
Mortal: I Can Trade Everything
by My Happiness Is Unimaginable
About This Novel
Traveling to a world where mortals are cultivating immortals, they come with a golden finger [Equivalent Scale], which can connect all heavens and worlds for transactions. Planting the land to grow a piece of sky? Will you live forever? Small! The pattern opens. Transform your spiritual roots and become a genius first! Immortal martial arts, the art of protecting the Tao. Spells, magical powers, and secret techniques from all the heavens and realms are bestowed upon me! Many years later, when Han Li asked for help, he said, "There are five immortals in the world, heaven, earth, humans, gods, and ghosts. I have a volume of the Book of the Earth. Can I learn it?" "Can I gain immortality?" "This is easy!"
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Official(84)Scraped 15d ago
Most of them are self-questioning and self-answering. You played too many jokes and you wrote them one by one. But we read them continuously. The more you go to the back, the more tired you will be, and you will even feel irritable. It is easy to feel as if you are deliberately suppressing combat power and water, especially for body training. I remember that there are red and pink skeletons in Tiannan. Skeletons are also used for body training. There is no situation like yours. Moreover, the various self-designed systems are mixed together, giving people a feeling that they want to run without knowing how to walk. , And they also force themselves to play the role of others, such as Erlang Shen. The further they go, the more they feel that they have no self-characteristics.
If you can't maintain the original worldview, don't write fanfics
The writing style is frivolous and exaggerated and not ordinary at all. In the later period, the world view collapsed. The whole world can be said to be under the mortal world view of the human world, the spiritual world, and the immortal world. How can it be like Liao Zhai and Zhu Xian? This is directly skipping the world of spirits, demons and immortals. It is like watching a Douluo Dalu anime and being raped by Xi Yangyang and Baldhead.
It's just so so. He even went to get the little green bottle to kill himself when he had Goldfinger. Han Li's little green bottle was teleported to him after Han Licheng became the master of the Reincarnation Hall. In other words, without Han Li, there would be no little green bottle. And you, a little Karami, actually ran to grab the things belonging to the Lord of Samsara Hall. That is to say, if you can write like this, another person might die without knowing how he died.
When you see Lao Mo, you don't want to see it anymore. You don't think it's really trendy, do you?
There are too many witticisms, a few for each character, and no personality!
Among the mortal fanfics I have read, the writing is relatively good. I recommend everyone to read it. The author is very slow to update. When he is slow, I want to keep the book. When will the author update?
I kept telling myself that it was a bit awkward to watch.
Too much talking to myself, too much nonsense.
In fact, what I want to say is that you don't need to write the same paper. You only write about the protagonist of your book. Where is the protagonist of the article? You are not even close to the death of the protagonist in Causeway Bay, so you might as well just re-open the book
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Official(84)Scraped 15d ago
Most of them are self-questioning and self-answering. You played too many jokes and you wrote them one by one. But we read them continuously. The more you go to the back, the more tired you will be, and you will even feel irritable. It is easy to feel as if you are deliberately suppressing combat power and water, especially for body training. I remember that there are red and pink skeletons in Tiannan. Skeletons are also used for body training. There is no situation like yours. Moreover, the various self-designed systems are mixed together, giving people a feeling that they want to run without knowing how to walk. , And they also force themselves to play the role of others, such as Erlang Shen. The further they go, the more they feel that they have no self-characteristics.
If you can't maintain the original worldview, don't write fanfics
The writing style is frivolous and exaggerated and not ordinary at all. In the later period, the world view collapsed. The whole world can be said to be under the mortal world view of the human world, the spiritual world, and the immortal world. How can it be like Liao Zhai and Zhu Xian? This is directly skipping the world of spirits, demons and immortals. It is like watching a Douluo Dalu anime and being raped by Xi Yangyang and Baldhead.
It's just so so. He even went to get the little green bottle to kill himself when he had Goldfinger. Han Li's little green bottle was teleported to him after Han Licheng became the master of the Reincarnation Hall. In other words, without Han Li, there would be no little green bottle. And you, a little Karami, actually ran to grab the things belonging to the Lord of Samsara Hall. That is to say, if you can write like this, another person might die without knowing how he died.
When you see Lao Mo, you don't want to see it anymore. You don't think it's really trendy, do you?
There are too many witticisms, a few for each character, and no personality!
Among the mortal fanfics I have read, the writing is relatively good. I recommend everyone to read it. The author is very slow to update. When he is slow, I want to keep the book. When will the author update?
I kept telling myself that it was a bit awkward to watch.
Too much talking to myself, too much nonsense.
In fact, what I want to say is that you don't need to write the same paper. You only write about the protagonist of your book. Where is the protagonist of the article? You are not even close to the death of the protagonist in Causeway Bay, so you might as well just re-open the book










