Magic Industrial Age

Too deliberate! The author has put a lot of effort into this chapter about water! I really felt that although the writing in the first chapter was mediocre, I didn't care about it when the golden finger was explained later. The writing in the following part was also very smooth and the writing style was quite sophisticated. I didn't think there was any problem along the way. Although it was too slow to enter the topic, there was no meditation practice within seven chapters, and the background was often explained, but I didn't think too much about it. Until this plot came out, I was really convinced, man, just like the reader comments in that paragraph, the so-called one piece ruining ten chapters is probably nothing more than this! Author, if you can, please change it as much as you can. It's really like putting a small amount of mouse droppings in a normal meal. Although it only contaminates a small area, the worst is not to eat that area, but it looks disgusting!

There are too many flaws, including the mentally retarded protagonist and the too-intelligent Goldfinger. And a stupid plot that can be called heaven-defying.

First of all, I personally like novels about the industrialization of magic energy, so novels involving the magic energy industry are full of stars. This is just to encourage the production of this type of novels and does not involve the actual star rating of the book! The protagonist of this book has a low IQ and likes to pursue the opinions of the AI ​​assistant and use his opinions as a plan of action for all problems. To put it simply, he has no independent opinion. After learning that the assistant and magic are not compatible, he does not re-design his own future course of action, but continues to rely on the assistant! It would not be inconsistent if Goldfinger was the protagonist of this book, after all, the protagonist is just a make-up. Moreover, the various details in the author's description of the background of the era are always fragmented and confusing. Some details are contrary to public perception, and some are full of personal conjecture, which is very imprecise! If you don't like the type of Magic Energy Industry, I suggest you don't read it. Essentially, this book is just a two-star novel. Most people don't comment on good books and just subscribe silently. When they encounter those who are unhappy, they waste time writing comments. After all, you want to vent out the frustration caused by reading, why should you hold it in? The author's writing style and life experience are not enough to support an article on Magic Energy Industry. Magic Energy Industry is essentially an article that combines social change and industrial construction. Once the details are not in place, it will appear empty and boring, and it is not suitable for novices or even ordinary writers.

There are too many things that are the same as reality. It looks awkward. The combination of magic power and tools is not good. It is not very different from reality. It writes about magic power but does not practice magic.

The subject matter is good and the plot is okay. There is a protagonist with a low IQ and no decision-making ability and a golden finger with an IQ of 100. They are really disgusting. If the protagonist is changed to dark blue, it will look 10 times better. The protagonist is a tool. Like a puppet, everything must be decided by the system.

It's so uncomfortable. Is this trying to filter readers or something?

The low-minded man with low intelligence, I thought it was a golden finger that could make the air fly in the air every second. The protagonist was so low-minded that he didn't work hard even if his IQ was not good enough. If you have extraordinary power, you won't learn if the golden finger can't provide you with shortcuts. 6666. You are so powerful, why don't you quickly prepare the previous gene potion? Lie down. When normal people arrive in the extraordinary world, they must grasp it immediately. The protagonist of Idiot is just special.

I'm convinced, writing a stupid protagonist will disgust the readers and leave them speechless.

Focusing on warrior training, I think Fa Ye's group will be broken up.

I've read two hundred chapters, but I haven't seen Magic Industry. Most of them are old-fashioned Western fantasy, and they are brainless after all. They are not interesting. It might have been popular about 15 years ago, but now the more I read, the more boring it becomes. Magic Industry is not integrated either, and it doesn't look good.