of the game, the protagonist is suspicious that this Daluo Palace is like the main god's space. And take action, testing with the furnace of your own soul. But can you please be smarter? Not to mention that the protagonist at the beginning is a mortal, this is not a chat group, and the people in it are not strong at the beginning. Yours is a force or organization that has been developing for who knows how long. There are many powers in it. Is it useful for the protagonist, a mortal who has just started the game, to die like this? I couldn't resist anymore. You can only obey and adapt to the flow, and wait until you grow up. Moreover, the protagonist wants to die even if he wants to die, not to mention whether the protagonist can understand the information in the decomposition, not to mention using the furnace. Just saying that there is so much information contained in it, can he, a mortal, bear it? The author, you start to lose your wits and lack of brains from the beginning, which is quite enjoyable for newcomers. But for me, a veteran who has read on several platforms and has been reading for a very long time, I can't read it.

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The writing of the second world is too detailed, making people irritated to watch, and there is no climax. The rest may be exciting, but if you can't stick to it, what's the use.

The progress is a bit slow. This is Zhu Tianwen. Don't be stuck in one world for too long.