
Mortal: Proficiency Cultivation
by Goudan 11
About This Novel
There is no special golden finger, just a proficiency panel. Opportunities must be seized and dangers must be avoided, but the most important thing is to accumulate day after day.
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Official(71)Scraped 11d ago
The main character is so disgusting. Too many people. It doesn't matter if you are good or bad, strong or weak, but you can't be too rubbish.
Strictly speaking, the protagonist is not a bad guy but his personality is too rubbish. It gives people the feeling of being looked down upon. It's really interesting to lie to yourself about your double standards. They often use narration or their own subjective psychological descriptions to criticize the original characters without thinking, as if they can gain some kind of psychological superiority. The vast majority of people have double standards, but this garbage protagonist can't be honest and lies to himself even though he has double standards. Build yourself up as if you have a sense of superiority, others are rubbish, I am the only one who is awesome, I am the unparalleled son, I am magnanimous, I am upright and reliable. Without the memory of the original work and the golden finger that the time traveler comes with, even if he is given the same trajectory as Han Li, his performance will still be better than Han Li's! The protagonist of the novel can be good or bad, neutral or bad, but you can't be too cool. The pull here has nothing to do with moral level or ability level, it is simply looked down upon. I will copy a few paragraphs of the original text for you. One: And he also discovered some problems. Han Li had always been on guard against him. No, he was on guard against everyone, including Zhang Tie. It's hard to understand that at such a young age, the mind is so complicated. Some people are born with it, and no one can get into it. What can Zhang Nan do, he can only keep it in his heart and continue to develop in a step-by-step manner. (The protagonist is more thoughtful than anyone else, and even tries his best to outshine Han Li through narration. The protagonist himself is also on guard against Han Li, and is trying his best to disguise his training progress. . At this time, we are still in the Valley of Gods. Anyone who has read the original film knows that the protagonist wants to be the leader. Who is guarding who? Who is guarding others? Isn't it normal for Han Li, a young farm boy, to be lonely when he comes to a strange place and encounters a strange teacher? Two: Zhang Nan is not a roundworm in his belly. He doesn't know everything that is going on in his mind, but he doesn't know everything either. After a few years of being together, he has already given up on his fantasies and has seen through Han Li. No matter how young this kid is, he is "independent" at heart, and he will never have a heart to heart with anyone. Ever since he understood this, he no longer had any special expectations for Han Li. Facts have proved that no one believes this boy. This happened two years ago when Zhang Nan accidentally saw Han Li secretly playing with a very beautiful little green bottle. He remembered that in the plot, Han Li picked up the bottle shortly after the half-year assessment. But during that time, he followed Han Li around when he was free, exchanging feelings, hoping to find the bottle together, and prosper and support each other from then on, but unfortunately he found nothing. At that time, he thought it was his appearance that changed Han Li's fate, and secretly apologized, but Han Li didn't know when, he had secretly picked up the bottle, and no one said anything. (To be honest, from a God's perspective, I don't know what the protagonist is thinking, and I can see through others. It seems like someone has hurt your heart and done something sorry for you. Are you trying to show yourself a "victim" perspective? The protagonist is more careful than Han Li, and the protagonist has more secrets to guard against Han Li. Although they are brothers in name, they are not close at all. It makes me laugh. When I was in school, I won a five million prize. My roommate shared it because of my character? Are you a little fairy? The world revolves around you, and all the supporting characters will give you treasures when you are in charge? Did you tell Han Li about the blinking sword technique you got from Li Feiyu in advance? Did you tell others about the immortality order you got from your experience of helping Han Li? Wouldn't it be more rubbish if you didn't share it with Han Li? Han Li's plug-in is obtained by himself, and these benefits are obtained through Han Li's perspective. Have you told Han Li about the system? After all, the system can't be taken away, but the bottle can be taken away. If you don't talk to others, it's natural for others to not talk to you. It's really disgusting to accept your double standards and deceive yourself.) Although the result is good, this man is really not smart enough. If his young lady gets too close to him, she will suffer a lot. Moreover, this guy is too tall to look directly at him. Xiaomei is somewhat of a face-controller, she thought worriedly, her eyes secretly peeking at the senior again, she just felt that this senior was so young and brave. (Here comes traditional entertainment again. Through psychological description or narration, some characters in the original work are mindlessly trampled to create a complete sense of moral and psychological superiority for the protagonist. The protagonist later seems to want to accept Xin Ruyin. As if this can It's logical. The same is true for Han Li's character. The protagonist uses Han Li to share his own cheats as if he has a simple and lively personality. That's enough. If you have enough brains, no one will go around looking for a thousand-year-old elixir that is rare for a woman in the pill formation stage. If you have enough brains, you will risk your life to protect a terminally ill woman who is not pretty. Too many, Qi Yunxiao was hacked by you even if he didn't have any thoughts. Anyway, the protagonist is the most awesome, the protagonist is the most superior, everyone else is stupid, they are all NPCs. Those who are too thoughtful and cannot be fooled by the protagonist are villains or cunts. If they are too thoughtful, they are just brainless. Without the protagonist, he would not have a good ending, so it is logical for the protagonist to steal his woman. How can this force the protagonist be more disgusting than Tang San? Qi Yunxiao was kind to Xin Ruyin more than once, and died in the end because of Xin Ruyin. The cause and effect caused by Yin was that she ran to Xin Ruyin with her last breath and told her that she was going to suffer if she got too close to Qi Yunxiao. After attacking her mind, she started to attack her appearance. The description of his appearance is just his appearance. He is really ugly, so there must be a description. Anyway, it is just a stupid thing to try to create a sense of superiority for the protagonist. In this way, it is logical for the protagonist to take all the benefits and plot against others. . You are too cunning to plot against you. You are too stupid. If I don't plot against you, others will plot against you, and I am confident about it. Damn, if there is such a cunt in real life, it is definitely the type of person who is too polite to describe him.
The pressure level is very high, 3 spiritual roots in 5 years and only 4 levels? No dogs look at it
**The book originally maintained the author on some settings.
It becomes more and more disgusting later on, and it is obvious that the author has racked his brains to suppress it in order to follow the plot. In order to follow the plot, he has to follow Han Li. It is too obvious. It is true that the more I watch it, the more disgusting it becomes. The spiritual root is better than Han Li, I can't say it is much better, but it is a little better than Han Li.
There is a plug-in for the Three Spiritual Roots. I have been cultivating for 4 and a half years before reaching the third level of Qi. I have also taken Huanglong Pill. This plug-in is worse than not having it.
I can't rate it, I think it's poorly written.
There aren't many that mortals can read, but this one is great. For example, another book is outrageous, saying that you can learn in advance by paying in advance, but in the end it doesn't even cost you anything, it's just an imposed system.
Don't you like that you like to follow others so much?
This book is still readable, but the writing by Goldfinger is a bit complicated. The protagonist's scheming skills are very good. Unlike the protagonist of the Gaode map next door, he thought a lot and said that he used his brain and then started to act recklessly, which made people speechless.
Not bad. You can make talismans and practice formations without grabbing the vials.
It's really not good. It's disgusting to keep calling Han Li a white-eyed wolf and keep licking him.
Is it interesting to test Han Li? I also helped him get the antidote, and the subsequent exercises were also given for free. I really don't understand what the author was thinking? I want to have a clean break and procrastinate. It's really disgusting.
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Official(71)Scraped 11d ago
The main character is so disgusting. Too many people. It doesn't matter if you are good or bad, strong or weak, but you can't be too rubbish.
Strictly speaking, the protagonist is not a bad guy but his personality is too rubbish. It gives people the feeling of being looked down upon. It's really interesting to lie to yourself about your double standards. They often use narration or their own subjective psychological descriptions to criticize the original characters without thinking, as if they can gain some kind of psychological superiority. The vast majority of people have double standards, but this garbage protagonist can't be honest and lies to himself even though he has double standards. Build yourself up as if you have a sense of superiority, others are rubbish, I am the only one who is awesome, I am the unparalleled son, I am magnanimous, I am upright and reliable. Without the memory of the original work and the golden finger that the time traveler comes with, even if he is given the same trajectory as Han Li, his performance will still be better than Han Li's! The protagonist of the novel can be good or bad, neutral or bad, but you can't be too cool. The pull here has nothing to do with moral level or ability level, it is simply looked down upon. I will copy a few paragraphs of the original text for you. One: And he also discovered some problems. Han Li had always been on guard against him. No, he was on guard against everyone, including Zhang Tie. It's hard to understand that at such a young age, the mind is so complicated. Some people are born with it, and no one can get into it. What can Zhang Nan do, he can only keep it in his heart and continue to develop in a step-by-step manner. (The protagonist is more thoughtful than anyone else, and even tries his best to outshine Han Li through narration. The protagonist himself is also on guard against Han Li, and is trying his best to disguise his training progress. . At this time, we are still in the Valley of Gods. Anyone who has read the original film knows that the protagonist wants to be the leader. Who is guarding who? Who is guarding others? Isn't it normal for Han Li, a young farm boy, to be lonely when he comes to a strange place and encounters a strange teacher? Two: Zhang Nan is not a roundworm in his belly. He doesn't know everything that is going on in his mind, but he doesn't know everything either. After a few years of being together, he has already given up on his fantasies and has seen through Han Li. No matter how young this kid is, he is "independent" at heart, and he will never have a heart to heart with anyone. Ever since he understood this, he no longer had any special expectations for Han Li. Facts have proved that no one believes this boy. This happened two years ago when Zhang Nan accidentally saw Han Li secretly playing with a very beautiful little green bottle. He remembered that in the plot, Han Li picked up the bottle shortly after the half-year assessment. But during that time, he followed Han Li around when he was free, exchanging feelings, hoping to find the bottle together, and prosper and support each other from then on, but unfortunately he found nothing. At that time, he thought it was his appearance that changed Han Li's fate, and secretly apologized, but Han Li didn't know when, he had secretly picked up the bottle, and no one said anything. (To be honest, from a God's perspective, I don't know what the protagonist is thinking, and I can see through others. It seems like someone has hurt your heart and done something sorry for you. Are you trying to show yourself a "victim" perspective? The protagonist is more careful than Han Li, and the protagonist has more secrets to guard against Han Li. Although they are brothers in name, they are not close at all. It makes me laugh. When I was in school, I won a five million prize. My roommate shared it because of my character? Are you a little fairy? The world revolves around you, and all the supporting characters will give you treasures when you are in charge? Did you tell Han Li about the blinking sword technique you got from Li Feiyu in advance? Did you tell others about the immortality order you got from your experience of helping Han Li? Wouldn't it be more rubbish if you didn't share it with Han Li? Han Li's plug-in is obtained by himself, and these benefits are obtained through Han Li's perspective. Have you told Han Li about the system? After all, the system can't be taken away, but the bottle can be taken away. If you don't talk to others, it's natural for others to not talk to you. It's really disgusting to accept your double standards and deceive yourself.) Although the result is good, this man is really not smart enough. If his young lady gets too close to him, she will suffer a lot. Moreover, this guy is too tall to look directly at him. Xiaomei is somewhat of a face-controller, she thought worriedly, her eyes secretly peeking at the senior again, she just felt that this senior was so young and brave. (Here comes traditional entertainment again. Through psychological description or narration, some characters in the original work are mindlessly trampled to create a complete sense of moral and psychological superiority for the protagonist. The protagonist later seems to want to accept Xin Ruyin. As if this can It's logical. The same is true for Han Li's character. The protagonist uses Han Li to share his own cheats as if he has a simple and lively personality. That's enough. If you have enough brains, no one will go around looking for a thousand-year-old elixir that is rare for a woman in the pill formation stage. If you have enough brains, you will risk your life to protect a terminally ill woman who is not pretty. Too many, Qi Yunxiao was hacked by you even if he didn't have any thoughts. Anyway, the protagonist is the most awesome, the protagonist is the most superior, everyone else is stupid, they are all NPCs. Those who are too thoughtful and cannot be fooled by the protagonist are villains or cunts. If they are too thoughtful, they are just brainless. Without the protagonist, he would not have a good ending, so it is logical for the protagonist to steal his woman. How can this force the protagonist be more disgusting than Tang San? Qi Yunxiao was kind to Xin Ruyin more than once, and died in the end because of Xin Ruyin. The cause and effect caused by Yin was that she ran to Xin Ruyin with her last breath and told her that she was going to suffer if she got too close to Qi Yunxiao. After attacking her mind, she started to attack her appearance. The description of his appearance is just his appearance. He is really ugly, so there must be a description. Anyway, it is just a stupid thing to try to create a sense of superiority for the protagonist. In this way, it is logical for the protagonist to take all the benefits and plot against others. . You are too cunning to plot against you. You are too stupid. If I don't plot against you, others will plot against you, and I am confident about it. Damn, if there is such a cunt in real life, it is definitely the type of person who is too polite to describe him.
The pressure level is very high, 3 spiritual roots in 5 years and only 4 levels? No dogs look at it
**The book originally maintained the author on some settings.
It becomes more and more disgusting later on, and it is obvious that the author has racked his brains to suppress it in order to follow the plot. In order to follow the plot, he has to follow Han Li. It is too obvious. It is true that the more I watch it, the more disgusting it becomes. The spiritual root is better than Han Li, I can't say it is much better, but it is a little better than Han Li.
There is a plug-in for the Three Spiritual Roots. I have been cultivating for 4 and a half years before reaching the third level of Qi. I have also taken Huanglong Pill. This plug-in is worse than not having it.
I can't rate it, I think it's poorly written.
There aren't many that mortals can read, but this one is great. For example, another book is outrageous, saying that you can learn in advance by paying in advance, but in the end it doesn't even cost you anything, it's just an imposed system.
Don't you like that you like to follow others so much?
This book is still readable, but the writing by Goldfinger is a bit complicated. The protagonist's scheming skills are very good. Unlike the protagonist of the Gaode map next door, he thought a lot and said that he used his brain and then started to act recklessly, which made people speechless.
Not bad. You can make talismans and practice formations without grabbing the vials.
It's really not good. It's disgusting to keep calling Han Li a white-eyed wolf and keep licking him.
Is it interesting to test Han Li? I also helped him get the antidote, and the subsequent exercises were also given for free. I really don't understand what the author was thinking? I want to have a clean break and procrastinate. It's really disgusting.









