
Create the Strongest Entry Starting from Pirates
About This Novel
The founder of Dayun, Rock came to the world of One Piece in an instant. Fortunately, he awakened an entry system, which extracts various entries as long as they affect the plot of One Piece. Great Love Immortal's [Grab it and refine it instantly], and Kebi's two hundred times effort [King of Effort]. The Shao Shao Man blocks the magma punch from the Sun God [No dog will eat the Shao Shao fruit], the legendary King Luffy's [Sit-ups]... "Dragon people? Five old stars? Im? From today on, I will stand on the sky!" ... This book is also called: [Pirate: My entry is to be grabbed and instantly refined] [Pirates: Catch the thief Nami at the beginning! [Entry], [stem],
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Official(48)Scraped 2d ago
Nothing to say. The protagonist doesn't know what the so-called nonsense is, he is not in a hurry, and he has quite a lot of indifferent calculations. Just change the name and call me the ultimate pull with the Navy.
To put it simply, there are a large number of readers in the comment area, including paragraph comments, who make negative comments about the plot of the protagonist not killing Kebi and letting him go. The positive ones are all from the perspective of the protagonist, not Kebi. Although the author is a provocateur, he also knows that when writing articles, he must write what readers will like to read. Therefore, the plot of Kebi was changed. However, since the entry for [King of Effort] was already available later in the article, it was not possible for the protagonist to kill Kebi with one sword and seize it and refine it instantly. Moreover, there will be irreparable logical loopholes in the subsequent plot, so the method adopted is to have Kirby thrown into the sea by Arrita because of inappropriate remarks. The names of Chapter 4 and Chapter 5 have been changed, and Chapter 6 is somewhat redundant. Although there are still some flaws, it is already the author's limit. Then I would like to apologize to all readers again and give you a shout-ONZ. (Stand at attention after being beaten!)
What is written at the back is some stupid thing, it somehow got all the four emperors offended, and there is that Tiqi, who is procrastinating and not killing, is he keeping it to wait for the New Year? If possible, I don't want to give it even one star. Even if allowed, I would like to apply for the subscription money and ** time to be returned to me.
What I think is unreasonable is that like some games, the skill limit is locked, and the protagonist's strength has improved, but the skill power is still the same as before.
The later data was written down, especially after Hawkeye came out. The Rayleigh Golden Lions in the early stage were all on the roadside. The protagonist's scale defense could block ordinary guns. As a result, the attributes were five or six levels lower than Hawkeye. There is no way that Hawkeye's body is stronger than Auntie's steel balloon.
There is a strong sense of separation, and a feeling of being a troublemaker. It is a different kind of Luffy who wants to get involved in everything. The design entries are quite well written.
With Angel Wheel and King of Effort, if you don't find a place to train, don't you even have a few months to spare? You said your talent is not as good as those monsters, then train yourself to the upper limit of your talent first. One month is equivalent to more than ten years for others.
Two stars, really outrageous
1. Defeat Garp alone? Rayleigh, Golden Lion, Big Mom, etc., But what is the purpose of Beehive Island? Can't break the bricks and stones? Can't seconds? 2. Overlord color comes first, armed color comes first, and this is the result? Can't suppress the immortal body? 3. After adding information and entries, you still can't find that dreaming guy from the Knights of God? It's funny, the quality of the novels after this app was launched was really rubbish 4. Those two hundred times the entries, plus the Angel Wheel, don't settle down well. What's the point of walking around all the time? It only takes one year to declare that you don't eat beef anymore. You have to walk around. It has also been a few months, and you have done sit-ups several times. The overlord color and the armed color are the first, and the result is so rubbish? 😐😐
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Official(48)Scraped 2d ago
Nothing to say. The protagonist doesn't know what the so-called nonsense is, he is not in a hurry, and he has quite a lot of indifferent calculations. Just change the name and call me the ultimate pull with the Navy.
To put it simply, there are a large number of readers in the comment area, including paragraph comments, who make negative comments about the plot of the protagonist not killing Kebi and letting him go. The positive ones are all from the perspective of the protagonist, not Kebi. Although the author is a provocateur, he also knows that when writing articles, he must write what readers will like to read. Therefore, the plot of Kebi was changed. However, since the entry for [King of Effort] was already available later in the article, it was not possible for the protagonist to kill Kebi with one sword and seize it and refine it instantly. Moreover, there will be irreparable logical loopholes in the subsequent plot, so the method adopted is to have Kirby thrown into the sea by Arrita because of inappropriate remarks. The names of Chapter 4 and Chapter 5 have been changed, and Chapter 6 is somewhat redundant. Although there are still some flaws, it is already the author's limit. Then I would like to apologize to all readers again and give you a shout-ONZ. (Stand at attention after being beaten!)
What is written at the back is some stupid thing, it somehow got all the four emperors offended, and there is that Tiqi, who is procrastinating and not killing, is he keeping it to wait for the New Year? If possible, I don't want to give it even one star. Even if allowed, I would like to apply for the subscription money and ** time to be returned to me.
What I think is unreasonable is that like some games, the skill limit is locked, and the protagonist's strength has improved, but the skill power is still the same as before.
The later data was written down, especially after Hawkeye came out. The Rayleigh Golden Lions in the early stage were all on the roadside. The protagonist's scale defense could block ordinary guns. As a result, the attributes were five or six levels lower than Hawkeye. There is no way that Hawkeye's body is stronger than Auntie's steel balloon.
There is a strong sense of separation, and a feeling of being a troublemaker. It is a different kind of Luffy who wants to get involved in everything. The design entries are quite well written.
With Angel Wheel and King of Effort, if you don't find a place to train, don't you even have a few months to spare? You said your talent is not as good as those monsters, then train yourself to the upper limit of your talent first. One month is equivalent to more than ten years for others.
Two stars, really outrageous
1. Defeat Garp alone? Rayleigh, Golden Lion, Big Mom, etc., But what is the purpose of Beehive Island? Can't break the bricks and stones? Can't seconds? 2. Overlord color comes first, armed color comes first, and this is the result? Can't suppress the immortal body? 3. After adding information and entries, you still can't find that dreaming guy from the Knights of God? It's funny, the quality of the novels after this app was launched was really rubbish 4. Those two hundred times the entries, plus the Angel Wheel, don't settle down well. What's the point of walking around all the time? It only takes one year to declare that you don't eat beef anymore. You have to walk around. It has also been a few months, and you have done sit-ups several times. The overlord color and the armed color are the first, and the result is so rubbish? 😐😐










