Revolution, Time Traveler

It is recommended that the author delete the introduction and completely sell dog meat in sheep's clothing.

I just saw Yangshu at Qidian. I didn't expect that there would be a female protagonist. It's okay to have a female protagonist. I didn't expect that she was a wife or a widow of a comrade in arms! What? Just deceiving your comrades like this? Tie Zhan: Tsk, tsk, tsk, you are really my good brother! What kind of revolution are you trying to revolutionize?

Are there any negative five stars? Even one star is enough to praise it.

Alas, the writing is too poor and the emotional scenes are too confusing. My wife, you know how to take care of brothers in life and death.

Xu Ye saw this scene and shouted: "Shield soldiers defend, bombardiers, be ready to drop bombs." Xu Ye walked to the 500 bombardiers, took an iron can grenade like the soldiers, and lit the fuse on it.

Regarding marrying the Iron Lady, I think it is very unreasonable. The Iron Lady is the eldest brother's wife and the protagonist is a modern one. How could this happen? Co-authored by After your eldest brother dies, you can marry his wife. You can also directly create a female character, whoever is your childhood sweetheart or whatever.

Before leaving for the expedition, Xu Ye suddenly thought of the Iron Lady. So I came to the door of Shazhou Textile Factory. "Why are you here?" Iron Lady's heart beat violently when she saw Xu Ye in armor. Xu Ye stood at the door of the textile factory, looked at the Iron Lady and smiled: "I'm going to fight, so I want to see you before I leave."

It's okay to just go back in time at the beginning, but the whole sentence is illogical and disgusting.

Your worldview setting is very contradictory. How could there be Qin Shihuang after more than a thousand years of Xia, Shang and Zhou? According to your historical line, it should be the 17.8Th century now. How to set it in the West? What a big loophole

How can I say that the progress has become a bit faster?