I Build Jade Capital with the Netherworld

Came here after watching the author's food fireworks. The overall evaluation of this book so far is between hay and grain. The main reason is that it has a good imagination and interesting setting. The protagonist travels to a fairy in the book and has a low-dimensional underworld where he can kill evil spirits and send people to reincarnation. The problem is that the character of the protagonist is fragmented, the logic of the behavior is contradictory, and people who watch it are confused. After the refreshing setting in the early stages of this book, the book returns to the old path of cultivating immortality in the traditional underworld, practicing and upgrading, killing people and stealing goods, with nothing new. If the author maintains the rhythm of writing like the previous book, using wind and ghosts to teach people, using foxes and ghosts to satirize people's hearts, using the protagonist to perfect the world and the underworld as the main line to string together small stories from a Chinese chat room, write about local customs and customs, describe the world and people's hearts, and build a world view with every detail, it should be more interesting.

Lightning protection! The beginning is okay, but in the middle, the cancer spreads directly!

The writing is too blunt, without any foreshadowing.

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What the hell is this written? The more I read it, the more disgusting it becomes.

You must persist, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on

If you are young, don't fight; if you are poor, don't be unreasonable; if you have no money, don't join the crowd; if you speak softly, don't persuade others; if you are weak, don't bear heavy burdens; if you are in trouble, don't look for relatives; when hardships are over and joy comes, let's talk about the journey!

Starting from the encounter with the female ghost, I first fight for women's rights and then express my mother's heart. Was it written by a female author?

It is recommended that the author add a few more sentences under the introduction, such as, immortals in books, low-latitude underworld, low-latitude fairy world, refining falsehoods into reality, heavens in books, novelist, etc., To make it more attractive, because the original introduction is a bit vague and less attractive.

It's a pity that I don't write anymore. In the past ten years or so, there have only been a few novels on the Internet about fairy tales and monsters, where false worlds come true, and about magical rituals.