Technology Invades the World of Immortality

That was supposed to be an industrial chain, but it was actually shit. It was poorly written and childish. This book has integrity, imagination and ingenuity. The writing isn't too bad either. It's a pity that no one pays attention to it. It's like this era is all about traffic and fans.

I understand that the protagonist was instantly killed by his divine consciousness. That is because the strength of the foundation-building divine consciousness is more powerful than Qi training, which creates a mechanism that cannot be improved unless the realm is improved. If it is just a simple numerical improvement, I strongly disagree.

Why do things that get damaged in the virtual battlefield have to be repaired in reality? I'm confused

I originally wanted to give it one star, but think about it and add one star to the previous content. What are the shortcomings? It's similar to the heavy artillery book that was abandoned after reading a few chapters. The author wanted to build a logical world of cultivating immortals, but there were loopholes in how to build it. However, the fairy sect part was relatively reasonable. Until the sect country part of the alien world, the author also incorporated the logic of the immortal sect. The low-level monks of the celestial sect can also generate value by relying on technology. It can also provide combat power, so eliminating the low-level immortal cultivators of the Immortal Sect will also cause great harm to the Immortal Sect. However, the style of the underworld cultivating immortals and alien sects described by the author is dark, but the logic is adapted to the logical theory of the Immortal Sect. I almost wanted to laugh when I read the part of the Three Kingdoms War and the Second Sect. Using some first-order magic weapons to engage in trade wars and wooing can make it collapse. . . What is the foundation of the second sect's underworld cultivation? Is it a downward revision? Wrong, only the highest person is the main body of the sect. After all, he is the selfish alien monk in your writing. What is the use of dealing with these low-level immortal cultivators? If you dare to betray, then kill them all. Do you, with your high combat power from the Three Kingdoms, dare to risk your lives for exchange with me? If I can't beat you, you can't run? Can you bear to take away your wealth and property to fight guerrillas, and then attack you again when your life is in danger? If you dare to risk your life, the two sects will not exist for so long in your writing, not to mention the upcoming enemies from Chu. They killed all the vassals and surrendered to Chu at the beginning. How should you deal with it? Can the remaining two countries help Qi? I can't help that the lost territory will be regained sooner or later.

The concept is quite good, but the refreshing point is too little. It's like braised pork without salt. The meat is very good, but it makes you feel tired after eating it.

"There are countless outstanding women, but there has never been an example of women coming together to achieve anything." "If women are rational, how can Huangmao survive?" Full of biased perspectives. You don't have to write about women. Once women are described, they are full of biased perspectives, which is really hard to watch.

The advantage is that the worldview construction is relatively complete. The disadvantage is that it is too slow. Normal foundation building is around 400,000, which is better. Then the combat performance is a bit uncomfortable. It is a bit difficult to blow up the sun during the Qi training period. A flight test takes more than 10 chapters. But overall it is still watchable, and it is recommended that the pace needs to be accelerated.

I saw 436, the rhythm sucked, The protagonist is Karami, who is working on high-level projects every day. Can you write it? One college entrance examination will lead to the destruction of the world. After it was over, I returned to Qiandao, played in the factory and bought swords. When I was done, I started to buy energy, and also engaged in the Three Kingdoms brawl and played politics. That teacher with 10,000 clones, what did you teach? After passing the college entrance examination, what classes did you take? A genius who created his own exercises is the best, what are you doing in the college entrance examination? After the college entrance examination, I went to deliver goods, practiced on the spaceship, and then did research. There are still confidentiality issues, quarrels over profit distribution, and where has the subject gone?

The author creates a real world

There are some flaws in the details, and the writing style is not sophisticated enough, but it is still interesting. Being able to read it is the greatest recognition of the author.