Naruto: Starting from Minus One

The description of the war scene at the beginning is really eye-catching. For most people at the bottom, the cruelty of the war is not described. They naturally think that if they are born, they will be some big village rich family, either Uchiha, Hinata, or Sarutobi. In fact, the vast majority of them are ordinary people without ninja talents. The troubled times are just as miserable as in the past. -- Let's talk about this book again. In this world that talks about blood, you are an ordinary person, a young loser, and you emphasize that you have never read the original work, and you have a withdrawn character. There are no plug-ins yet. I don't know who you are looking down on? There are so many people in the ninja world who experience life and death every day, but they can't compare to you, an inexplicable so-called time traveler. Let's look at the ninjas who were born as civilians: Namikaze Minato had first-class talent, first-class character, first-class understanding, and was guided by a famous teacher. What was the final result? Jiraiya, the same deepening luck, the same top-notch talents, what's the result? Orochimaru, with his first-rate wisdom and various abilities, his scientific research wisdom is no match for a teaching teacher with two swords, who was tortured to death. Metkai doesn't know any ninjutsu. He relies entirely on himself for his cultivation. He has top-notch combat power, but the results are still the same. So why are you, a civilian without plug-ins, disabled, and a time-traveler who doesn't know the original story better than these talented people?

After reading the beginning, I felt a little confused! It's understandable to write that he was saved by Tsunade or Jiraiya! What the hell is Danzo? It's okay that you are intact. You are missing arms, legs, and one eye, but were saved by Danzo? Return an adopted son? Who on earth was stupid enough to have such a start! 💩A lump💩

The writing is really strong. The author has a very deep understanding of Japanese culture. In addition, the author probably has political experience? The political part is also very well written. What shocked me the most was Shironase's final battle and Yuri Ame's departure, which respectively pushed the heroism of the fight to the death and the poignancy of fate to a very high level. Perhaps because there are many original characters, the author has his own ideas and rhythms, and hardly follows the original work; at the same time, the tragic meaning is too strong, so that it has lost the market of purely entertaining readers. However, the current rhythm is very good, I hope the author will work hard. This is a rare masterpiece, I look forward to the ending.

It feels so unrealistic, that is to say, I feel that the combat ability you wrote is very good, but the actual performance is quite poor. When I saw Dragon Vein, I found that it was directly after the plot after writing, which means that I did not expect the result after you directly marked it for me. I immediately didn't want to read it.

It's a good book, with a good introduction and start. There are few Danzo apprentice routes. In addition to being too protagonist-centered in the early stages (such as entering the school, Minato as a teacher, White Fang's guidance, and Tsunade's guidance), it's too easy to get. There is also an acceptable BOG. ​​The time traveler knows Naruto but has no idea about the content at all, not even a little bit. The Chuunin Exams section was too watery, which made me want to give up the book. Even after reading it, I felt it was watery. Another bad point is that the protagonist casually conducts experiments on Orochimaru. He seems to have no opinion at all. He looks like a cold weapon and has no mature personal meaning of a time traveler. The inserted dragon vein system is even more unreasonable and destroys the original perfect combat power system. The awareness of the dragon vein does not appear in the original work. Now I feel that the consciousness of the dragon vein is almost at the same level as Kaguya. This is a bit exaggerated. I will continue to read it. Apart from the issue of being a human guinea pig and the dragon vein, the rest of the writing is pretty good.

After reading Chapter 2, the protagonist is just like a native. Looking at the comments, there are no cheats. (What kind of world have I come to? Xue Ge had never read "Naruto" in his previous life. At most, he only knew about such a migrant manga. What is happening now is obviously beyond the understanding of ordinary people in a materialistic world. )

There's nothing much to say, Kishi has always been like this. Thank you to the author for pulling me out of a bunch of system and novice fans.

The rating is low, but the author still has some skills. It is much better than garbage system writing. Even if you cheat the protagonist, you still have to pay a price. Power without price can only be in dreams.

Excellent product. The people who wrote the negative reviews probably read Shuangwen. Don't think about the situation that the protagonist is dealing with at all. Okay, the author is pretty good.

This book is the best Naruto fanfic I have ever read, the author keeps it up!