Lord: Start with a Book of Water Margin

This book screens readers. The vast majority of people who don't understand classical Chinese will not be able to read it. It's also so special that they list how many chickens, ducks, geese, cattle, sheep, and horses they raise. I'm sick.

Advantages: 1. The form of writing in semi-white ancient Chinese is very good. It is the first time I have seen it used in writing online novels. The words and sentences used in the writing are very touching and worthy of praise; 2. The structure of the world is very interesting, with more flesh and blood and details than other Lord novels; 3. The character's mentality, outlook on life, and family relationships are all normal and worthy of praise. Disadvantages: 1. The rhythm of the story is slow and lacks a tense story to support the excitement and passion of the whole book; 2. The expansion of knowledge points is not concise enough and too procrastinating. It is recommended to delete unnecessary complexity and retain only the essence; 3. In the early stage of the writing, I have been drinking and recruiting people. This development is correct. It is okay to eat like this. Just writing it like this seems like repetition. Suggestions: 1. Seize the development context of the main story and add some side plots during the stable period to move forward. You cannot just recruit people to drink; 2. It's too stable. Although it seems that it is heading towards Jianguo, it lacks passion and needs to work more on the setting of the plot. The above is my first book review in thirty years. It's not well written. If you don't like it, don't criticize it.

The novel is for modern people to read. It is easier to understand if it is written in vernacular Chinese, but it is not used to reading it if it is written in classical Chinese!

Let me ask a question, did the protagonist travel through time? He said that there is no book like Water Margin in the world, but he also knows about the situation in Water Margin.

The writing is very good, whether it is copied or memorized, it is also used well. Let's talk about the advantages and disadvantages. It's okay to listen to the book for the first time, but if there are obstacles in reading, it will discourage many people. The second detail is not handled well and the explanation is not clear. Third, the rhythm is too slow. Even if it is based on life and cultivation, we should improve our personal strength earlier and jump out of the circle of Water Margin. After all, the times are different. There are too few people who like Water Margin, and there are many who hate it. All of them are evil. Fourth, the main world should be the main one and the fantasy world as the supplement. You are doing the complete opposite. The world view is so big, but it is just spinning in circles. All dynasties can enter it. Later, you will gradually enter the world of Zhongwu, Gaowu, martial arts, fantasy, gods, and prehistoric times. As long as the span is not too large, the attraction is very high. Shinto incense, emperors canonizing gods, and people offering sacrifices, there are so many things that can be added. Your worldview is already huge, and the mist world can also enter the main world. But obviously you just want to watch Water Margin. You can tell by looking at the descriptions of 108 Villains and Marrying a Wife. At this point, the wife is almost unforgettable. Even if you temporarily marry someone in the main world to use as a stepping stone, or grab Pan Jinlian in the fantasy world, you will be better than you are now. Everyone likes to read celebrities in this kind of novels. People who don't read Water Margin can only think of Pan Jinlian, and then Wu Songlin, Lu Zhishen, Song Jiang and others. This setting is great, but it's a pity. Water Margin can be put aside and progressed slowly. Quickly transfer to the main world, or enter other historical periods from the main world, or medium martial arts, or high martial arts.

Not to mention anything else, it's a fan, but the protagonist is an indigenous person

It would have been better if this book was written directly by the same people as Water Margin. You are wearing the skin of a lord. Lord Wen is not like you. The lord text must have a sense of crisis and a goal. The data must be clear, it must be upgraded, it must be farmed, and it must have troops. Gotta fight. You might as well just write a Water Margin fan to be honest.

The writing style is very good, but how can I put it? It feels a bit cold and careless, accepting everyone, and there are no good people. And relying on the bandits of Shuibo Liangshan to conquer the world always feels a bit inferior. The protagonist should start with a book called Romance of the Three Kingdoms, or a book like Spring and Autumn and Warring States, which feels better to write. I have been describing characters who rob homes, roosters, dogs, and even eat human flesh. It always feels inappropriate to say how loyal and powerful these people are.

As I get better and better, I can clearly see the author's progress. The first part is too cumbersome, and there are still book bags falling, but the second part of the writing is much smoother.

How to say it! Not used to it! I still like to read vernacular texts! I can't see this way of writing! Tired!