Family Cultivation: Rise of the Wilderness

Moral model essay! It makes me want to vomit! A time traveler? As a person with modern ideological education? Can you accept injustice? I have been an unlucky guy since I was a child and was sent away. My father doesn't love my mother? I don't believe you don't have any resentment in your heart? The master doesn't care, but the family doesn't provide resources? Once again, the family was thrown into the old man's den to be used as a tool? Are you still happily teaching this and that student? Don't you have a share in the Foundation Establishment Pill? Practice was delayed again? What's the difference between blocking someone's path and enmity? It would be strange if a family of leeks could still have a normal mind.

I just want to say, are you writing about immortality or fictional history? I have already practiced Qi at level 5 at the beginning, but I only reached level 8 at Chapter 200. What did you write?

It's okay to read this book at a glance, but there are a few points 1. The camera is messy, and the narrative shots are all over the place, making people think that the chapter has been skipped. For example, when rescuing Li Xiangcheng, the scene cuts directly to Li Xiangming's training, with a lot of asides and remarks before picking up the plot of Li Xiangcheng. Don't know what writing technique is? It's hard to appreciate anyway. 2. The protagonist's combat power is erratic, forcing the protagonist's growth, which is unpleasant to watch! I was still writing about the Foundation Building Ceremony in the early stage of the foundation building. The Liuyinxu Divine Finger hit the frozen bone melting stage and had no combat power. However, later in the bone melting stage with Li Sangyu, it was only marginal ob. Later, to smooth things over, what was said about the protagonist not being able to be nurtured and supported by his family? I would like to ask, so many opportunities are given to the protagonist, are they not as good as family training? ? ? The main character's current income can at least be comparable to the Golden Elixir's direct biography. He has the green robe's refined magic power and the inheritance of the Green Cloud Cave to become a killer, but he cannot compare to the so-called "family genius"? ? ? If the family had so much energy, they would have returned to the Jindan family long ago. Li Xiangren has such high combat power because he is a sword cultivator, coupled with the broken golden elixir technique (if it is not broken, he may be Nascent Soul or above), and because he has been appreciated by the golden elixir master since childhood, and is comparable to half of the direct descendants of the golden elixir. Why is the main character written so much more than Lee Sang Yoona? What kind of protagonist does Lee Sang Yoo not have? The ancestral flying flame wheel is the foundation of the golden elixir. The protagonist has three golden elixir secrets, and there are also mana reserve runes, but there are also spiritual fire and curse runes. Is it necessary to write the protagonist in such a bad way? ? ? It's unpleasant to watch. 3. The protagonist's combat power is not systematic. Seeing now, I have no idea what path the protagonist is going to take. He is also a water magician, a beast master, and he wants to learn illusions. He has three golden elixir skills but is not as good at learning as his master. Even Fairy Green Cloud can counterattack in the mid-term and late-stage. The protagonist only knows Macabaka, and runs some children's houses. He uses the Lao Shi Zi Eye Technique picked up on the roadside, and the CD of the ultimate move is not mentioned, but the result is a blow back. The skills of cultivating immortals are even worse. It's almost 500 chapters before we reach the early stage of foundation building. There is nothing that the protagonist can do well... The protagonist is really written so badly that even a casual cultivator on the roadside is not like this. 4. Classic hydrology, as long as it is a setting, at least eight pages of it will be used as a base. If I write about elixirs, I would like to count its eighteen generations, which is tasteless.

It's okay, but the protagonist's advancement is a bit slow. Too much text is used on tactics. On the contrary, the battle of cultivating immortals is not outstanding.

How is this cultivating immortality? It's all a struggle for power. Today I officially moved it off the bookshelf and no longer read it.

After reading the latest chapter, I can't help but admire the author's layout. From the start of the Monkey Valley Demon Camp to the current Gushe Alliance, the ambition and ability of the protagonist are constantly reflected. The intrigues with various forces and families, and the competition with the geniuses of various generations. I also see the gap between myself and the real genius. It really makes people want to watch. The author is also very meticulous in describing the emotional relationship. Each female character has her own story and role. Let's carry it together. To make progress, or to jointly resist the coming of challenges, instead of being a vase or simply giving benefits to things like other novels, (not only the female characters, but also the male characters around each protagonist), in short, this is a novel that is very exciting in all aspects except that the realm improves very slowly. It can be published as a physical book. The author's solid literary skills and narrative ability will make people excited to read it!

Are you not invincible in the world of immortality? Isn't it because you are not invincible? You are special in your family's cultivation. If you don't have a golden finger, you are not as good as an aborigine. So why are you writing about time travel? If you lose face as a time traveler, you might as well write about aboriginal literature.

There are over 400 photos and I am still wondering which hall to set up. Are you here to popularize science and cultivate immortality? , Once a science popularization occurs, you can just write a paper.

Let me ask you one thing. When I write a book, I will inevitably make typos. Although I will check it after I finish writing it before sending it out. But I found that when checking in the background, it is not as good as looking carefully in the Qidian app. Therefore, if you see typos while browsing and feel that it affects your reading experience, please long press the paragraph and select and correct the errors. I will correct them in time. Thank you all.

When the protagonist Ye Ye encounters the children of a big family, they come up to kill him indiscriminately. However, when the protagonist fights back to kill them, he moves out of the family to threaten the protagonist, and the protagonist takes action. Brother, you killed someone in the wilderness without even collecting the body. And you are also a member of a big family. They are not merciful when others attack you. You have no fear of killing the protagonist. The protagonist only has so many scruples when he kills back. The funniest thing is that the gangsters use people from the Geng family to threaten people from the Li family. The key protagonist really thinks about it for a while. Also, the protagonist's name in the Li family is of no use when he is away from home, and all the masters he meets want to trick him. You are a cultivator who is either engaged in business wars and infrastructure construction or political struggles. You have spent 300 chapters on the sixth level of Qi refining and foundation building.