Players Invade Cyberpunk

After reading about 30 chapters, I can't say that I am satisfied with the plot. I can only say that my patience is running out. If it weren't for the theme of "The Fourth Natural Disaster, Players", I would have given up on it and left with a bad review! The story has "Wasteland OL, the shadow of the boss of Morning Star LL", but it is only a shadow. Players have no subjective initiative? As a player-themed novel, the perspective is basically on the protagonist. The protagonist's perspective is mostly not focused on developing players? Have you been thinking about falling in love lately? The work of the Morning Star boss is a template. I don't mean that you have to copy it, but you must have the "attractive points of the player theme"! Wasteland OL focuses on players. The recently released Demon King OL features the main protagonist! It is recommended that the author can refer to it.

1. There is a problem with the real world background setting at the beginning, no virtual reality games appear, and a world where VR games have just appeared is set. Then the game was implemented to attract people. If you are the creator of this kind of plot, it really doesn't matter. This type of novel has been around for several years. Have you still not learned how to set it? A little poisonous can be tolerated 2. The reward given by the system is titanium skeleton. After the protagonist was replaced, all the bones in his body were replaced... Yours is a reconstructed skeleton. You are confused. It's better to give it a kinetic skeleton. A little poisonous can be tolerated 3. Mann and the others will not hang out in the next life. You write that they will be famous in the next life. . . . . A little poisonous can be tolerated 4. Arrange Lucy's plot to suit her needs. The portrayal of Lucy was so poor, her vigilance was not seen at all. A little poison can be tolerated 5. Chapter 10 is coming. Kiwi investigates the protagonist and feels an aura of destruction. The giant poison is following the routine of cultivating immortals. I can't bear it. Run away.

There are many girls who read books now. The stories are not bad, but there are too many margins, and the margins are meaningless and have no funny effect. Readers who like to read text will feel that so many margins at the beginning are really irritating after they read too many books.

I don't understand what the author was thinking. In the early stage, it was decided that the player would advance the plot from the front, and the protagonist would be responsible for logistics, controlling the rhythm, balancing relationships, and developing the company behind the scenes. As a result, the scene immediately changed again, and all the eyes were focused on the protagonist's love affair. Fortunately, the eyes were pulled back later. As a result, in Chapter 100, the conflict with the emergency team suddenly became a deus ex machina, hackers burned the brains, and the protagonist ended up wearing a mecha.

I don't understand what the author was thinking. In the early stage, it was decided that the player would advance the plot from the front, and the protagonist would be responsible for logistics, controlling the rhythm, balancing relationships, and developing the company behind the scenes. As a result, the scene immediately changed again, and all the eyes were focused on the protagonist's love affair. Fortunately, the eyes were pulled back later. As a result, in Chapter 100, the conflict with the emergency team suddenly became a deus ex machina, hackers burned the brains, and the protagonist ended up wearing a mecha. Earlier, the protagonist was forced to be unable to learn hacking abilities, but later on, the protagonist was forced to have the brain-burning ability of a hacker. And the same goes for chapter 100. It would be better to let the doctor hide in the office base, and then say that the base's defense is complete and the emergency team cannot attack. The protagonist relies on the player's resurrection to fight a war of attrition with the emergency team. It is reasonable and interesting. It is much better than if you directly create a deus ex machina. Even if you create some decisive battle moment, and then directly cancel the resurrection penalty, allowing the player to fight with the emergency team at the speed of 15 people in half an hour is more reasonable than direct deus ex machina.

What I wrote above is okay, but the main character's role is a little less, and some of them are in love, which is barely acceptable. Later, the ZF forces were directly introduced, and it would be meaningless to write about clichéd things such as the impact of technology in reality. Is the world of 2077 not enough for you to write about? Falling in love is not enough for you? Do you want to serve the motherland like this? Selling dog meat under the banner of 2077

I came to see the Fourth Natural Disaster, not to watch pigs' feet pick up women.

Why is this rated so high?

The writing is good, but the only flaw is that why do players listen to you, and waste so much time working for you, without even one click to automate it.

Being eaten in the middle of Chapter 252 and Chapter 253? ? ?