Starting from Fist Wan's Violent Beating of One Piece

I wrote a fan fiction, and the main heroine had her breast touched by an original male character. The author is really a god.

The official character of Long Qi is too arrogant and self-righteous. Influencing other explorers, they clearly have insufficient information, but they are full of self-confidence, holding high the banner of collective interests, and ignoring the possibility that other explorers will be tortured to extract confessions or even die. However, the protagonist secretly praised Long Qi's plan in Chapter 29.

Alas, it's really a mess. The author is the worst at writing supporting characters. He also creates a secret realm, so he has to write some original characters. You can't even describe this original character. It's really a mess.

The OOC phenomenon is becoming more and more serious. All the fanfics written by the author have a clear setting and the complete works of the original works can be found. As a result, there are still plots that are inconsistent with logic or conflict with the original works. What the hell is this? He is obviously an experienced author, but he acts like a novice.

I feel that recently the author's setting of the anime's worldview is no longer as rigorous as before.

It is recommended that the author read the original work first before writing a fanfic.

The content of One Piece is not amazing, but it is very compact and very enjoyable. Of course, I could read it in one sitting. Now I am following the update, the Death Chapter, and I feel that it is very boring to follow!

1: The reason why I don't like the system is that the protagonist is just a puppet. Opportunity does not use brain planning, just sends it directly. Ability will not be developed using the brain, but created using the brain, and will be given directly. 2: I don't like novels that start with the second generation of rich people and the cultivation of great emperors. Opportunities will come as they come, they are invincible and have no innovative imagination. If I travel to the world of cultivating immortals, even useless spiritual roots/martial spirits can counterattack and become gods. Plasma (Valkyrie's Tesla), compressed density (brother's black hole nuclear explosion), biological research (Hokage's Orochimaru),... Have you read so many books in vain? Why can others thrive without a system, but what about their brains? ---------- Data analysis ----------- A Mortal's Story of Immortality: Crowdfunding 40.25 Million yuan Immortal Rebellion: Crowdfunding 700,000 yuan -------- I am cultivating immortality through science for mortals: 7.6 Points No system 3 fanaticism, 7 obsession, 421 support ---------- Doupo: The strongest in the whole map, I will always be above you: 8.8 Points Systematic 0 fanaticism, 0 obsession, 7 support --------- Fight Po: Yang Emperor: 7.8 Points No system 1 fanaticism, 1 obsession, 173 support --------- The most skillful pirate hunter: 8.0 Points No system 1 fanaticism, 0 obsession, 3 support, --------- Pirate Talent System: 9.1 Points Systematic 0 fanaticism, 0 obsession, 2 support ----------- The world of Naruto through the eyes of reincarnation: 8.6 Points No system 1 fanaticism, 3 obsession, 500+ support ------------- Naruto: 9.0 Points Systematic 0 fanaticism, 0 obsession, 5 support -------- .... Many... Many... You can count them yourself... ---------- Facts have proved that people who like to read brainless novels and systematic novels have no money. These brainless people scold the brainless authors the most. They always feel that their feudal ideas are correct, just like a primary school student scolding a graduate author as disgusting. Isn't this contrary to Tiangang? If you don't understand it yourself, you'll scold others as disgusting if it doesn't suit your needs. The author can't satisfy everyone, so he can only serve the high-quality group of people and give up on the low-quality and moneyless group of people.

Siyang, you told me earlier that you wanted to change the settings. The name of the Three Demons Sect just sounds like evil, but they are decent, especially the Three Demons Sect that is not dead yet. It has complete training techniques to subdue the Three Demons. Moreover, the ending of the entire sect in the original game is to resist the Japanese and die, which leads to the key inheritance. Cut off, even so, the full-sex Tu Junfang is not a villain, but when it comes to you, you directly change the setting, and change the anti-Japanese hero of the Three Demons Sect into a rapist. You can say that he is an abandoned member of the Three Demons Sect, but in the end, you directly make the sect leader a villain. I am speechless.

Is your account sold? Pure novel plot.