This Wizard is Unscientific

The writing is messy and the sentences are broken. The plug-in is too strong. Many conceptual things are mentioned repeatedly without clear explanation, and the more you read, the more blurry they become. The author's humorous abuse of various bad Internet jokes convinced me of one thing. Short and quick Internet jokes cannot improve the reading experience when reading long texts, unless a collection of jokes is written like "The King, Spare Your Life". I think that online article authors who want to write jokes should draw nutrients from cross talk and flip over and over again to make the humor of the long article more solid and more in line with the plot. However, this requires design, and not all authors have the ability. The protagonist's character is deep and wise. Generally speaking, the protagonist's wisdom is reflected by lowering the IQ of the people around him, and this is the same in this game. The hang-up is too high, and the level collapses from the beginning. The author has no plan to write an invincible style. So the fun of this game lies only in the exploration of the setting. However, the author's vague and unclear writing style makes it difficult to appreciate this kind of fun.

I can only use some fancy terms, but I can't explain them clearly, which makes me very unhappy😕! It would be better to get a rice cooker talent and directly evolve the SSS level talent Demon Sealing Wave!

This is my first time reading a wizard novel with this theme. I have read a lot of wizards and sequence novels, but I feel that some of the settings in this book are quite novel and a bit innovative, such as steam wizards, sheep transformation, etc. [Emot=default,04/] But the problem is that this book feels like it contains a lot of academic terms, which is a bit like a fan drama birth novel. Many academic names cannot be understood... The author does not introduce it, and I feel that the introduction is not clear, just to give you a feeling that it is very powerful... And the writing style is a bit It's not smooth to read, and there are some typos in some sentences, etc. [Emot=default,04/] I think this system is quite interesting in the plot, but it's a pity that you can't use it for 62 days as soon as you start. It feels like you slap the protagonist to death at the beginning, which leads to The protagonist has a lot of skills, and there are too many unreasonable things when leveling up It's a pity that the theme of this theme is poor, the writing and plot are not the same, the sequence ➕Wizard➕Steam➕Some pretty good ideas, the theme is written and it will definitely become a god.

The author himself cannot explain the wizard ecology clearly. He mentions it multiple times in each chapter, and the golden finger is so precise that it seems to have become all-powerful.

The author stood on the shoulders of giants and pulled a big one, and endured reading more than 200 chapters. There was clearly content that could be written, but he insisted on talking about a bunch of nonsense concepts. He couldn't even understand what the sequence was. He always economized the world. He harvested hundreds of thousands of magic gold materials and bought some needed materials. Without any nutrition.

The collapse of combat power is an exaggeration. Normal novels start to collapse after writing hundreds of chapters. Your combat power system collapsed within 100 chapters is abstract enough. It feels like it was written by a studio. There are a lot of typos and the logic of various languages ​​is inconsistent.

I'm afraid I got the wrong system name? A stable development system. Only by traveling to dangerous places can the system's capabilities be fully exerted? Is your system stable? What does it have to do with development?

The fourth chapter at the beginning gives people a feeling that their combat power has collapsed, and the rest is also very exaggerated.

It's always low-level fighting against high-level, good guys, those who rise to high-level are useless. And it's too slow. Chapter 240 or 280 is only the fourth level. 6.

Those who read it early felt that the setting was good, and it was very enjoyable to read as a cool novel.