I Can Identify Everything, but the Information is Wrong

Speaking of which, what is the talent of a normal person? I said earlier that Jianghu has been nothing more than a third-rate player for more than ten years. Boss Zhang is a first-rater, but Liu is a second-rater. Is that because he is gifted? The protagonist becomes a first-rate master and is pushed into the sect to become a handyman Just think that the protagonist is as stupid as a pig, and can barely keep up with others by eating elixirs and spiritual food that have been transformed by the system, and then he turns around and beats up a grandmaster's maid who "surpasses most ordinary masters"? The owner of the maid, Mr. Shang, and Brother Han are both under the third steward, and Han has already said that he is not afraid of Mr. Shang, but! Han is just a master It feels like it's just a box set. No matter how high the protagonist's cultivation level is, there will always be new peers who are stronger than him, and their combat power is unreasonable. A mortal can destroy the world in more than ten years, a third-rate man can beat a dozen strong men with swords, and a grandmaster can't even take a move from a Qi warrior. If a few more people from this sect go down the mountain, everyone in the world will panic. If the sect breaks out, I don't know how they will survive.

The first time was Xiaoyue's father, the second time was when he was taken away to take prisoners, and the third time was when a deus ex machina was used to force the granddaughter of an elder to be captured, and then the elder in the foundation building stage was asked to capture the protagonist, who obviously relied on the infinite resources of the illusion. Is it because he is afraid that the protagonist will rely on unlimited resources to reach the golden elixir without going out, so he does this?

The most basic logic is broken. How can a cheat that is so powerful be captured and used as a mining slave? ? ? ? ? ? ? Idiot, right? Brother. The plug-in is so powerful, so you need to make yourself feel safe as soon as possible. The whole family is dead, no effort at all, just an ordinary person, who can't even eat enough for his mother, and still wandering around the world so carelessly, isn't his brain funny? The first thing a normal time traveler does is always collect information, understand the world, eat enough to create favorable conditions, and follow others when there is shit on his head and he can't even eat enough. He was even more speechless after that. What a soul-hiding flower. Eat one of the one-year skills. After you get the inner strength and mental method, eat 10,000 of them first. Furthermore, a family that was only at the 4th level of the weapon refining stage had to kill five hundred people every three months just to dig a mine, and this family had existed for hundreds of years. A service in capital letters. Four to five hundred every three months, more than 5,000 in three years. As long as there are some promising ones who are successful in Qi training, he does not want to think about his tragic fate and go back to settle accounts with this family. Writing blindly.

After leaving Jade Dragon Continent, I thought the excitement had become more exciting. Seeing such an inexplicable Mei Fairy was really disgusting, and there were so many chapters that I had just scratched the surface of before and it was not awkward to jump through. There was so much writing at the beginning, but what the hell was written? It was all a crooked way, using people's souls to plant trees, right? In the beginning, the protagonist did not eat cow dung, human blood, or **, but he ate the leaves grown from the soul with relish. There were a lot of descriptions of the appearance and I thought she was the heroine, but the result was super annoying. I wanted Tian Lin to kill her, but later she became her nanny, and she had to occupy a lot of scenes. There are fewer and fewer scenes in the entries, and there are more and more inexplicable plots. If it weren't for the novelty of the entries, who would have read it? As a result, the highlights become less and less obvious, and there are more and more so-called plots. It's just that the characters have good and bad qualities. The protagonist may be kind-hearted and completely inappropriate at one moment, and may have a bottom line at another time. The characters cannot be well developed. It's really a waste of such a good idea!

The whole novel, like other novels, is the best in the early stages. The further you get to the back, the more ridiculous it gets.

1. I didn't expect Mei Xiangu to become the heroine, because this aspect will directly deduct half of the points. I don't know what the author was thinking about making such an arrogant, vicious, brainless, and selfish person become the heroine. 2. Major events appear too suddenly, and the ending of the event is very anticlimactic. Important plots arise in a hurry and fall flat. 3. In 90% of the dungeons and plots, the protagonist spent a lot of effort, but in the end gained nothing. The opportunities all belonged to the villain, and even the protagonist's friends did not gain anything. There are too many villain scenes, the good guys are rushed off the line, and it makes people sick. 4. The protagonist is a coward. He always puts himself to death when it is time to be stubborn, and becomes a coward again when it is time to fight. 5. The descriptions of the entries became less and less in the later period. I don't know why. 6. There are so many pits buried inexplicably that it will probably not be easy to fill them in later, and there are too many pits, so it is unlikely that they will all be filled. 7. The protagonist has no calculations or plans at all. With such an incredible golden finger, he actually takes things as they come. And the character of the protagonist is uncertain, sometimes inexplicably vicious, sometimes inexplicably virginal, hey. Overall evaluation, the outline is quite good and the story is innovative, but the plot description is too disgusting. It had the potential to become a divine book, but it's a pity.

The old man who used weeds to satisfy his hunger for two days was even poisoned. He is actually afraid of a rope of more than ten feet, and the protagonist also eats wild vegetables to satisfy his hunger. His first reaction when he got the porridge was that it was cold and sizzling?

The seventh young master's crime is not worthy of death. The male protagonist's character is really low. His perception has dropped a lot. There are too few positive things.

3. The supporting characters' logical abilities need to be improved. 4 The main reason is that the word count is low, the story has no rhythm, and there is no sense of expectation. Jumping through the book will not affect the plot. Hope the author improves

It's not fun to ramble on and on, it's a useless plot.