War Lord's Throne

Big poisonous spots are not as small as small poisonous spots. They all have their own portable world. I wonder how high the power system is. I don't know what to write about it. A three-meter-high city wall, even a few people who love parkour can jump on it, but even extraordinary creatures can't climb it? , How difficult it is to be promoted to a fourth-level extraordinary creature, and a sixth-level power-shaped extraordinary creature may not be able to break a stone wall? Waterma can kill the sixth level with two rocket launchers, and he will eat all the books. He just finished the previous chapter and ate it by himself within a few chapters. It was written by the studio. How many chapters can one person write?

The Lord's World with a diameter of 120 meters has a total area of ​​5,600 square meters and is still circular. A mage tower with an area of ​​500 square meters was built in the middle of the territory, and 50 wooden houses with an area of ​​81 square meters were built (the floor space of wooden planks + unusable gaps in the circle must be at least 5,000 square meters), as well as a population of 320 and 5 horses. Is this arrangement appropriate? Lord, at least give me an area similar to a village initially, tens of thousands of square meters, just over 5,000 square meters. What's the point of releasing those civilians? With this initial area, it is enough to recruit fifty white civilian men at the beginning to build a military camp, then transfer to soldiers, and then recruit ten civilians to do logistics and chores. Only when the territory has farmland can it be suitable to recruit a large number of civilians to build a village. Otherwise, the wooden houses built in the early stage will have to be pushed down, which is a waste of time and resource consumption. There are also soldiers' wages. In the early stage, the territory was very poor and had nothing. Materials and food were all distributed through the distribution system. Why did the soldiers need wages? Where to spend it? A system of meritorious service or points is established in the early stage, and is then converted into currency when the territory is formed later. Moreover, the currency itself is the value given by the lord. It can be said that it will be a false salary for a long time. There is no real consumption in this regard, and there will be no pressure on the lord to increase the salary of soldiers in the short term. The content of the author's first ten or so chapters is basically the basic setting, but the writing is indeed chaotic and disorderly. Not to mention the poisonous points, there are too many flaws.

Worth a look. But it's really not as good as Shen Zhuan's book. The general direction of this book is very good, but the details of the characters are not as well handled as before. One is that many times the protagonist is about to make a decision, and unexpected news immediately appears. The protagonist changes his decision, which is too deliberate, especially when it is just a little bit different every time! Second, in other aspects, the protagonist can be said to be highly talented and lucky, but when it comes to golden fingers, doesn't the protagonist know how to be cautious? Just promise people great benefits directly, but you can't give anything else? And if the talent is improved later, it will be really poisonous. Don't they have any relatives or friends? ? Don't worry about scarcity but inequality. This is not absolute control over one's own territory. In other respects, if it's just an item, such as the Magic War Book, why don't you introduce the function first? Why introduce the difficulties first? Readers don't know it clearly. No matter how great it is, everyone doesn't know it! I hope the author can pay more attention to details, especially regarding the golden finger to make the protagonist more cautious.

He was inconsistent and had many poisonous points. He just said that he should be treated as the head of a chicken instead of the tail of a phoenix, but in the end, he was not even treated as a phoenix! Afraid of challenges! ! I just saw 17 and immediately persuaded me to quit

The settings are confusing, the logic is contradictory, there are no major poisons, and there are constant minor poisons. I hope the author can be more rigorous. It's too affecting the senses. I can't stand the poison poured down one bite at a time. For example, the external performance of Goldfinger, and the promotion of two heroes... The world view is quite good, generally okay, I hope the author can think about it carefully.

The author's writing style is quite good, especially the setting. However, some of the same problems appear in several of the author's books. First, the author's family drama is very good, not so bloody, but still a bit excessive. The emotional line is averagely written, and it has improved after a few books, but it is still too indifferent (pursuing) in the early stage, and overly concerned later on. The second is Golden Finger. Every book has forced explanations of the plot. They all say that they take the initiative to reveal a little bit, but they don't take the initiative to tell it. It's obvious that they convince themselves. It's better not to explain, let others guess, and only expose part of the function! Another thing is that there are always some plots where the protagonist takes the initiative to give benefits. It is obviously the protagonist who pays the most, but he always has to give others. Generally, this kind of thing should be because he can't afford it, or in return. For example, in this book, for some reason, the protagonist begins to promise benefits to the National People's Congress who join the protagonist. It's not like the protagonist needs anything, no one has made great contributions, and it's not like the protagonist won't pay his salary! No matter how you write it, you must forcefully explain the talent improvement later. In other aspects, there are some inexplicable plots, such as some protagonists drooling, some giggling, and some for no reason... I hope the author can improve it, this problem has appeared in many books!

It was said earlier that if you have enough experience in a unit, you can be promoted by giving it a little energy. But later on, when you buy a promotion card, you still have to spend money to be promoted. Is this money for data? Should the money be given to the card seller or the card maker?

The previous book "Global Gods" was really interesting at the beginning, but I couldn't stand the rest of it. Every time it came alone, it didn't convey the feeling of leading a family to conquer the world at all. The more I wrote, the less interesting it became. Hopefully this will ward off Ben's thunder.

Who did I say? Turns out it's her, she keeps writing...

I can't even write such a simple novel. If you have a gold finger function, 90% of the material will be melted away. Just heroes and that defense tower war machine will do. There is no need for an army at all, and without an army there is no need for logistics. If you just put a lot of resources together, it won't be enough to just be a hero.