Stone Rain in Konoha

The protagonist's character is developed very well. Let's call the protagonist a charlatan, but he is actually very smart. Let's call the protagonist smart, but in fact his brain circuit is very strange. Unlike some novels, it is always indifferent, with a cold smile on the corner of the mouth, an arrogant expression, and all that mess! Unlike these real sand sculptures, the protagonist can be said to be a real modern person... He is kind to others without losing guard, and is very polite to everyone. After getting to know him for a long time, he starts to become wordy. He is a proper boring man. There is never any small advantage between friends. Even if a friend is kind enough to teach the protagonist the sealing technique for free, the protagonist will not accept it, but a one-to-one exchange. He will not accept favors from others for no reason. When he troubles others to help, he will give corresponding rewards no matter how good the relationship is. Of course, when dealing with enemies, they are also decisive in killing, and they will not show mercy at all when they need to be killed. The character creation of the heroine is also very unique. He is gentle and kind to the protagonist and the friends around him, and he is never merciful to the enemies he kills. He has a clear sense of love and grudges. Most importantly, he is powerful. He does not hold the protagonist back and even saves the protagonist a few times. In general, the protagonist has a high IQ, the supporting characters have an online IQ, the villain does not become smart for no reason but is very smart and can even calculate against the protagonist, and the protagonist learns experience from every battle. To be honest, the biggest feeling when reading this book is that it feels comfortable... Although the plot does not have a big climax, and the development of the plot is also a bit dull, the excitement will not be reflected until the third ninja war. However, if you have read enough of the kind of exciting articles that are exciting all the way to the end and feel a little tired, you can go back and read this book, maybe it can relieve your boredom.

The author should probably do more plotting with the main characters. For example, Namikaze Minato, Hatake Sakumo, Jiraiya Orochimaru and the like.

Take two sticks a day to go faster.

I found that you have a big misunderstanding about ninjutsu levels and chakra. The chakra strength of ten ** ninjutsu is considered a jounin.

If you don't agree, you delete the comment, why don't you mention it?

Does the author have a single heroine in this article?

The author writes the battle scenes very well, and the daily plot is also very relaxed. There is no other Naruto fanfiction with such constant violence. The protagonist is not the kind of Long Aotian whose fate is up to him, nor is he a sandy protagonist for the sake of being sandy. It's quite satisfactory, with distinct characters, and each supporting role has its own characteristics. The protagonist's coquettishness, Namikaze Minato's chuuni, the third generation old man's decisiveness, Jiraiya's lust, and the heroine's gentleness and thoughtfulness, the characters of these supporting characters are all well written. The most amazing thing is that Sakumo Hatake. The unreasonable plot in the original book of committing suicide because he couldn't bear the pressure was actually solved by the author with a reasonable explanation. This is unexpected.

The author is very imaginative and the protagonist's ability setting is very good. The protagonist does not have strange abilities, such as systems, devil fruits and other settings from other worlds. Relying on the sealing technique research manuscript obtained by chance, he developed secret techniques and became a decent ninja with secret techniques. It seems that the skills currently developed by the protagonist are developing more and more in the direction of DNF Devil May Cry. It can be regarded as the ninja version of Devil May Cry. The fights are done honestly and the battle scenes are described very well. The disadvantage is that the writing style needs to be improved. The broken sentences in some places are a bit uncomfortable to read. It's considered food and fodder!

Hurry up and follow. Hurry up and follow. Two bases a day.

During the epidemic, there were three chapters a day. If the author had kept this pace, the book would have become a small hit long ago.