Take Liu Tianxian to the World of Film and Television

Two stars for this subject, you are too ink-blank, you are really ink-blow, what do you want to see? Are you looking at the kind of celebrity bullshit in the real world? What you wrote is too fake, it is impossible to do that, and your time intervention point is too weird. You actually intervened at the age of 37. If you don't want to take care of a person in other worlds, then you should set him to be an adult at 22 or 30 and have his own stable values. 30 Is already too big, and the protagonist is actually set to be in 30, and don't you feel that you are too ink? The reality is over and over again. Why are you reading this book? Except for the heroine, it was just for this time travel, but you didn't get to the point and wrote more than ten chapters before you started to mention the system. I thought that this time I was going to get to the point, but in the end, I went to talk about other things. This is what everyone is looking at. You can't give it to him for this first promotion and then suppression. It has been suppressed for too long, and no one will read it. In reality, who wants to see that you write a time travel novel instead of the entertainment industry? Why do you mention Yang Mi so much? Does it matter? Does this have anything to do with him? If you want to time travel, just go back in time. What everyone is looking forward to is the various stories that happened between the two of them in another world, and their relationship, don't you think it's too fast? It's like a thousand miles a day, and you wrote more than ten chapters, and it only took a few hours? Moreover, the heroine you wrote is Liu Yifei. Your first choice for choosing her to travel through the world should not be a martial arts fairy or something like that? How did you choose the zombies? Does he go with this? And that system is also a middle-aged and old-age marriage system. Are you kidding? If you travel through the system, you will travel through the system. You have to make them gradually cycle through this thing. You can't show the main plot at the beginning. What everyone wants to see is that they travel through time, and then burst out some other things, and then start to gradually advance their emotional lines little by little. You can set up a world, and after the two worlds are formally determined to be together, there will be enough stories for them to travel together, and then some other things will break out. You said you have made such a mess now, and then made it into the real world and wrote a lot of things that are completely inconsistent with the main plot. What is the use of immersing yourself in the branch plot and not advancing the main plot? I wrote dozens of chapters at the beginning. If I don't push the main line, any good person will be persuaded to quit. What we need to see is the kind of step-by-step, logically online little by little, and then make changes, and improve the strength little by little, rather than your kind of self-promotion, especially when the protagonist said that the heroine may not care about immortality that much, is it possible? Brother, no one cares about longevity. No matter how rich he is, he will still care about longevity. In ancient times, emperors, generals and ministers were powerful, but in the end, the heroine still pursued immortality. She was already 37. Why didn't he care about immortality? If you say that the protagonist you are writing is a 15-year-old, then he may not care so much that he is already 37, and a small half of his life, or even a large half of some people's life, has passed. If you ask a person in his 30s, who has money, spare money, and time, ask him, do you want to gain immortality? I believe that few people will refuse. It is really a waste of time to ignore this subject.

After reading about ten chapters, I feel like the male and female protagonists are crazy.

The previous one is okay, it has the smell of the overbearing CEO back then, he was blindly strong and overbearing but without any brains, but he could barely hide his flaws. However, I originally thought it would be better to explain it at the beginning, but since crossing Far Cry, it has been completely over-the-top. It takes more than ten chapters to show off your affection like crazy. You have watched too many Korean dramas and Taiwanese dramas. Don't you feel embarrassed?

It feels even worse than what was written by AI.... Hey, I can't stand it.

See Get Ready to Enter Resident Evil! I gave it three stars because I really like the subject matter and the heroine is Liu Qianqian! No matter what other people say about Mo Ji, whether they are talking about Yang Mi or something, I think it's pretty good. I like to read entertainment articles about female protagonists. Will she still be the same after she has left the entertainment industry? From the beginning, she and Liu Qianqian wandered around in different worlds, not mentioning the real entertainment industry at all. Personally, I found it difficult to introduce the heroine to be Liu Qianqian! It's no different from a passerby! ! ! The first choice in this world may have something to do with writing about Yang Mi, right? The second Resident Evil is confused! ! Chinese people prefer to watch the evolving world of low martial arts, high martial arts, immortals, myths and other Chinese elements! ! What I can't stand is that before entering Resident Evil, the protagonist is planning to develop the server technology of Resident Evil Red Queen, first build an advanced and non-dangerous pharmaceutical group, and become the world's richest man! ! ! I just don't want to read it anymore. With this system, you are forever young, you are immortal, and you are bound to a celebrity like Liu Qianqian. You should be more low-key. You have no money now. Even if you don't spend Liu Qianqian's money, you can't bring out the wealth in all the worlds. Besides, is it really useful for you to ask for money? ? If you set up an advanced pharmaceutical group in reality, are you afraid that others will not investigate you or be jealous of you? When the company reaches a certain level, do you want to own it yourself? What's more, it's an advanced pharmaceutical group! How much do you want to go see Li Lianying? ! Unless nothing in this world can hurt you and the people and things you care about, but to this extent who cares about money? ?

It's so poisonous that I can't handle it without my brains.

Who in their right mind could accept being bound to a stranger so calmly? When he came up, he forced her to kiss her and move her hands and feet. If Liu Yifei is so easy to handle, she won't be single until now. Large-scale movies and TV series have been filmed, and I feel scared after being kissed. There are no bodyguards in such a big villa. This is too much, so what if I send you in? Be strong when you come up, and no normal person will let you go.

Very detailed evaluation (too watery)

I like books like this, cheers for the author

Author, where have you been? How many days have you stopped updating?