The Heavens Begin from Pingshan

After about chapter 50, there were no major problems with the plot except that it progressed a bit slowly. However, there was no mention of women in dozens of pictures, and suddenly the red girl was mentioned, and the protagonist became the same as a gangster, and the plot completely changed. As mentioned earlier, the red girl hates the smell of men, but when she sees the male protagonist, she says she is impressed by his masculinity. A heroic woman suddenly looked like a man she had never seen in eight lifetimes. The protagonist also changed from working hard to practice to wanting a harem stallion. The plot is too abrupt and disgusting. Both points are too much.

It is a time-travel novel in itself, but you changed the original work into a mess, then you might as well not write the original work and offend the other author, and it is not as good as the original work. Adding random plots should be a waste of words.

It is recommended that the author updates more frequently, updating four or five chapters a day.

I don't really like the revival of spiritual energy in the real world, so I slipped away.

It feels quite disgusting to see the protagonist sharing his food with a group of people and talking about the art of controlling his subordinates. Not to mention that the protagonist needs a lot of meat to practice martial arts. The protagonist does not give face to the boss and wins over the younger ones. How does the protagonist still want power?

Chen Yulou was pretty good to him. Whoever came to power would control his subordinates and did not harm his life. It was he who betrayed him first.

An ordinary person was caught and killed like a Gu just after traveling through time. There were only 19 people left out of 300 people. People like this are generally cannon fodder for a group of people who dig graves and rob them. For Chen Yulou, the leader of Xieling, there is no way to control such people. He must have a lot of heart to dare to accept him as a confidant, let alone teach martial arts. Aren't you afraid of being killed? Like pig's feet, if people with special characteristics are not killed in advance, forget it, this way they can still be reused😔

It's better not to read it, it's a waste of time and money. The book's foundation is too poor and it feels like it was written by a brainless middle school boy. The protagonist is selfish and cold-hearted. The people in it are written like idiots, and the plot is written haphazardly and has no logic in order to arrange some equipment and experience for the protagonist.

It can't be Daluo Jinxian again. You must know that the highest level in Chinese orthodox Taoism is to become a heavenly immortal. There has never been such a term as Daluo Jinxian.

The writing is not rigorous at all and has no logic at all.