Hunter: Start with the Breath of the Sun

I still feel like I can't accept it, and I haven't even memorized the basic background setting. If Tantan's family made a living by digging coal, the thing that flew over Tomioka Giyuu's head in the first episode of Demon Slayer wouldn't be an ax but a hoe! And in a world with "food hunters", the Hakka family is still the world's number one killer family, and they are surprised by simple home-cooked dishes. Are you saying that the Hakka family is so big that they can't afford to hire a food hunter, or do you simply want to "boast" about our country's (even the Hunter World has similar dishes) food? This routine is a bit too ancient🤗

It can't be read as fan fiction at all, because there are too many red herrings. For example, just cooking up a dish can make the hunter world's top combat power Maha, who has a gourmet hunter, taste so good that he protects his food and gives his training notes as soon as he comes, and eagerly waits for the protagonist to feed him every day; a Sun Breath blinded the housekeeper; the Tanjiro family changed from cutting down trees and burning coal to coal diggers; Shiba secretly learned the protagonist's Sun Breath, and after practicing it, he shouted Sun Breath - Sun Halo Dragon Yanwu and Xiba seem to have also traveled through Demon Slayer, otherwise how would they know the Breath of the Sun. There are too many weird points, so this is not a fanfic, but a novel about cultivating immortals that borrows the background of the two. But if you look at it as a novel about cultivating immortals, the plot is a bit childish. The protagonist has to take a rest every day and travel back and forth between the two worlds. The problem is that the author does not have the writing power to write these contents. Both worlds are written wherever he thinks. There is a rescue plot here, and he will finish it before going back, and there is a fight plot there and he will finish it before going back. I saw so many people collecting it, and I endured reading more than 60 chapters. In the end, I was shocked when the protagonist packed up the enemies in the Sky Tower.

Although it is not impossible to do this according to Xiba's talent, this is a big poisonous point. What do you think if you don't change it even after being scolded? Don't want to get angry? The most unbearable thing is that Xiba seemed to pronounce the name of the move when he swung the sword. Although I don't know whether he said it himself or the author described it, he deserved to be scolded. Where did Xiba know the name of the move? The protagonist has never said it out loud, so it should be added that "the protagonist's acquired abilities cannot be learned by others even if they imitate them in a standard way", otherwise the author deserves to be thrown into the street.

The pacing is too slow, almost 100 chapters and the novice village has not yet been released. Sometimes it feels really boring. You can tell what it is about just by looking at the title. The protagonist's image is too single and too templated

The opening chapter is quite amazing, the emotional descriptions of the characters are very delicate, the golden finger design is in place, the design of the main plot and the dungeon are also just right, there is no conflict in the plot, and it is very comfortable to watch. After watching it for a long time, you will find that because the overall plot is too slow... The delicate emotional description for a long time has become the only advantage😓

You can read it before Chapter 156. When you reach Chapter 156, you directly come to a dark continent. There is a god and you need to believe in it. Humans are imprisoned in Lake Mobius because they don't believe in gods. Can't you read the setting of the full-time hunter?

The best hunter novel I have read so far

I finished reading it and it was very good. Then I read the introduction. I have written two books before, both of which have been discontinued. One of them only has 14 chapters. It's hard not to make people suspect that your book will also be discontinued, so I can only say that it is okay.

A person with 10 times the physique of an ordinary person can run 10 kilometers and still be out of breath...

I haven't set this data yet. An ordinary person's physique is set to 10, and a character with a physique of 10 can be tired enough to sweat after running 10km. And it's just an ordinary morning exercise. I could tell what this novel was just from the first picture.