Great Sui State Master

It goes without saying much about the advantages of this book. Everyone has seen it in the comment section. I mainly talk about the shortcomings. First, the author's thinking is not deep enough and the distribution of writing style is not reasonable enough. I know that the author wants to write about the protagonist's growth from a teenager, and I have read the author's previous books, but the book's thoughts on society and interests are still a bit shallow, which leads to frequent quarrels in book reviews. For example, in the case of Zuo Qianhu and the Chen family, the author wanted to create a police officer who enforces the law impartially and believes in procedural justice, but he did not write about the follow-up to the Chen family case. Did he hold the Chen family accountable? This makes people's perception of him directly change from a selfless and cold policeman to a lackey who bullies the weak and fears the strong, and the protagonist's behavior does not have enough thinking support. Silly Baitian, Holy Mother, simple, young, a disciple of a great demon sect, even if he is familiar with Confucian classics, he should not have this attitude towards the court and fame. A person has seen the higher sky. For example, if you are thrown back to the Qing Dynasty now, a young man with extraordinary power, you can either change the world, or choose to be out of sight and out of mind, or lose your heart and surrender yourself. What is the choice of the protagonist? Second, although many story authors try hard to express their pursuit of cultivating morality before cultivating Taoism, it is obvious that that kind of person is the spirit of heaven and earth, and all things good and evil must be judged by human morality, which is now outdated. In other words, it is full of loopholes. If this book was written more than ten years ago, I would still be okay with it. The problem is that now everyone has read a lot of books and has relatively mature considerations about the worldview of good and evil, so the author's setting is obviously a bit naive. For example, why are humans the spirits of heaven and earth? Why can monsters eat each other? No matter how much they eat, there will be no punishment from heaven, but cannibalism is not allowed? It cannot give a logically complete world view. Unless the reader has no brains, how can he continue reading? Third, sometimes in order to highlight morality, the stories designed by the author can be said to insult the IQ. The fox demon actually plans to sacrifice his own cultivation in order to save a person he just met? I believe that there are people in the world who can donate their corneas for children, but I don't believe that a person can donate his kidneys just to wipe a stranger's butt. Looking at that story based on the current situation, someone went out to fool around, got AIDS, and then heard that someone next door had a matched cell that could cure the disease. He asked someone to steal it and was unwilling to compensate the other person. Then the thief became so jealous of the wealth that he made the person next door suffer from mental failure. In the end, he was ready to kill and rob, but was stopped by another student. Then the student was willing to cut out his kidney to treat this stranger? Do you dare to tell more nonsense? Fourth, it is too deliberate to create a joke. How stupid is the protagonist's master to suffer the hardships on his own, while his disciples enjoy the blessings? It's enough to make fun of me once or twice, but do you treat readers like fools like this every day? It's generous for the protagonist to give up his own cultivation to save a stranger. Why doesn't he think about his master's hard work in refining medicine and building a foundation for him? Why can't you find a way to restore your master's cultivation? His master taught him exercises and protected him from disasters. What did he do for his master? He is as dear to outsiders as a holy mother, but to his own master, he can still just throw him on the road, step on him a few times and pretend that nothing happened? Oh, and his family, by the way. How could a Taoist not teach his family some ways to strengthen their body and practice their Qi? Why can't he teach his sister how to read and write? Forget about morality, is this a human being? Fifth, it can be seen that the author made reference to Shushan and A Chinese Ghost Story in the beginning of the story, but ignored the historical background of these two works. Both stories are in the context of a weak country in reality. The story has a strong sense of fate and the hopelessness of the right path, just like the super-powerful Japanese emperor in the storm. This was reasonable at that time, but is our country now at that time? It's not too much to say that the country is rich and the people are strong, right? Which Chinese still thinks that Japan can surpass China? Under these conditions, the author's story and characters contradict this setting. How can the work be written well? Throughout the book, the author's thoughts show strange distortions and contradictions, and the logic is also chaotic. Excellent authors construct their works based on their own complete and clear worldview. The author of this book is somewhat conceited, but in reality he is not high-minded but his hands are low. I advise the author not to deal with such a big topic as morality. If you can't handle this topic, if your intention is smaller, you may still be able to write more comprehensively. It's not like now, if you want to build a thatched house into a skyscraper, it will leak air everywhere, which is neither fish nor fowl.

I really don't understand why no one reads such a beautiful book, but so many people read the predecessor Wushuang. Is it because this book is not suitable for novices?

At that moment, I ascended to immortality, Not for longevity, just for your peace and happiness. At that moment, I raised my wind horse, Not to pray for blessings, just to wait for your arrival. On that day, a mani pile was built, Not for the sake of attainment, just for the sake of casting stones in the inner lake. That night, I listened to Sanskrit singing all night long, Not for enlightenment, just to find your breath. That day, I closed my eyes in the fragrant mist of the Sutra Hall, Suddenly I heard you chanting the true words in the scriptures. That month, I shook all the prayer wheels, Not for salvation, just to touch your fingertips. That year, I kowtowed and prostrated on the mountain road, Not for the audience, just for the warmth of you. In that life, I walked around mountains, rivers, and pagodas, Not for cultivating the afterlife, just for meeting each other on the way.

After I finished pre-ordering the first White Wolf, I didn't pay attention to the next book Weapon Master by Dongfeng (it seems to have been taken off the shelves). After reading the latest version of Er Pang tomorrow, the book was out of stock, so I planned to read the second version of White Wolf. Then I saw that there is a new book in Dongfeng (the ones I have read in the past few days are new to me), so I read it. To be honest, I was not used to it at first. Maybe the beginning is not as enthusiastic as the previous White Wolf, but I patiently read it and found that it was getting better and better. I ended up being fascinated by the online class. After several sessions, I was beaten up by the teacher . When I saw it on the shelf, I ordered it all to support it. It was not expensive anyway. Finally, I wish Chunfeng's book gets better and better (I will post pictures to prove that there is no fraud There is a delay in the pictures)

The writing is very good. I like ordinary pursuit of small kindness. For me, big principles are not as important as small doctrines. Living should be happy and free. Isn't it good to be happy every day? Why do you let yourself live so complexly? Miscellaneous, the world likes Li Ziqi's life. Doesn't she simply live in her own world? The world looks up to her, but they dare not pursue her. She has locked the shackles by herself, thinking of making a lot of money, but what next? Will you be happy? In fact, Ma is also a good example, but if others dare to let go, he can let go of the group he built by himself and leave the stage to more suitable young people. He has lived the life he likes, but if you think about it from another perspective, if the person sitting in that position is you or me, will we make the same decision as him? If possible, I hope that I will not live in a world that I don't like in the future. Ordinary, for me, is good. What I long for is ordinary little days. What do you desire?

It's a great book. I came here for its fairy tales, but after reading Chapter 384 of yours, I realized that Yue Rou has the meaning of a harem. If so, I will give up the book. It's just for this book, not a harem story. I look forward to your next update. If it means a harem, I will give up the book.

This book is okay, but there is too much nonsense. Every time you make sense, you and I will lose a lot of words. It's annoying to watch. Sometimes it's okay to be reasonable. But to be reasonable when we just get started is really uncomfortable.

I saw this book a few times when I was not reading it, but I didn't read it because it was labeled as martial arts. I clicked in to read the introduction one time and found out that it was "selling sheep's meat to dogs", so I read on and found that this book is quite interesting. Good luck to the author! ! ! !

I just read the book without reading the reviews. The more I read, the less enjoyable it becomes. A lot of the content in it is plot for the sake of plot, and the conflict between the characters and the plot is serious. Let's not talk about Captain Zuo's stiffness. The plot of the tree demon kidnapping four scholars is inexplicable. Originally, this formation relied on human energy to maintain it. It is understandable that the tree demon grabbed passers-by to maintain the array after several bandits died. But catching passers-by and maintaining the magic circle is harmful to people, but because it is the dryad raised by the protagonist, and the four scholars are still alive, the story is turned over without even a word of blame. Yan Chixia and Captain Zuo, who had been fighting the tree demon for a long time, actually immediately started eating with the tree demon with a smile on their faces. I described the three views of the protagonist in such a long paragraph before, saying that the protagonist hates evil as much as he hates it, and loves the people as much as his son. How come this is a double standard? Seeing this, I was really embarrassed to open the door for my mother. I was so embarrassed. Of course, you may as well not say in the book that the tree demon captures the scholar to absorb his energy. Then may I ask why the dryad captured the fourth scholar and kept him for several months? To make the protagonist conflict with the plot? No matter how you explain it, it makes people feel that it is a plot for the sake of plot, and there is no logic at all. Isn't this plot just to create an extra harem for the protagonist? Then you go to Min Yuerou. In the woods, people ask you if you want to marry, and you understand what they want. Don't deny, don't reject. Hesitant. After that, I stayed at other people's homes again and again. Especially after going to see the monkeys and coming back, you took the initiative to live in other people's homes. Instead of staying at your apprentice's home, you went to the home of a girl who was interested in you. Do you understand if you don't care about others and avoid suspicion? If a girl really talks about matchmaking but shirks it, then you should behave in a nonchalant manner! When I met Mrs. Bones who was transformed from painted skin, I really couldn't stand it anymore. The protagonist had harmed many people before accepting Huapi. Huapi deceived Red Fox and escaped from Qixia Mountain, which shows that she is cunning and cunning. As a result, when I met Madam Bone transformed from painted skin again, I hesitated. Just because she was a girl and said she wanted to marry you, she refused to accept the demon? In the past, I always portrayed the protagonist's ability to distinguish right from wrong, good and evil, but now it doesn't work when it comes to a female character?

The main story is okay, but the dungeons are awkward. It's okay for enlightenment, but it's a test for old bookworms. It's all familiar stories, Strange Beasts, Nie Xiaoqian, Painted Skin, etc. Not enough. But the humor and writing style are still good! I've tried my best, but it's still awkward. The benevolent sees benevolence, the wise see wisdom, and do not express conclusions.