Starting from Fist Wan's Violent Beating of One Piece

I wrote a fan fiction, and the main heroine had her breast touched by an original male character. The author is really a god.

The official character of Long Qi is too arrogant and self-righteous. Influencing other explorers, they clearly have insufficient information, but they are full of self-confidence, holding high the banner of collective interests, and ignoring the possibility that other explorers will be tortured to extract confessions or even die. However, the protagonist secretly praised Long Qi's plan in Chapter 29.

Alas, it's really a mess. The author is the worst at writing supporting characters. He also creates a secret realm, so he has to write some original characters. You can't even describe this original character. It's really a mess.

As I expected, each secret world is in chaos due to the presence of explorers. Although the secret state can be reset, it is still changed beyond recognition due to the large number of explorers joining. Even Nami in One Piece was attacked by passerby explorers. I really hate group time travel. Isn't it just to make up for regrets and see the changes after the protagonist joins? Every time a group of people travels in, the world of every comic is completely changed and collapsed. What else is there to watch? The protagonist has to team up with those pig teammates and listen to the instructions of the pig teammates. Those pig teammates are arrogant and do not have the foresight of the protagonist who has read the original work. They make all sorts of stupid mistakes and watch their blood pressure soar!

The OOC phenomenon is becoming more and more serious. All the fanfics written by the author have a clear setting and the complete works of the original works can be found. As a result, there are still plots that are inconsistent with logic or conflict with the original works. What the hell is this? He is obviously an experienced author, but he acts like a novice.

I feel that recently the author's setting of the anime's worldview is no longer as rigorous as before.

Is your account sold? Pure novel plot.

Siyang, you told me earlier that you wanted to change the settings. The name of the Three Demons Sect just sounds like evil, but they are decent, especially the Three Demons Sect that is not dead yet. It has complete training techniques to subdue the Three Demons. Moreover, the ending of the entire sect in the original game is to resist the Japanese and die, which leads to the key inheritance. Cut off, even so, the full-sex Tu Junfang is not a villain, but when it comes to you, you directly change the setting, and change the anti-Japanese hero of the Three Demons Sect into a rapist. You can say that he is an abandoned member of the Three Demons Sect, but in the end, you directly make the sect leader a villain. I am speechless.

The author is addicted to his literary youth world and can no longer extricate himself. The description of the main world is dogmatic, rigid and indescribable. The god-man villain with shallow ideas can sit at the same table as Uchiha Itachi

I read your book just for the pleasure. The Fu Ling and the clown man you are writing now are really disgusting. The male protagonist is also becoming a saint. I will not read this one and wait for your next book.