The First Immortal of Destiny
About This Novel
Want to cultivate immortality and seek immortality? Very good! Please start as a disciple of Shoushan! No hope? Don't want to do it? That's fine, go home, get a wife and have children, it's not bad to be a rich man! Wait, there seems to be a plug-in system! From now on, all you have to do is live forever! This book is also known as "Cultivation of Immortality Begins from Linjiang Sect and Follows the Destiny", "I Wanted to Go to the Mortal World and Live a Rich Life, but Suddenly I Came to Cultivation of Immortality Plug-in" -------Okay, I really don't know how to write an introduction, so let's leave it at that! Ps: This book is for everyone.
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Official(29)Scraped 11d ago
If you want to cheat, make the most of everything! If you have to work hard, just cultivate immortality orthodoxly! This is the most disgusting thing to be reluctant to read for a long time and even the basic settings are unclear! Your character can be a novice but the reader is not a novice, okay? You don't need to use all your firepower to quickly open up the world view, but you still work hard to practice and upgrade, and you become a double-faced person! I'm saying that you're cheating. No matter how hard you try, it's all in vain under the halo of cheating. The more words you write, the more uncomfortable you become (°ㅂ° ╬)
It took almost two hundred chapters of cultivation to break through from the first level of Qi gathering to the fifth level. No one can advance at this speed.
The section from the beginning of the book to the invasion of Linjiang Sect's demons is quite remarkable. I think it can be given 4 to 5 stars for its writing. Later, the great changes in the world started to happen. In the front, the demons spread out so much that they disappeared without a trace. It was obviously anticlimactic. I also wrote about countless taboo giants and ancient battlefields, but in the end it didn't survive in this world, so I started over in another world. It's typical of S B to abandon it after writing it. From my personal point of view, in fact, the book revolves around the struggle against the demons, and finally escapes to the Sky Patrol League and is hunted down by the Sky Patrol League, which would make this book exciting. Changing the map will make the previous map a mess, and you can only talk rubbish.
😥In the front, it is set that Xie Dao will be chased and killed. Later, after killing Xie Dao, he will directly use his magic weapon.
This plot is a bit outrageous. Aren't you afraid that the sect will expel you immediately after being discovered?
How about just holding on tight? You also go out to practice, what is your main focus in cultivating immortals? If you can gather energy and exercise, you must not exercise and exercise. You have reached a bottleneck and cannot improve, so you still have to go out and practice. When people tell you to go out, you just go out, are you a licker? I also deliberately improved my appearance, and they are definitely together again in the end. You have a wealthy couple, and you still have to go out and have sex.
More than 200 chapters have been written, and I haven't crossed a major realm.
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The author's words are really hard to describe. The starting setting is not bad, but the author can stop eating the settings all the time. There are no two Qiankun bags for Qi gathering, and one for the body training period. They have been pressing the protagonist to grow. Various water character numbers, weapon refining, alchemy, and drawing symbols are too simple. Is a small Kalami third-level alchemist in the Qi gathering realm reliable? The first level of Qi gathering can fly thousands of miles with a sword. All kinds of cool things. I don't know if he is the Golden Core Nascent Soul, but he also wants to push the realm, and he keeps slapping the face to force the protagonist to have various highlights. It makes people feel like a three-year-old child is holding a Barrett and standing and shooting continuously. I really can't stand it anymore.
The writing is really not good, could you seriously think about how to write it? Think more and write less like a fool
Hit the cards and get a little bit of growth experience
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Official(29)Scraped 11d ago
If you want to cheat, make the most of everything! If you have to work hard, just cultivate immortality orthodoxly! This is the most disgusting thing to be reluctant to read for a long time and even the basic settings are unclear! Your character can be a novice but the reader is not a novice, okay? You don't need to use all your firepower to quickly open up the world view, but you still work hard to practice and upgrade, and you become a double-faced person! I'm saying that you're cheating. No matter how hard you try, it's all in vain under the halo of cheating. The more words you write, the more uncomfortable you become (°ㅂ° ╬)
It took almost two hundred chapters of cultivation to break through from the first level of Qi gathering to the fifth level. No one can advance at this speed.
The section from the beginning of the book to the invasion of Linjiang Sect's demons is quite remarkable. I think it can be given 4 to 5 stars for its writing. Later, the great changes in the world started to happen. In the front, the demons spread out so much that they disappeared without a trace. It was obviously anticlimactic. I also wrote about countless taboo giants and ancient battlefields, but in the end it didn't survive in this world, so I started over in another world. It's typical of S B to abandon it after writing it. From my personal point of view, in fact, the book revolves around the struggle against the demons, and finally escapes to the Sky Patrol League and is hunted down by the Sky Patrol League, which would make this book exciting. Changing the map will make the previous map a mess, and you can only talk rubbish.
😥In the front, it is set that Xie Dao will be chased and killed. Later, after killing Xie Dao, he will directly use his magic weapon.
This plot is a bit outrageous. Aren't you afraid that the sect will expel you immediately after being discovered?
How about just holding on tight? You also go out to practice, what is your main focus in cultivating immortals? If you can gather energy and exercise, you must not exercise and exercise. You have reached a bottleneck and cannot improve, so you still have to go out and practice. When people tell you to go out, you just go out, are you a licker? I also deliberately improved my appearance, and they are definitely together again in the end. You have a wealthy couple, and you still have to go out and have sex.
More than 200 chapters have been written, and I haven't crossed a major realm.
How to delete comments
Why were the comments deleted? 6 Out of 9 were deleted.
The author's words are really hard to describe. The starting setting is not bad, but the author can stop eating the settings all the time. There are no two Qiankun bags for Qi gathering, and one for the body training period. They have been pressing the protagonist to grow. Various water character numbers, weapon refining, alchemy, and drawing symbols are too simple. Is a small Kalami third-level alchemist in the Qi gathering realm reliable? The first level of Qi gathering can fly thousands of miles with a sword. All kinds of cool things. I don't know if he is the Golden Core Nascent Soul, but he also wants to push the realm, and he keeps slapping the face to force the protagonist to have various highlights. It makes people feel like a three-year-old child is holding a Barrett and standing and shooting continuously. I really can't stand it anymore.
The writing is really not good, could you seriously think about how to write it? Think more and write less like a fool
Hit the cards and get a little bit of growth experience
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The writing is mediocre, and although this kind of system is terrible with a little bit of flow, it's at least still readable. The first half is occasionally brilliant. Later, the demons invaded, and the world was in chaos. Although Invasion of the Demons is worse than Jadianliu, the writing is pretty good, and at least it can be watched for entertainment. As a result, before the invasion was even half over, Chen Dong was possessed by Chen Dong and started writing messy journals. There are many books about the invasion of demons with happy endings. The books that imitate Chen Dong's play in the restricted area of life are completely dead in the end.
It's tasteless, but it's a traditional fairy tale that can be read. I don't have to say whether it's good or not. Anyway, I read it because I ran out of books.
The subject matter of this book should belong to a genre that was more active a few years ago. It is not too old now, but the subject matter is indeed not new. However, this book is somewhat new in terms of its background and structure, and the content is also good. It is not the kind of book that slaps you in the face, but has new possibilities.
This novel gives people a brand new feeling, which is different from the traditional cultivation system. The growth process of the protagonist is very detailed, which feels very good. I hope the author will get better and better!
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