
I Am Yunshan Who is Defeated by the Battle
by Chensu
About This Novel
Originally, it was a happy thing to live again, but after rebirth, I was destined to face the protagonist. If I died, the sect was gone, and the apprentice was cheated, it was very unpleasant. Therefore, it was fun to fuck the protagonist for a while, and it was always fun to fuck the protagonist.
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Official(4)Scraped 13d ago
Where did the Dou Zun come from in the Jia Ma Empire?
I saw that he wrote about an ancestor, which was directly in the realm of Dou Zun, and I didn't want to read it. According to what she said, do the other major empires have it? The leader of the big forces in Zhongzhou is just a Dou Zun. To put it nicely, the Northwest Continent says it is not good. In rural areas and poor people, where do Dou Zun come from? A Douzong can be the king and hegemony, why don't you come out with a Douzong! Then is there a fighting saint in the Black Corner Domain? Aren't you funny? Does the ancient clan still have Dou Di Patriarch? Does the Snake Tribe also have an ancestor who is above Dou Zun? You won't be able to read this after you write it!
Give me some advice
Don't start with a paragraph that contains dozens of exercises, dozens of spiritual herbs, and so on. This will dissuade many people. The paragraphs are pretty good, and there is no "one paragraph to the end." It feels like the upgrade is a bit fast. A pill directly improves a big realm? ? ? It was given on the first day of the seven-day novice protection period. The pace is too fast and it will easily collapse after one or two hundred chapters. Next, this is the most important thing. I don't mind engaging in Japanese anime. It's not discrimination. There are few Japanese anime that have normal combat capabilities, especially Naruto and One Piece. That guy enjoys watching anime and his dick explodes. If you think about it carefully, the combat capability is too low. It is not suitable to be included in the novel system of cultivation.
There seems to be no Dou Zong in the Jia Ma Empire. Where can the Dou Zong come from?
This thing is poisonous
Enter with caution, enter with caution. I might as well attack you with poison.
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Official(4)Scraped 13d ago
Where did the Dou Zun come from in the Jia Ma Empire?
I saw that he wrote about an ancestor, which was directly in the realm of Dou Zun, and I didn't want to read it. According to what she said, do the other major empires have it? The leader of the big forces in Zhongzhou is just a Dou Zun. To put it nicely, the Northwest Continent says it is not good. In rural areas and poor people, where do Dou Zun come from? A Douzong can be the king and hegemony, why don't you come out with a Douzong! Then is there a fighting saint in the Black Corner Domain? Aren't you funny? Does the ancient clan still have Dou Di Patriarch? Does the Snake Tribe also have an ancestor who is above Dou Zun? You won't be able to read this after you write it!
Give me some advice
Don't start with a paragraph that contains dozens of exercises, dozens of spiritual herbs, and so on. This will dissuade many people. The paragraphs are pretty good, and there is no "one paragraph to the end." It feels like the upgrade is a bit fast. A pill directly improves a big realm? ? ? It was given on the first day of the seven-day novice protection period. The pace is too fast and it will easily collapse after one or two hundred chapters. Next, this is the most important thing. I don't mind engaging in Japanese anime. It's not discrimination. There are few Japanese anime that have normal combat capabilities, especially Naruto and One Piece. That guy enjoys watching anime and his dick explodes. If you think about it carefully, the combat capability is too low. It is not suitable to be included in the novel system of cultivation.
There seems to be no Dou Zong in the Jia Ma Empire. Where can the Dou Zong come from?
This thing is poisonous
Enter with caution, enter with caution. I might as well attack you with poison.









