The Wizard Starts by Trimming the Donkey's Hooves
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The ancient empire is aging, the steam of the new federation is roaring, the sleeping gods are gradually reviving, and some giant beasts that disappeared in ancient times are beginning to slowly appear. When Ren came to another world, he also awakened a magical career panel. Renn believes that if a person's life can continue to be strong, one day he will be able to control his own destiny and be as good as the gods! Keywords: hot-blooded, relaxed, wizard.
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Official(68)Scraped 22d ago
Well, I read Chapter 8
I don't want to talk about the three golden chapters, so I just read chapter 8. The plot in chapter 8 is about: Goldfinger appears, and then starts working hard to repair the donkey's hooves, YY, which aristocratic woman, then continues to work hard to repair the hooves, and then gets into a fight with a little brat. To be honest, seeing this really pissed me off. If you want to write a cool article, be more direct, and the writing is different. A cool article is not like a cool article. The plot is not like the plot. Originally, cheating like you mainly focuses on cool writing. Why don't you take a look at what you wrote in Chapter 8 and make the plot advance a little? A novel without an outline presents this effect. The author may not even know what he is writing.
Running account, gaining experience - adding points - shocking three axes
It feels like it has turned into a plot of repeated dungeons to gain experience. There is no main plot at all. The main plot is to gain points by farming monsters, and the reward is that the supporting characters are shocked and slapped in the face. The basic rhythm of the whole book is to farm monsters - add points - shock, farm stronger monsters - add points - shock, the protagonist becomes stronger and thinks he is invincible and then meets stronger people, jumps the map, farm stronger monsters - adds more "cool!" Skill points - shocking the originally strong people! It's written with the beauty of a running story. To be honest, I didn't even have to guess the plot after watching it. Anyway, it's just the same thing as killing monsters and adding a little bit of shock. The ending is probably that the protagonist adds a little bit of strength until the boss is shocked at the end, and then the boss is shocked to death! [Emot=default,18/]
It's well written, don't read those malicious bad reviews that don't have enough brains.
The writing is beautiful. Do you want to teach other authors when they write books? Well, you should write your own book and read it
Stop engaging in pure love. You can eat what you want and let go of what you want. How many times has your sister broken up and stayed with Anna? She has no feelings and writes these things that make people around her misunderstood. Just be more direct?
Quite interesting. But it's nonsense to temporarily restore the state by adding some points. What's even more ridiculous is that the active skills have no CD. After the power burst, adding some points to make him lively and vigorous can still continue the power burst. It's better to just forget about being invincible, and say everything is the result of the protagonist's own efforts.
Gradually transition from food and grass to poisonous weeds
The latest plot is getting more and more poisonous. You know clearly that others are plotting against you, but you still risk yourself.
I originally thought this would be more out of the ordinary, but it still fell into the clichés. After reading 150 chapters, I still didn't like it. To sum up, it is: system text + invincible flow! There are conflicts, but there are no twists and turns. From the beginning of the system, there has been one thing - let enemies come from all directions, and I will suppress them with my own strength! Forget about the domineering and invincible style, but then I still want to pretend to be a pig and eat the tiger
As soon as the plot unfolds, it's all garbage.
Three Golden Chapters
The third golden chapter is really not very well written and makes people less interested in reading it.
The upgrade speed is too slow. It takes more than 100 chapters to become a knight. How many chapters does it take to become a wizard?
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Official(68)Scraped 22d ago
Well, I read Chapter 8
I don't want to talk about the three golden chapters, so I just read chapter 8. The plot in chapter 8 is about: Goldfinger appears, and then starts working hard to repair the donkey's hooves, YY, which aristocratic woman, then continues to work hard to repair the hooves, and then gets into a fight with a little brat. To be honest, seeing this really pissed me off. If you want to write a cool article, be more direct, and the writing is different. A cool article is not like a cool article. The plot is not like the plot. Originally, cheating like you mainly focuses on cool writing. Why don't you take a look at what you wrote in Chapter 8 and make the plot advance a little? A novel without an outline presents this effect. The author may not even know what he is writing.
Running account, gaining experience - adding points - shocking three axes
It feels like it has turned into a plot of repeated dungeons to gain experience. There is no main plot at all. The main plot is to gain points by farming monsters, and the reward is that the supporting characters are shocked and slapped in the face. The basic rhythm of the whole book is to farm monsters - add points - shock, farm stronger monsters - add points - shock, the protagonist becomes stronger and thinks he is invincible and then meets stronger people, jumps the map, farm stronger monsters - adds more "cool!" Skill points - shocking the originally strong people! It's written with the beauty of a running story. To be honest, I didn't even have to guess the plot after watching it. Anyway, it's just the same thing as killing monsters and adding a little bit of shock. The ending is probably that the protagonist adds a little bit of strength until the boss is shocked at the end, and then the boss is shocked to death! [Emot=default,18/]
It's well written, don't read those malicious bad reviews that don't have enough brains.
The writing is beautiful. Do you want to teach other authors when they write books? Well, you should write your own book and read it
Stop engaging in pure love. You can eat what you want and let go of what you want. How many times has your sister broken up and stayed with Anna? She has no feelings and writes these things that make people around her misunderstood. Just be more direct?
Quite interesting. But it's nonsense to temporarily restore the state by adding some points. What's even more ridiculous is that the active skills have no CD. After the power burst, adding some points to make him lively and vigorous can still continue the power burst. It's better to just forget about being invincible, and say everything is the result of the protagonist's own efforts.
Gradually transition from food and grass to poisonous weeds
The latest plot is getting more and more poisonous. You know clearly that others are plotting against you, but you still risk yourself.
I originally thought this would be more out of the ordinary, but it still fell into the clichés. After reading 150 chapters, I still didn't like it. To sum up, it is: system text + invincible flow! There are conflicts, but there are no twists and turns. From the beginning of the system, there has been one thing - let enemies come from all directions, and I will suppress them with my own strength! Forget about the domineering and invincible style, but then I still want to pretend to be a pig and eat the tiger
As soon as the plot unfolds, it's all garbage.
Three Golden Chapters
The third golden chapter is really not very well written and makes people less interested in reading it.
The upgrade speed is too slow. It takes more than 100 chapters to become a knight. How many chapters does it take to become a wizard?
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Abandon books Goldfinger: Panel Girlfriend: many The protagonist travels through the world of wizard knights, starting from repairing donkey hooves to practice skills and gain proficiency. It's a relatively old-fashioned novel about Xiaobai. The protagonist has a sarcastic face and occasionally does stupid things. The villain is either jealous or in love, a clown who just gives away experience. It's acceptable to me. It doesn't affect my enjoyment. Chapter 198: Abandoning the Book, I am disgusted with this kind of protagonist who does not know how to take the initiative and is either being fucked or waiting to be fucked. Take the two barons jumping around for example. They have been passively dealing with the two barons repeatedly sending people to mess with him. They have no initiative at all. Finally, they took the initiative to die, but they didn't want to quickly eradicate the roots. They did other things for several chapters. Also, the best friend who ate less in the early stage and left half of the meal for the protagonist actually didn't do anything anymore? So why did you write this plot? Highlight the ungratefulness of the protagonist?
This is also a new wizard book that I have been following recently. The protagonist has the same name as the protagonist of "Unromantic Fantasy World" that I recommended before. What is interesting is that the protagonist has a similar personality. I hope the author can give the protagonist a character like "Unromantic Fantasy World" It is an opportunity to always stick to your moral values and true intentions. Cheating is to be able to protect the things you want to protect, rather than letting yourself do whatever you want. The real strength is to be able to exercise self-restraint, rather than simply showing off your holiness in front of others. Otherwise, cheating will only be boring to nothingness in the end.
Food + Western Fantasy, the name is a bit weird! The content is quite well written, I would also recommend it...
Genre: Fantasy Daily updates (deadline for adding to book list): 5000+ Status (deadline for adding to the book list): Not on the shelves Author's last book: None Style: Xiaobai Genre: System + Witcher flow that exists in the title Experience: mediocre, non-toxic and enjoyable Disadvantages: It is advertised as a fantasy novel, but some of its features are fantasy, and there is nothing memorable about it. I haven't watched the update recently, and I have experienced serious level control, so I'm considering taking it into consideration.
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