The Immortal Cultivating Family with the Gate of Time and Space

In the original setting, Wan Dongling and Meng Ximing were husband and wife in their previous life. They accidentally obtained two books (the soul book and the body book) and came to this world unexpectedly. I originally wanted to develop the relationship between the two bit by bit, but I didn't expect that everyone didn't like it and was scolded as a licker. Of course, it is probably due to my own fault. I am not strong enough to write with that kind of effect. I would like to apologize to everyone, and to avoid the embarrassment of writing in the future, I will reduce the plot of Wan Dongling. It's my fault that makes everyone unhappy. I will pay attention to it in the future. At the same time, this book is not a stud book, not a stud book. The reason why Meng Ximing licked Wan Dongling was not love at first sight or brainlessness. There was a reason. They were husband and wife in their previous life.

Regarding the family, I think it was well written, but the character of the 19-year-old protagonist is like that of a 13- or 13-year-old child. In that family background, where the elders are all old foxes, the protagonist looks like a retard, and the heroine and the heroine behave like a housewife, like a 19-year-old. That's it, Kirinzi, those old foxes are still satisfied. There are generally two types of family novels. One type is about one person achieving enlightenment, which requires a very detailed description of the protagonist. The other type focuses on the family. The protagonist is only one of the important figures. Multiple characters need to be portrayed and the protagonist is expected to mature. I personally think the second type is more suitable. After all, there is no shortage of resources.

I'm hungry, my forehead is beautiful and beautiful, I'm hungry again and again

The development is a bit too slow, isn't it? It won't take chapter 100 to build the foundation, is it? Do you plan to be pressed until the book is finished?

Faster, faster, faster, I hope to enter the plane invasion you mentioned as soon as possible

The writing is there, but it's short and weak.

I have nothing to say, just a recommendation.

I like the subject matter very much, but it's a pity that I failed to write it.

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The quality is also good, tens of thousands of favorites and likes are no problem.