
Maoshan World: Young Marshal Starts!
by Watermelon Is Not Delicious If It Has Skin
About This Novel
The soul travels through the world of Maoshan and becomes the only son of a warlord. He also has an uncle named Ren Fa and a cousin named Ren Tingting...
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Official(70)Scraped 19d ago
There's nothing wrong with the book, it's just that it's not to my liking
The character setting is not good. When a warlord becomes a disciple and practices Taoism, there will be no formal sect that accepts direct disciples, or even formal disciples. Generally, dragon fights are mostly registered disciples. The struggle for power is too cruel. It is very common for fathers and sons to kill each other, but the sect rules do not allow you to disobey the master. When you develop, the sect does not have the ability and courage to expel you from the sect, so the sect rules become a joke. And who wants to have a bunch of ancestors on their head? It's not like there is no way to obtain the Dharma. In troubled times, the military has the most power. They want to have them all but they don't prioritize. Why do you think that cultivation is the biggest? The protagonist has a golden finger. It's a joke if he can't get the Dharma after he develops.
This book is a fighter among garbage
First of all, let's not talk about the experience of practicing martial arts. Damn it, you only need 10,000 experience points at the beginning. The first level is 100,000 points. Damn it, you can't even practice it to death. Do you believe it or not? Then it is said that others have 5,000 soldiers. It's not a good idea. Damn it, you don't even look at those who have a few hundred people and become warlords, and those who have a few dozen people and are called commanders. Why don't you say that?
In this brain circuit, the protagonist has just learned martial arts and wants to conquer demons. This is a complete fool's behavior. It's easy to reduce your intelligence.
It's a very good subject matter, and it has to be this system. Don't people nowadays know how to write online articles without a system? ? ?
There is a big problem with the setting. The author has not figured out why the setting is a warlord. Originally, the path of killing and separatism has become the path of success and virtue. It is often said that he is neither good nor foreign... He is not written like a young commander but is written as a fool. His temperament, means and political skills can be said to be...
It's embarrassing to write. There are plots in the fantasy part and you can still watch it. Others, such as developing military management, are naive in their ideas and illogical in their methods. The key points are a large part of it, which makes people more and more embarrassed as they read. The author needs to practice his writing skills more
Ren Tingting is already a cousin, so she can't escape? Are you sick? 😦
This book is good. In that era, there were zombies and other things. Plus, domestic and foreign, with the identity of Young Marshal, it can be very huge.
I've started a new book, so please support me. Come on
I hope this book can be as exciting as the previous books, and also that this book can have a beginning and an end. Come on
The level has dropped. I used to be a disciple of Uncle Jiu, but now it's obviously written by AI, and it's a no-brainer.
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Official(70)Scraped 19d ago
There's nothing wrong with the book, it's just that it's not to my liking
The character setting is not good. When a warlord becomes a disciple and practices Taoism, there will be no formal sect that accepts direct disciples, or even formal disciples. Generally, dragon fights are mostly registered disciples. The struggle for power is too cruel. It is very common for fathers and sons to kill each other, but the sect rules do not allow you to disobey the master. When you develop, the sect does not have the ability and courage to expel you from the sect, so the sect rules become a joke. And who wants to have a bunch of ancestors on their head? It's not like there is no way to obtain the Dharma. In troubled times, the military has the most power. They want to have them all but they don't prioritize. Why do you think that cultivation is the biggest? The protagonist has a golden finger. It's a joke if he can't get the Dharma after he develops.
This book is a fighter among garbage
First of all, let's not talk about the experience of practicing martial arts. Damn it, you only need 10,000 experience points at the beginning. The first level is 100,000 points. Damn it, you can't even practice it to death. Do you believe it or not? Then it is said that others have 5,000 soldiers. It's not a good idea. Damn it, you don't even look at those who have a few hundred people and become warlords, and those who have a few dozen people and are called commanders. Why don't you say that?
In this brain circuit, the protagonist has just learned martial arts and wants to conquer demons. This is a complete fool's behavior. It's easy to reduce your intelligence.
It's a very good subject matter, and it has to be this system. Don't people nowadays know how to write online articles without a system? ? ?
There is a big problem with the setting. The author has not figured out why the setting is a warlord. Originally, the path of killing and separatism has become the path of success and virtue. It is often said that he is neither good nor foreign... He is not written like a young commander but is written as a fool. His temperament, means and political skills can be said to be...
It's embarrassing to write. There are plots in the fantasy part and you can still watch it. Others, such as developing military management, are naive in their ideas and illogical in their methods. The key points are a large part of it, which makes people more and more embarrassed as they read. The author needs to practice his writing skills more
Ren Tingting is already a cousin, so she can't escape? Are you sick? 😦
This book is good. In that era, there were zombies and other things. Plus, domestic and foreign, with the identity of Young Marshal, it can be very huge.
I've started a new book, so please support me. Come on
I hope this book can be as exciting as the previous books, and also that this book can have a beginning and an end. Come on
The level has dropped. I used to be a disciple of Uncle Jiu, but now it's obviously written by AI, and it's a no-brainer.









