Earth's First Sword

The seven realms of novels! Which one have you arrived at? The seven realms of novels! You got to that one. Obsession period: As the name suggests, when you first enter the world of novels, you will be extremely obsessed with a novel. Whenever you have free time, you will read the novel, and the time spent reading the novel will become longer and longer. Fanatical stage: The state after the entranced stage is no longer enough to satisfy you just by reading novels. You often materialize novels, and occasionally your dreams are all about the world of novels. Addiction period: At this stage, you are already a top-notch master in the novel world and you can no longer satisfy yourself with one novel. You often read two or three novels at the same time, and when you are a complete novel, you will read four or five novels at the same time. Book-hunting period: At this point, one can be called a first-class expert in the novel world. The number of novels he has read is no less than double digits. The ordinary novels have satisfied him and he begins to pay attention to classic novels. Reading novels is no longer limited to a range of fairy tales, fantasy cities, and all major classics. Book-short period: At this stage, the novel can already be called the overlord. Ordinary novels are dismissive. If you open a new account and read the first twenty chapters, you will know whether the novel has the qualifications to become a god (note: it is not 100% accurate, it can only be said to be highly credible). Calm period: In this state, you can be called an emperor. Whether you read the novel or not is all a matter of thought. You can read the novel if you want to, and it can no longer influence you. If you are not satisfied with it, you can forget it and give up without even a trace of hesitation. You will never look back afterwards. The state is so powerful and terrifying. (Note: The credibility of predicting whether a new novel has the qualifications to become a god is much higher than the previous level) Antique Period: This state has become a god. All the legendary figures in the novel world, Shenlong, have the ability to write books (Note: Of course, we will not say that a completed book is a masterpiece. After all, this is the state of reading novels, not writing trumpets). Nine of the ten people who recommended the book read it and the remaining one could not help themselves because they had not read it yet. There is no doubt that the predicted book will come true. This realm of gods also has the legendary eighth realm of eternity, but that realm is too heaven-defying and is not tolerated by the laws of heaven in novels, so it cannot be expressed clearly. Maybe it is because of my lack of strength. No one can express it clearly except those in the eighth realm.

The protagonist is just a ***, he has no brains in doing things, he only knows how to rush, and he doesn't look at the difference in strength. He just rushes without thinking. Doesn't it take talent to cultivate immortality? ? ? The protagonist used the immortal cultivation technique that he saw on the Internet. As mentioned at the beginning, the protagonist's qualifications are not outstanding, but as soon as he started practicing, he took off instantly. Is this a slap in the face? People who have been practicing since childhood are not as fast as the protagonist. Let alone the techniques, there are so many sects, but there are no awesome techniques? Let's talk about rebirth. I feel like your rebirth is of little use. Hasn't there been any opportunity for you in more than ten years? The golden elixir has been fighting against a virtual elixir for so long. This golden elixir is really watery. It has been cultivated since childhood. I have said it myself. It is a change in quality. Is it really okay for the author to slap himself in the face all the time? As for your parents refusing to cultivate immortality, increase life span and maintain youth, are you kidding me? There is also the Heavenly Sword, which is so powerful that it can take down a mountain. This really makes me laugh to death. The weapon I am researching can only take down a mountain. The author wrote so many poisonous points that it was really unbearable.

The fight scenes were poorly written. The beginning of the book was great, but these few fight scenes were beyond terrible. Personally, I feel that there are too many descriptions of fighting, or maybe it's not well written, and I really don't want to read any more. I hope the fighting descriptions will be strengthened as soon as possible.

First of all, the protagonist is a reborn person who knows some things, objects, and people in the future, which plays a role in the protagonist meeting a backer in Wudang Mountain. The character portrayal is also very careful. Personally, I feel that in the past three years, there has been a lack of some emotions, such as parents, and some interactions between the three masters and apprentices. Although the Taoist practice is pure, there are also daily activities. Here are some of my suggestions: 1. If the heroine is silent, I hope there will be only one heroine. Or no heroine is needed. Never have a harem or have affairs with many female partners at the same time. Most readers are tired of harem studs by now. 2. I hope that the character and image of the characters can be written more realistically. Although it is very satisfying to have the villain and mentally retarded protagonist slap in the face, I personally feel that a person who can be a boss is not mentally retarded. Writing more realistically will make the book more exciting and more enjoyable to watch. 3. If the author has more energy, he hopes that foreign power systems can use the Western magic system, each with its own characteristics. 4. The author is requested to ensure the quality and quantity of this article and update it frequently. [Emot=default,13/] Please forgive me if I am wrong, this is just my personal opinion. [Emot=default,01/]

There are no violations in the plot and content of this book. The blocked chapters were automatically blocked due to the Dianniang keyword system upgrade. It was purely an accident. We have actively contacted the website to unblock it. But in this special period, a large number of works need to be reviewed one by one. The editors are probably crazy busy, and the unblocking time may be longer or shorter. Dear readers who have just read the book, I can only sincerely apologize for the inconvenience caused to you. As an author, I am actually more depressed than all the new readers at this time. To be honest, my mentality is not good. After all, the work I have worked hard to polish does not rely on any side plot to gain attention, but it is beaten to death by the blocking system. It feels very uncomfortable... However, standardization of online literature is a good thing. As a practitioner, I accept the supervision of websites and readers calmly. I hope that the accidentally damaged chapters will be unblocked soon. Happy reading, everyone~ If you want to know what the blocked chapters are about, just ask me in the group~

There's nothing interesting about it except for the main character, Galaxy. It is no different from other time travel novels about cultivating immortals. Boring. . .

For some popular memes and some slightly silly dialogues, the senior sister who likes emoticons, the character creation is still very full. Being able to remember many people, and being able to do so is a good indication of the author's skills, and the establishment of a clear world view. If the world really changes, common sense should be as follows What changes, these have a strong sense of substitution. I should have done some thinking after going out, and the update speed is also very good. As the second book, the quality is very high. Of course, in my opinion, there are some shortcomings. First, in the early stage, when the senior sister changed jobs and became Meng Po, I think the foreshadowing was It's not enough. The plots related to them only involve a few encounters. Although there is a life-saving plot, the span is a bit too big. There may be some plots that have not been unfolded later. This is how I feel now, but Wang Sheng didn't even look at Po Meng when he broke through the underworld. This seems a bit heartless. I think it has some negative impact on the protagonist's image, but at the same time, I also think this plot is quite attractive. In times of crisis, there are always people who choose to sacrifice themselves. This is a great righteousness and should be exciting. This makes the storyline more complete. The second one is the Earth Chapter's plot of infiltrating other countries on Earth. It's a little too detailed. The plot itself is a bit cliche. In addition, there are not many people who can fight. There is no suspense about the outcome of the battle. It seems a bit flat. The Universe Chapter has begun. I will continue to watch. Come on! Come on!

First of all, I like the setting of this book very much. However, during the reading process, I also discovered several shortcomings. These shortcomings are enough to make this book that should be a big hit look dim. ① For the sake of national stability, there are places in the setting that obviously violate logic. This is the place that is enough to persuade many people to quit. This is where the spiritual energy is revived. The author did not choose to popularize the exercises on a large scale. Even if they were popularized, they would only popularize non-lethal exercises. One thing that is certain is that the author's starting point is good and is to stabilize society. However, if you think about reality a little bit, this is 100% impossible to achieve. On the contrary, it will cause the country to collapse rapidly, new forces to rise rapidly, and people will inevitably be in ruins. In addition, although Kung Fu is powerful, it can never be compared to firearms. They are obviously different, because Kung Fu requires talent and requires hard work and slow cultivation. It is a part of oneself. However, firearms are different. They are given to bad guys and threaten unarmed ordinary people. Their harm comes from simplicity and speed. Of course, they also have the same thing, that is, lethality. The solution is the police. Where do the police come from? They come from the people. Therefore, only if all the people learn the exercises can we train a police force capable of safeguarding national security in the shortest possible time. Don't be afraid of bad people, because bad people can never be eliminated. Be afraid of people who have not eliminated bad people. If, as the author assumes, except for Taoism, Buddhism, and a few cultivating families, it is illegal for others to practice, then bad people will be everywhere, that is, except for the above sects, everyone else is a bad person. Well, the author himself can think of the consequences. Even if they don't have any skills, it will be enough to destroy the entire country. Therefore, for novels that are deviated from normal logic, all that is left is the writing style. To be honest, spelling out the writing style is thankless. ②The author's setting of parents and friends. The book states that they do not want to practice, which is completely contrary to human nature. Let me ask, in the general environment of spiritual recovery, who doesn't want to practice, who doesn't want to learn new things, and who doesn't want to live a few more years. Therefore, the setting here seems out of place, like a lump in the throat. Maybe the author wanted to make it easy to write. After all, his parents and friends are practitioners, so it would be difficult to write a book. However, the author should use a tactful way of rejection, for example, because he has no talent for cultivation, for example, he is past the best age for cultivation. For example, write down some adventures for your parents, briefly describe what will happen in a few years, and leave a foreshadowing for you to pull out when you are stuck. ③Novel should never deviate from two points. First, reasonable logic. Second, basic human nature. If you are separated, you will definitely lack a sense of substitution.

Why am I suddenly favored by the first sword? I really plan to make it rain and dew, haha, tui~ Scumbag, hurry up and update me, senior brother! ! !

The part about Chi Wen was really poisonous to me... How could there be such a stupid girl... Logically speaking, she was attacked and killed by the organization, and she should have realized her mistake after she was rescued. Why did she act like it was none of my business when Pig's Feet interrogated her, and said that Pig's Feet was a liar... Why did the author write like this? Why the hell is this, I don't understand. Didn't you write that she knew she was wrong and corrected it? I have to write someone who deserves a beating... Am I really speechless... Or did the author just have no idea and just increase the number of words? I was also drunk. Logically speaking, the previous part was pretty good and the world view was pretty good. It wasn't a piece of writing about pig's feet getting the heaven-defying skills right away, but that part successfully persuaded me to quit. It's really poisonous. Fellow Taoists, there are many places in the book. Farewell!