Notes of Mortal Adventures
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True monk He is a monk who likes to listen to all kinds of stories Because in the story Contains many truths and insights, Once you understand, you will understand It's quite important that I also have your things. Don't ask me why Because I have wine Can you tell us about the journey? What have you experienced? ...
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Official(14)Scraped 2mo ago
Isn't it an adventure scene that can only be entered once? Even if there are a dozen golden light period scenes that talk about one thing, after entering, will the other dozen disappear?
Author, what are you writing about? There are so many mortal fans, but the level is considered to be at the bottom. The writing is long-winded, the plot is watery, incoherent, and incomprehensible. It is too uncomfortable and strenuous to read. If it is understandable to a novice, organize the outline carefully, make the cheats simple and easy to understand, and avoid some logical problems. Also, the plot should serve the protagonist, and there should be no irrelevant plots. The writing style should be improved. These are the things you need to improve urgently and lay the foundation for your next book, otherwise the results of future books will not be good. I hope the author will become a god soon! !
Doesn't the author think it's watery? ? Fanfiction, is it necessary to explain too many things? There is also a lot of activity in my heart, Explain more, it's 1 and it's 2 and it's 3 Once you have the bottle in hand and hanging on your body, you can take off straight away. What's the ink stain on? It's disgusting.
If you want to write a copy of the game, just tell me what you are writing about. San, who has just practiced Qi at the sixth level, is thinking about the Bloody Forbidden Land. He has just met a female cultivator named Han, and has no friendship with her. She directly tells you the information about the forbidden land. This NPC is really good at it. I can't even understand the original work, so what kind of fanfic is it?
The golden finger is very interesting, and it can actually be expanded.
I can't write the book anymore, it's already a mess
What a rubbish novel. I have low self-esteem and low IQ. I am just a pervert.
What a stupid thing, with the same spiritual roots, Han Li can walk with pig's feet, but he can't. He feels like a fool with low self-esteem.
Chapter 112 has not yet established the foundation, and more than 200 chapters have been completed.
This is the first time I spent money to see a piece of shit.
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Official(14)Scraped 2mo ago
Isn't it an adventure scene that can only be entered once? Even if there are a dozen golden light period scenes that talk about one thing, after entering, will the other dozen disappear?
Author, what are you writing about? There are so many mortal fans, but the level is considered to be at the bottom. The writing is long-winded, the plot is watery, incoherent, and incomprehensible. It is too uncomfortable and strenuous to read. If it is understandable to a novice, organize the outline carefully, make the cheats simple and easy to understand, and avoid some logical problems. Also, the plot should serve the protagonist, and there should be no irrelevant plots. The writing style should be improved. These are the things you need to improve urgently and lay the foundation for your next book, otherwise the results of future books will not be good. I hope the author will become a god soon! !
Doesn't the author think it's watery? ? Fanfiction, is it necessary to explain too many things? There is also a lot of activity in my heart, Explain more, it's 1 and it's 2 and it's 3 Once you have the bottle in hand and hanging on your body, you can take off straight away. What's the ink stain on? It's disgusting.
If you want to write a copy of the game, just tell me what you are writing about. San, who has just practiced Qi at the sixth level, is thinking about the Bloody Forbidden Land. He has just met a female cultivator named Han, and has no friendship with her. She directly tells you the information about the forbidden land. This NPC is really good at it. I can't even understand the original work, so what kind of fanfic is it?
The golden finger is very interesting, and it can actually be expanded.
I can't write the book anymore, it's already a mess
What a rubbish novel. I have low self-esteem and low IQ. I am just a pervert.
What a stupid thing, with the same spiritual roots, Han Li can walk with pig's feet, but he can't. He feels like a fool with low self-esteem.
Chapter 112 has not yet established the foundation, and more than 200 chapters have been completed.
This is the first time I spent money to see a piece of shit.
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