Zhangmenxianlu

First of all, as a leader, most of the time is not for cultivation but for purchasing. Occasionally, there are some descriptions of cultivation, which are directly mentioned in a few strokes (for example, 2 years have passed...). If the leader has to go personally for some purchases like usual, why do we need some elders and disciples? Secondly, in order to highlight the leader, the elders and disciples are basically ignored. About 200 chapters, there is basically no description of the elders and disciples, and there is no communication between the leader, the elders and disciples. The subject matter of the leader is very good, but when I write it, it is no different from a person who is vulgar and developed. Finally, because the protagonist often purchases, the cultivation progress is too slow, and it does not conform to the setting. It is a high-grade spiritual root at least, and it was built around Chapter 164. There are various waves, and some places are too far-fetched. The trial at the beginning is similar to the system flow, and it is a specially tailored technique. Moreover, when writing about the Immortal Path of the Master, when you develop a sect, you should first put the basic skills in the Sutra Pavilion, and then keep writing to obtain various resources. Then how resources are allocated is not written, nor are the resources allocated. As of Chapter 300, most of them are just the leader alone. It doesn't feel good, why is the rating still high? Maybe it's not suitable for me to watch.

I would like to give you some advice. Don't micromanage everything, which seems a bit procrastinating. I really like this novel. I am used to reading pirated copies first, and then I go to the reading platform to pay for reading if I feel good about it. I also hope that the author will write better and better.

Slowly and eloquently, it unfolds slowly, with clear layers, sects cultivating immortals, farming articles, the aura of the protagonist, never revealed, fighting for power, calm, chapter content, peaceful and gentle, strong men from all walks of life, limited means, clouds and mist cover, winding road, seeing the results, the road is twists and turns, It can be explained clearly in a few words, but it goes round and round, with a lot of nonsense words, the plot is protracted, and it costs money. The protagonist's IQ is never online, the character is mediocre, indecisive, hesitant when encountering problems, and there is nothing good to say. There is no heroine, no adventures, few waves, no grandeur, plain as water, and a good hypnotic article.

Trash novels, don't be too ugly at all.

Can't get enough! So pretty! I'm exhausted! Asking for books

The advantage is that the layout is okay. The general framework is based on the prehistoric flow, with the rise of the sect as the main line, slowly farming, struggling to survive, the protagonist is lucky, has extraordinary talent, strictly abides by the "code of righteousness", a typical Yue Buqun. There isn't much interesting after that, there aren't many high points, not many low points, it's all straightforward and the fun points are gone. The further you go in upgrading, the faster it becomes, and the details become simpler. When you see the incomprehensible things, it becomes so magical that you give up... Simply put, every opportunity belongs to the protagonist. As long as the protagonist is there, regardless of strength, it all depends on the "protagonist's wisdom", and you will win inexplicably. This is an online article with little merit. It is said to be a sect leader but in fact it doesn't have much description of the sect. It is not as good as a system article.

The protagonist, Tian Tianlang, just doesn't practice. To put it another way, if the protagonist is a Yang Shen, or a powerful person who can return to the void, what kind of chamber of commerce would dare to complain? Make waves every day! Or maybe the author is swimming in the sea? Only your own strength can drive the sect!

This is the third time I have encountered a sect-type novel, and I find it very interesting. Unlike other novels, you have to rely on yourself here!

In the system of cultivating immortals constructed by the author, the weak eat the strong. For a successful person who can survive in such a world and lead a group of people to have a bright future, what qualities, bottom line, wisdom, decision-making, management, information control, and technology (alchemy array) are required, it seems that the protagonist is one, what does the protagonist have? Follow others without any brains, have no ideas of your own, and end up taking advantage every time if you don't get sold. . What is the probability of such luck? He can survive until later because he is the protagonist, haha

It's too watery, especially when it emphasizes how good the protagonist's qualifications are while having all kinds of watery plots, and it's over a hundred chapters long and he's still practicing seventh level Qi! Can you please take it easy! It's time to reach perfection by practicing Qi in water! ! !