I Am Cultivating Immortality in the Lottery of Mortals

First of all, the character of Pig's Foot began to practice immortality at the age of six and then moved modern things to the mortal world. May I ask the masters what kind of people know how to make these things? Where does Pig's Foot's habit of having random thoughts and obscene thoughts come from? The most speechless thing is the set opportunity. It is Phoenix blood and Phoenix egg. There is obviously a system, and it is Leilinggen. Why doesn't Pig's Foot practice step by step? Isn't it a smooth main line to use the opportunity given by the system to honor Taoist ancestors? Why do you want to make things superfluous by befriending Han Li and then running to find an opportunity on your own? In the early stage, Pig's Foot was obviously a little Kalami, so why was he wandering around? The most speechless thing is the human heart. If you train a bunch of subordinates, how can you have the confidence that others will follow the pig's feet? Just because he said a few nonsense words? People's hearts are never satisfied. How can pig's feet gain the confidence to control others? And when the pig's feet themselves are weak in the early stage?

Okay, very good. So far, among the mortal fanfics I have read, what you wrote about using the immortality method to practice is quite acceptable, at least it is not blurred. The writing is pretty well done, but there are some minor flaws. First, Daxin Magic is all-encompassing in its own right, including alchemy, talisman arrays, and magical powers. Secret techniques, etc. Are all-encompassing, but in your article, you only mention one inner demon cursed sword when cultivating the physical realm? The eternal life method, the cultivation method in the physical realm is not clear, and the inner demon curse sword is strictly a fighting method, not a training method. You must practice at least one practice, such as the seven emotions and six desires body, or the annihilation of the demonic body. Demon Fist, etc. There are also some body skills to practice, such as the ethereal demonic shadow step. This is the standard for the physical realm of immortality. But it's not reflected in your article. Blurred. Second, about 700 pounds in the realm of divine power. This is very confusing. . . . You want to say that you just broke through the divine power and your strength rose to the strength of a horse. Just do it, blur the strength data. Otherwise you will feel very uncomfortable later. It is recommended to use the power of several horses to calculate later. , In the original work, one black and yellow fierce horse = one thousand. It's totally unreasonable to be able to wear iron armor. It is impossible that only a thousand can break down the wall. But if you have to come up with some data to show it, I suggest you get 10,000, which is barely reasonable. Three. Regarding family arrangements. To be honest. A little bit poisonous. Not very reasonable. It's not that you don't take care of your family, but you are obviously poisoning and there is a risk of exposure. The most important thing is that the secret of the skill is exposed. This is the most important thing. And. To be honest, the parents in the article can only be over a hundred years old at most, so building a foundation will be difficult. You will definitely spend more time describing it later, which is a bit wrong and becomes a family story. Fourth, your early opportunities were a bit too big. The Lotus Sutra is about another great world of cultivating immortals. So, it also involves the system of cultivating immortals. Is it the same as your mortal system? Is there a conflict? It's not written in the article. The Immortal Dharma practice uses the opportunity of fire wind and lottery, but it has only reached ten horses? Too low. A minimum of 2-30 horses is reasonable. The reason is very simple, the level of opportunity is too high. Even if the limit of immortality is very high. However, the physical realm is just like that. You have only improved 10 horses, which is a bit overwhelming. No, the pressure was too harsh. And you haven't taken advantage of these opportunities to practice the physical realm of Daxin Magic. There are no reasonable arrangements in place. Bad review, and it is not a normal reaction of a person. Three thousand avenues, the early physical realm will have physical exercises. For example, the great origin technique seems to have an origin golden body. The Golden Body of Yama of the Great Five Elements. Etc. These physical qualities can all be developed through cultivation. Practicing it can increase the foundation of the physical realm and increase strength. Increase the chance of breaking through magical powers. Once you break through the magical power, the transformation of your magic power will also be very strong. . . . Five,,. . Not available for now. Other small poisonous spots are dispensable and have little impact. I remember there is a fanfic of Eternal Life, the main character also starts from Big Heart Magic, you can take a look and learn from it. Beautiful girl picture town building

Do you know how to use the small green bottle to break through the levels for 3 years to practice Qi, or the Lei Linggen? You might as well say that the protagonist has all the metal, wood, water, fire, and earth. This speed is slower than Han Laomo.

It was written in a fog, and after reading it for a long time, I didn't even know if it was a story about a mortal cultivating immortality. If it weren't for the name Han Li, I would have thought it was another novel. If you want to read mortal fan fiction, you can read Mortal: Fighting Monsters and Upgrading this fanfic. It's my first time writing a fanfic, and it's pretty good, with more than 600 chapters. Okay, a lot of food, the harem is pretty good, I don't breed horses, I take Nangong Wan as his wife, I don't want some authors, I'm afraid of writing fan fiction, just like them cowards, this one doesn't take the little green bottle, it's systematic, I didn't know the effect in the early stage, but later I learned that the elixirs dropped by killing people, monsters and the like are not over the standard, I sincerely recommend

Talking to myself, I really can't stand this.

Lei Linggen doesn't even give you foundation building pills? , Huang Maple Valley gives it to them,

The writing is awesome, the techniques are awesome, everything is awesome, The result is still a little Karami in the Qi training period. . . It's Qi training, spirit training, and physical training. Are you writing about fantasy or about cultivating immortality? ? Nausea

There is no freedom to mess around like this ah ah ah ah ah ah

Come on! The writing is good, keep up the excitement

Come on, I hope you will update more and your combat power will not collapse too quickly.