The World of Film and Television Begins with Ning'an as a Dream

Before I traveled (dreamed), I worked 9 to 5 and was just submissive. After traveling (dreaming), I still worked my butt off. I went through several worlds and still got no benefits or rewards. Isn't this traveling in vain?

I keep dreaming and don't write about the reality at all. I have exhausted my talent. No wonder no one watches it.

How much does the author want to lick Gu Tingye? He rushed to recognize his younger brother, redeemed the leader of the trip and asked him to help Gu Er's housekeeper, and lead Gu Er and Zhang Guifen. In the end, Gu Er's eldest son attacked the British Duke, and the second son attacked the Marquis of Ningyuan, and there was another Duke on his body! This is more of a protagonist than a protagonist, so why not send Minglan away as well? Is there anyone in such a hurry?

Novel novels that time travel and become people with faces in dramas are all low-star. They are all lj and gs

After watching Pi, I don't even know what his purpose is for time travel. Just traveling through time for the sake of traveling through time?

First, the logic of the text is confusing. For example: in this paragraph, the protagonist is still thinking about things in the previous world, and in the next paragraph the system prompts "The host is dreaming and will travel to the XXXX world immediately"! Hahaha. Putting aside the fact that the protagonist you are describing is awake, why is he dreaming? What's more, you were thinking about other things in the first sentence, and dreaming of other worlds in the next sentence? Isn't there a transition in the plot in the middle? ! Even if it's dark and it's time to go to bed, that's more reasonable, right? ? ? It's just random writing. . . Second, the way of traveling changes! At the beginning, the protagonist is hypnotized and loses consciousness, and travels (dreams) through several worlds in succession! Return to the real world later! It mentioned that after a one-month gap in the real world, the protagonist can travel through the world with whatever theme he wants! What's more, as soon as you come back from here, you can immediately travel again, and it's not a return to the previous world! A mess. . . Third, the writing is messy! Although, there is no mission! However, is the return of the protagonist too casual? ? ? It's only been a few months since the plot started (Asking the Heart World), and the plot has only reached half of the story. The heroine can return if she falls in love with her; some die of old age, this is normal! (Little Happy World);... Mainly focus on one, whatever you want! Typical: Write whatever comes to mind!

The writing is really rubbish. It's just a dream. In reality, it's still like a dog.

The plot is not compact and rich enough, and it feels a bit like an assembly line.

After traveling through several worlds, how has Pig Horn grown? In the first world, did you learn some internal skills? In the second world, did you learn some math, physics and chemistry or the high school part? ? What's the point? Are you always led by the plot?

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