Days of Future Past

Even if many details are not rigorous, the key is what is described in Chapter 18? Imperial law? The great emperors and ancient emperors are all collectively referred to as the laws of the imperial way. (Original text: The five secret realms are perfectly integrated into one, turning into cocoons of the Dao, giving birth to the laws of the Imperial Dao) Even in the Ancient Immortal Era, it was called the Supreme Law. According to the author, it is directly the Law of the Emperor? ? , The quasi-immortal emperors are still just surrounded by the glory of the emperor's will. Only when they become immortal emperors can they be regarded as the laws of the emperor. There is also the Holy Land of Yaoguang. The author said that the Holy Lord of Yaoguang doesn't know that he is from a lineage of ruthless people? ? Whether he has read the book carefully or not, the entire high-level officials of Yaoguang Holy Land know that he is a ruthless person, but the disciples at the bottom do not know. Yaoguang Holy Lady didn't know this in the early stage, but later she overheard a conversation between an elder and Yaoguang Holy Son, and found out that Yaoguang Holy Land had long since ceased to exist, and that the entire Yaoguang Holy Land had long been replaced by ruthless people. Only then did the Holy Lady of Fluttering Light escape. I can't remember the original text very clearly, but it also said that the former Holy Land of Shaking Light was like an old man under the setting sun. Suddenly one day, a majestic life energy was injected into it, (The ruthless people move into the Holy Land of Shaking Light, and indirectly control all the high-level officials of the Holy Land.) Generation after generation, the ruthless people have long been part of the ruthless lineage. The author's inference is also ridiculous, saying that the Holy Lord Yaoguang doesn't know that he is from the ruthless lineage, and that the dragon-marked black gold cauldron of the ruthless lineage was dug out? ? Anyone who has read the original work will not write a bunch of nonsense here. The dragon-patterned black gold cauldron was forged by the ruthless Empress herself, and was given to the people in that village in order to repay the kindness the people in the village had shown her and her brother when they were young (at the same time, he passed down the Heaven Swallowing Demon Technique and the Immortal Heaven Technique to help them practice) But the people in the village are no longer the original group of simple villagers, they are just descendants. A man suddenly possesses supreme strength, along with an extremely powerful imperial weapon. Most of his training is in the Heaven-Swallowing Demon Technique. His ambitions grow bigger and bigger, and he has a lineage of ruthless people who later become notorious and everyone wants to beat him up. (The ruthless man was in a state of awakening in his first four lives. During his reign, he killed the imperial fire spirit and leveled the mountains with one sword. However, he did not deal with the people in that village. Even though the people in the village had done bad things and were notorious, and even brought his own reputation, the ruthless person still did not deal with them. He only repaid the kindness he had when he was young.) What else does the author say, Holy Lord Yaoguang doesn't know that he is from a lineage of ruthless people? It's really 666. The original black gold cauldron with dragon pattern is not so familiar. Please read the original text carefully and don't just write a fan and make your own inferences without understanding the original text.

Those of you comments that I don't like will be deleted, so just give it one star. I just want to keep writing in a happy mood. Let's understand each other. I'll give you one star and I'll delete my book review. Everyone will feel better, okay?

Hua Yunfei gives people a good feeling, and he likes to be in a daze. Well, although it is thinking for him, it still feels cute. Moreover, he does not have the particularly angry idea of ​​changing his destiny. Instead, he thinks about life, the future, and how to deal with destiny. In the end, he just wants to protect his home and family.

As a result, I was speechless later on. During the conversation with Old Man Zhang and the Black Emperor, he was completely like a middle school student. He showed off that he knew many secrets and even wanted to tell the story of the Black Emperor's previous life. Old Man Zhang believed that he had the ability to predict the future. It's not prudent to seek your own death. Author, you can poison people to death if you write in such a neutral way. Especially for this kind of fan fiction, it is inherently difficult for readers to compare with the original work. If the writing is not careful enough, it will be very annoying. I don't ask you to write with the style of Hua Yunfei in the original novel, but at least it shouldn't be too bad!

Just follow the old rules and give you one star😍

The protagonist's name is actually three characters and the book title is only seven characters. There is no sense of immersion at all. Bad review. Anyway, one star, if you are not convinced, just hold it in.

The author thinks that his writing skills are very good, but using such an inscrutable way of writing to describe a monk in the Wheel and Sea Realm is too watery and poisonous. What annoys me the most is this way of writing. He writes about a monk who cannot be reached by a saint. It makes him seem so inscrutable. Written in this way, the protagonist of the manuscript seems to be very weak.

The early stage is average, but the middle and late stages are very exciting, and the writing is particularly touching. The author is also very innovative. For example, the general world view is very innovative, and the origin of the system and the protagonist's life experience are all explained. The current main line should be to fight against the dark chaos. Also, I have seen many comments about the problem of the female protagonist in the early stage, but I Personally, at present, the heroine's role will be very few after the protagonist ascends to the starry sky. Now the author should be considered to be getting better. This Zhetian fanfic is also a rare masterpiece. I personally think that if the author continues to wear it in this state, it will be regarded as fairy grass. Finally, the author has to give it a big boost💪, keep updating and take care of your health. "Don't mess up"

I don't know if I remember it wrong, but it seems to be written in the original text Medicine King, The little medicine king is divided into 20,000 and 30,000 years and can last about 400 years. There are also great medicine kings (mature medicine kings) that are tens of thousands of years old and can last about 800 years. It was mentioned later that Zishan and the Kunlun Mountains of the earth are mature medicine kings that are at least hundreds of thousands of years old, and most of them are about 200,000 years old. The efficacy is equivalent to that of mature dragon loach, and its life span can be extended to about 800 years. The original text seems to be that a great sage from the ancient royal family borrowed the Ji Dao Emperor's weapon from Kunzhou to fight with the Holy Emperor Douzhan. Later, he was defeated. He was afraid of being liquidated by the Holy Emperor Douzhan, so he lost a mature dragon loach. (There are also several small dragon loaches in Yaochi Holy Land. I can't remember how long they can extend life. If they are bled, they should be able to extend life by more than 50 years. If eaten whole, they should have an effect of about 200 years.) Therefore, since the King of Medicines written by the author is over 100,000 years old, the lifespan of the benchmark is about 800 years, not 400 years.

I usually don't complain about it. You cover the sky, you cut a stone to cut out double pupils, and you are recognized by passers-by! , If you show the double pupils to the Tianzun at the beginning of the era, they will not be able to recognize what it is. Except for Cao Yusheng, the Immortal Emperor, and Zhang Bairen know what the double pupils are. The most poisonous thing is that you also mention the double pupils alongside the Holy Body and so on, saying that there must have been double pupils in this era, and they have not risen. How funny? After the end of the chaotic ancient times, not a single double-pupil was born. There was no such thing in the Zhetian Era. Well, you just opened your mouth and said it was born. Why didn't you write about cutting stones to cut the Supreme Bone and the seedlings of the World Tree? First of all, the double pupil is based on the bloodline of the Immortal King's parent and child. If you don't die, you will become an Immortal King. And the step-by-step training of the Supreme Bone is almost certain to be the Supreme. After a sword of God's will, do you tell me that double pupil can still be born in the human world? It really made me laugh. All the concepts and legends about double pupil in the last era have been buried. You still say that passers-by in Zhetian can recognize double pupil? If I don't talk about the issue of God's will, can they recognize it? If you write that this is something that has been buried in the soil for countless years and seems to be from the last era, I will not complain about you! ! ! ! !