Immortality

The biggest failure is that the male protagonist falls in love with each other, and says that he loves Bao'er and Kui'er the most, and wants them to die, but as for him, women everywhere like him, and he doesn't refuse, he just feels helpless, and finally accepts that he has two figures, so he thinks that only he knows, when others are ****, one is the emperor, and the other is going to China, just check it out I know your information. Who does the protagonist think he is? When he comes to the ****** master, he loves him, the daughter of the sect master, the daughter of the celestial dynasty, the daughter of the holy land, etc., And it is love for no reason. You are a person from a remote place, who do you think you are? I think people like you are not qualified to talk about love, talk about love, and say how much you love so and so. How many women have loved him since the beginning.

Why do you have so many women? Interesting? One is Bao'er, one is Sad Qingsi, one is Qianyou, and one is Tian Ling'er. There is also Zixun. I just want to ask, where does a person with a third or fourth level of innate talent come from so much charm? , I won't kill you even if you fall in love with someone else's girl. Although it has the effect of an aphrodisiac, what is the difference between doing this and doing it to a strong woman? An ordinary woman would kill him when she woke up, let alone a capable woman? Is it interesting to write about so many women in just a few chapters? What to write next?

Why are they so full of YY and fake stuff like the crappy novels about cultivating immortals? I came here to read Chess, but I was so disappointed. Novels with this kind of content are too cheap.

This author must be crazy. Not only is the 80-year-old man cultivating immortality, he is still an old pervert, and a teenage girl wants to have a harem.

The plot is exactly the same as that of Eternal Immortal Sky, only the name has been changed. If you can't write it, don't write it. Is it interesting?

Although he has no heirs, it does not prevent Mr. Zhong from adopting a child. This matter really makes him have no idea what to do, but naturally there will be some people who can always remember Mr. Zhong.

I watched Eternal Sky first, and then this one. This is probably the original version written before. Each has its own advantages and disadvantages (the humor elements of Eternal Sky impressed me deeply), but overall it is still better than Eternal Sky. It's still a little bit close to being a masterpiece, the style is good, it's not a blind upgrade, wisdom and bravery dominate, it's more in line with reality (in reality, people with developed brains are better than people with developed muscles), but the resourcefulness is not amazing and rigorous, and although some parts are self-justifying, they still lack persuasiveness. The part involving the earth is still too jumpy, affecting the style, not better. The author is very ambitious, covering a wide area, with many pits, and many characters, but it is still a little too focused on one thing and the other, and it is difficult to follow the lead. The skill of controlling it is still low. For example, magical powers, mythical beasts, avenues, etc. Are only rushed to the top in the last few chapters. The layout is not smooth enough. For example, some are important supporting roles in the early stage and passers-by in the later stage, and even have no chance to bubble up (such as Wu Jiu) Tian, Huzu, etc.), How many queens have not been implemented, such as Su Meiniang, Zixun, Nu Qinghui, Yinglan, and Nie Qingqing, who have not been mentioned, as if they have disappeared out of thin air. In my impression, no one seems to have positively admitted being a queen. The description of the emotional line is too weak, often in a few words, and the writing and ink are not rich enough. At the same time, the promotion and upgrading of dual cultivation in the early stage became useless in the end. There are also some people who always find it difficult to die and not clean enough. In fact, not many people die in the whole book. Personally, I think the death of some people should be more meaningful and tragic, such as Zhuangzi, Mozi, Nan Batian, Five Emperors, Ying, Jian Ao, Sui, Bai Huang, etc. At the last moment. In the end, most of them did not die, and the shock was much less. After all, one general can accomplish everything!

I thought it was a dark text, but I didn't expect it to be a diaosi text, a saintly text.

This is the fifth time, everyone support me! Created the Fairyland genre, I love it

Mr. Zhong was born into a dog when he was over 80 years old. He should have become so angry that he wanted to kill the daughter of the boss because she broke a wooden sculpture. This was written as a gentle Xiu Erdai. If the unruly Xiu Erdai protagonist in the book had not died, he would have shed his skin. After more than eighty years, love has calmed down, and the second generation Xiu went out to experience, why did the leader ask the protagonist to accompany him? It is said that it is experience, which means that a mortal has more than 80 years of experience. There are many people in the sect who have lived for one or two hundred years. One or two hundred years of monk experience is not enough for the protagonist and a mortal who has eighty years of experience. Haha, the gatekeepers of the sect are all one or two hundred years old. This leader is so idle that he always pays attention to a disciple who has just started and has no qualifications.