Folklore Uncle Jiu: I Can Add Some Points to My Taoist Teachings

It's really well written, read it for yourself, it's amazing, hahahahahahaha

The incident was good, but it developed too fast and did not match the original timeline. It's time to move to the old man's grave. Qiu Sheng hasn't accepted Uncle Jiu as his disciple yet? In the original work, during this time period, Qiu Sheng had been a disciple for at least five years. Kung Fu and Taoism are also considered beginners. Therefore, book friends who like the original work will feel a little uncomfortable when they see this.

First of all, the timelines don't match up. Second, it is very clumsy. There are many words to describe the fight, but the actual fighting plot is very few and not detailed enough. It does not show the specific combat power at all, and it is very vague. Third, in just over forty chapters, a dead woman from the Shenxiao sect appears. Repeatedly describe how beautiful she is and how she has outstanding temperament. Sure enough, he soon became involved with the protagonist. It makes people look disgusting. If the murderer's testimony is still interesting, it is probably hanging by a thread. The next many chapters will involve this woman, and he will probably hook up with her, which will make people irritated. I relied on fellow Taoists to test the poison, and I couldn't stand it anymore.

Generally speaking, there is a problem at the beginning. During the Republic of China, foreign countries were darker, especially if you were Chinese, and were not as safe as China. At the beginning, you actually wanted to go to a foreign country to escape the war. I really don't know what you were thinking. Also, the Feng Shui master in Mr. Zombie obviously wanted to destroy the Ren family. How can you say that the Feng Shui master has a conscience?

If the realms are not divided well, it is better to refine the Qi, refine the Qi to transform into the spirit, refine the spirit to reverse the emptiness, and refine the emptiness to combine with the Tao. Bad review

Try to update it. I still like this kind of Jiu Shu comprehensive type. I'll keep it for now. It's a bit scarce.

Real ! ! But I don't read it👀👀... You can beat ghosts by reading this book

It's a mess, it's subdued, it's like several novels merged into one.

Do you dare to be worse? Uncle Jiu came up and took over his apprentice's territory? Can it be so tasteless? Funny or not? It's a mess... The timeline is also a mess, if you don't want to write a fanfic, don't speculate on the movie...

God speed up the update! Good luck