Mortals Seek Immortality

I really understand why a bunch of authors write fanfics without even understanding the original work. Who gave you the courage? Isn't it enough to make up for the anime now?

Update soon ah ah ah Author, please update quickly.

There are too many secondary settings, such as lifespan, magical weapons, talismans, spiritual consciousness, etc. Except for the realm of cultivation, other changes have been poorly made. There is no single chapter to explain, which makes it very awkward to read. The consciousness of the soul of the soul is hundreds of miles away, while the original Master Mulan is only 300 miles or kilometers. The protagonist's consciousness in the Nascent Soul stage was completely attacked by the consciousness of the demon beast in the late stage of the formation of the pill. The first time he fainted for 10 seconds, and the second time he fainted for several minutes. I am really speechless. Is your consciousness in the Nascent Soul stage a piece of cake? ? You can search for souls when you are still in the Dan Formation stage. I am really speechless. Soul search is the ability of the Nascent Soul in the Nascent Soul stage. Well, the protagonist can search for souls. You have the consciousness of the Nascent Soul stage and can barely accept it. But others can also search for souls in the early stage of Dan Formation. You are too ridiculous. Since we are the same person, why should we respect the original work? The second hypothesis is the biggest problem of this book, and the explanation of things is not clear. Many things have no results. Some of them will mention the results after a few chapters or even dozens of chapters, but I haven't seen some of them. It feels like I am skipping through the book. I am very speechless...

Overall, it's pretty good. This is the first novel I've come across about a mortal who lives in the realm of demons.

Thinking about the finale so soon. . . . .

The protagonist written later seems to have no logic. Since she is a concubine, why should she sell things? Even the protagonist can spot it, but can't people who are taller than the protagonist spot it? This paragraph should be changed. There is still room not to let the second person know.

The author's writing is good, but the updates are too slow. Please follow up. It feels uncomfortable to look at each picture every day╯▂╰

Come on, follow the near center.

What's going on in episode 125? Why is it repeated?

It's so disgusting that you dare to appear in any trash novel. This kind of protagonist really makes you feel trash. The author should go home and sleep, and stop writing novels. The protagonist of the novel is a waste.