Making a Railway Game, the Characters Are Going Crazy

The sugar content was so high that I didn't even have the courage to open it or take insulin.

Author, please listen to me. Your novel is not decorated with gorgeous language, but touches readers with its ordinary true feelings. The sentences are fluent and coherent, and the psychological portrayal and detailed description are perfect, giving people a sense of aftertaste! From a literary point of view, the selection of materials is very novel, the angles are clearly visible, and the language is plain yet elegant. It is concise and full of meaning, and it can be called a model article! This novel shows extraordinary literary skills in its plainness. The psychological description of the hero and heroine is described to the extreme in plain sentences, reaching a height that is beyond our reach. From an artistic point of view, this novel still needs improvement, but its significance is far greater than the success itself. After reading your novel, my heart couldn't calm down for a long time. How could there be such a penetrating novel in this world? I couldn't believe my eyes. You made me deeply understand the sentence "There are people outside the world, and there is a sky outside the world." After reading the novel, I dare not comment easily, I am afraid that my vulgar language will tarnish this rare article in the world. But I still commented, because I felt that if I could not leave my own footprints behind such a wonderful novel, it would be a regret in my life. Please forgive my selfishness! No matter how gorgeous the words are, they cannot describe the wonderfulness of this novel. So at the end, I just want to say: Your novel is so wonderful, why not add another chapter?

Let's talk about the advantages first. The author's writing skills are very strong. The article has a compact structure and gives people a sense of coherence. The story of "Star Railway" is told in a eloquent way, without spreading over branches or branches, and everyone can understand it clearly. The characters in the game story are vividly expressed, and the author's imaginative play with the characters in the game leaves readers with endless thoughts. Let's talk about the shortcomings. The novel has been explaining how the characters in "Star Railway" play (tell) the game. Lin Rui, the protagonist of the time-travel at the beginning, and Lin Rui, who produced the game, no longer appear. Does this mean that the protagonist is infinitely weakened? To be honest, I don't feel that the protagonist has been weakened, but that the protagonist has been completely lost! But no one is perfect! Overall, the flaws outweigh the flaws. I would give it an 8 out of 10 points! I hope the author will continue his efforts and create greater glories.

I hope the protagonist of this book can participate. After reading many books like this, the protagonist is useful in the front, but basically invisible in the back.

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Does this novel have a protagonist? I've read one that was also written like this, but it was a video. There was a shadow of the protagonist in the front, but the protagonist was completely eliminated in the back.

Come on, don't stop updating, it's good. Don't be stressed, just perform steadily

When will the plot of Ompharos be released? Please, come out! Don't let me have regrets alone😊😊

The main character is just a big mess

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