Mortal: Starting from Preaching in the Sea of ​​chaotic Stars

This book is definitely not going to be very long, because the fans who read The Legend of Mortal Cultivation of Immortality basically want to experience it alone, rather than forming a family to cultivate immortality, or accepting a lot of disciples and teaching them.

Not bad, although it's a little short, but the characters are well drawn.

The name "Xu Xin" is slightly younger and more modern, while "Lu Yi" is more in line with the Xianxia worldview.

Can I change the protagonist's name? Xu Xin is too dramatic

I feel there are problems in many places. You have accepted Yuan Yao and Yuan Li. Yuan Li should not throw it away. Then you have written about the family industry. You don't want this genre to your liking. You can definitely give Han Li that time and push it back. You have already written this article. If you don't write it more comfortably, that is the rhythm of the attack.

After reading the introduction, I personally don't like the setting of a Mortal Cultivation of Immortality fanfic. From the setting, you can roughly see how the plot is arranged. The plot of this setting is not much better.

Generally speaking, this is the most underrated book I have ever seen.

Did you yourself say not to leak information? Are you going to destroy them? What kind of information about apprenticeship cannot be published?

Because I will soon be writing about the plot of "Purple Spirit", and there are many fans of Purple Spirit, I thought of discussing the female characters in Mortal here in advance. The female characters involved in the previous part of Mortals mainly include: Han Yunzhi, Chen Qiaoqian, Nangong Wan, Dong Xuaner... These female characters can be roughly divided into three categories in terms of class: Han Yunzhi (common class); Chen Qiaoqian, Nangong Wan, and Dong Xuan'er (upper class women) Or more carefully divided into: Han Yunzhi (plain girl); Chen Qiaoqian, Dong Xuan'er (beautiful girl); Nangong Wan (goddess) I once said in a book that Han Yunzhi was the first or even the only woman Han Li "loved", but she was sprayed all over her body... Actually, I have my own reasons. Of course Han Li would not just regard Han Yunzhi as his younger sister, otherwise he would not kiss her involuntarily. The reason why Han Li liked Han Yunzhi was because at that stage, Han Li could only come into contact with women of Han Yunzhi's class; At least that's what Han Li subconsciously thought, and subconsciously he also felt that he could be worthy of the other party. Therefore, Han Li's "love" for Han Yunzhi is relatively simple, that is, the love of love. As for Chen Qiaoqian and Dong Xuan'er, Han Li's feelings are more complicated and even antagonistic. On the one hand, we long for possession, but in our hearts we know that it is unrealistic, so we show disdain, and in our hearts we dare to dream about transcending it. When it comes to Nangong Wan, Han Li's feelings become simple again, that is, completely fantasy; After all, it was a dream... This was because the class gap between Nangong Wan and Han Li at that time was so big that they could be described as people who were not in the same world at all. By the middle stage, the main female characters in Mortal include: Yuan Yao (Yanli is considered a partner), Zi Ling, Ling Yuling... And these three people also represent three different classes, namely ordinary girls, charming girls and goddesses. Among them, "Purple Spirit" is the most controversial! Interpret the character "Zi Ling" from a personal perspective and compare it with others. (Because this is a personal opinion, please correct me if there is any inappropriateness) First of all, it must be made clear that an important aspect of historical materialism is that events cannot be discussed in isolation from the specific environment! Only by clarifying this point can we explain why Yue Fei was recalled by the gold medal instead of rebelling, and why Song Jiang risked his life to become an official... Because under the historical environment at that time, loyalty to the emperor was "right", and this was not based on personal will! Let's change it to this: Zi Ling is in the world of cultivating immortals where the jungle is strong and the strong eat the weak. Using its own advantages cannot simply be judged as right or wrong... In fact, sometimes, right and wrong are not fixed! Also taking advantage of their own advantages, many readers are not so disgusted with "Yuan Yao"; Also taking advantage of their own advantages, most readers are unanimously disgusted with "Dong Xuan'er"; In fact, this is contradictory to the feelings towards "Purple Spirit". If you support Yuan Yao, then there is no need to be too disgusted with Zi Ling; Those who also support Zi Ling do not need to dislike Dong Xuan'er; To put it bluntly, the way they act is only different in degree, not in nature. To put it bluntly, in such a specific environment, Zi Ling wanted to change his class and make proper use of his own advantages. This was not a big mistake! (Of course, I personally can't stand it, but don't imitate me. I'm a loser, and I'm a lower class than you readers. The charming girl in your eyes is already a goddess to me, so I can despise her as much as I want to gain a self-righteous sense of moral superiority...) Having said that, in the world of cultivating immortals where the jungle prevails, and under such a specific environment, Zi Ling had no better way to change his class. Her background is better than Yuan Yao, so she has more means than Yuan Yao and knows how to climb up step by step; On the contrary, Yuan Yao does not have the same knowledge and experience as her. He only knows how to use his little advantages, but does not know how to take advantage of the weaknesses and rules of human nature. Such a comparison makes Yuan Yao more "chaste", and even makes people feel pity and indignation towards the world of immortality. After all, if a weak woman wants to live a better life, all she can do is sell herself. What a realistic and even cruel world this is! But when it comes to Zi Ling, a "hypocritical moral gentleman" like me can criticize him as much as he wants. "What a despicable woman she is. In order to have a better life, she uses her body to seduce men again and again. Bah, despicable!" (Just like in real life, while watching pornographic news such as golf and cursing; I watched it with gusto and imagined that if one of the protagonists replaced me... It would be double happiness! ) In fact, in the world of immortality where the jungle prevails, as long as Zi Ling wants to climb up, it is unlikely that he will have a better choice; And what she wanted to fight for was what Nangong Wan and Ling Yuling were born with. Of course, you can say that if Zi Ling is content with the status quo and practices hard on his own... It will actually be difficult, because that goes against human nature. After all, immortal cultivators are also human beings, and as long as they are human beings, it is difficult to break away from "upwardness", which is the most important characteristic of being human; Otherwise, behaviors such as abdication, not bowing down for five buckets of rice, and sacrificing one's life for righteousness would not be given such a high meaning by society. The above is roughly the same. I personally think Ling Yuling's portrayal is a bit of a failure. It is said that Wangda should have been like a young author like me at the beginning. It is difficult to depict characters outside of cognition, just like I depict the emperor holding a golden hoe. (Personal understanding, just guessing) There should be another Baohua in the later stage, who is also on the level of a goddess. But I've been reading it for so long that I've almost forgotten it. If I write it down, I'll have to make up for it by then. Let me make another aside. There are many times when you really have to think based on the specific environment, and thinking must be considered from two aspects: human nature and social rules. I talked a lot here and there, mainly because I was afraid that the way I would describe things later, especially the way the protagonist treats Zi Ling, would not be in line with everyone's expectations. To put it bluntly, I am still afraid that people will scold me! (Although I know that all readers have their own thinking ability, unlike me, I can only vent my emotions, but I still have to take precautions) Although I have a thick skin, if you think about scolding me, I still hope you can scold me gently. Finally, the Chinese New Year is almost here, and I would like to give you a first nod and wish you all a Happy New Year in advance!