Mortal: Xin Ruyin is Reborn and Seizes Qi Yun at the Beginning
About This Novel
Qi Daozu opened his eyes and became Xin Ruyin, an important female supporting character in the early stage of "The Legend of Mortal Cultivation to Immortality". The problem of changing from male to female and having the body of a dragon roaring. In order not to die young, he had no choice but to take Qi Yunxiao's body. Fortunately, he has Taishang Laojun's Bagua furnace, which can not only help him refine magic weapons, magic weapons and ammunition, but also deduce magic weapons and elixir formulas. Legendary treasures appeared in his hands one after another, such as the jade purification bottle, the human race bag, the exquisite tower, the diamond carving, the human emperor banner, the immortal-killing flying knife...
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Official(10)Scraped 3d ago
Mind a little
1. The name is not chosen well, Qi Daozu. The name is too big and makes people unable to substitute it. 2. Although it is understandable to seize one's body, mortals can only seize one's body once. It is best to have an explanation here. After all, you may have already taken one's body. 3. The reason why I gave up the book is that you, a person who seizes the body, dare to go to the big sect. Even if you can't find it in the foundation building stage, can't you find it in the pill forming stage? You can't find it in the Dan-Jie stage, but in the Nascent Soul stage, there should at least be some heart-felt tests when joining the sect.
Title Introduction Persuading Resignation
Even if you write a female protagonist, or a female version of Han Lidu, the two lovers who will never change their lives in the original work will come to you to directly fight for their lives? Even if you change your gender, why don't you just write about two people who haven't met each other yet and don't fall in love? Just write a female version of Han Li? Or bringing some lily is not unacceptable.
There is no system that I like, it must be given a five-star rating
I don't like systematic reasons, the protagonist is like a puppet. Opportunity does not use brain planning, just sends it directly. Ability will not be developed using the brain, but created using the brain, and will be given directly.
When you refine the magic weapon, you only need to shape it and not embed it into the magic circle? 😌
The plot is reasonable and not trivial
The plot is reasonable, it is not a Long Aotian plot, novices should be careful!
I haven't read the book yet. I'll go and there are always people saying that the body of the Dragon Roar is in the soul, reincarnation and the body-taking. That's fine, just take the man's body directly. No matter whether the Dragon's Body is still there or not, it's successful and you can't die.
Travel through Xin Ruyin and capture the sky. . . You probably wrote this after drinking fake wine!
If you have never eaten shit, come in and give it a try. Ten words.
If you like to read nanny articles, you can read it
I won't rate it, because after all, I don't even have the desire to read it, and writing a review is just to give the author a suggestion. When I saw the synopsis, I didn't want to read it. A man transformed into a woman and traveled through time to become Xin Ruyin, and then took over Qi Yunxiao. Don't you think it's superfluous? This is a bit baffling. Wouldn't it be better if you just take over Qi Yunxiao? Why do we have to do this so much?
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Community(0)
Official(10)Scraped 3d ago
Mind a little
1. The name is not chosen well, Qi Daozu. The name is too big and makes people unable to substitute it. 2. Although it is understandable to seize one's body, mortals can only seize one's body once. It is best to have an explanation here. After all, you may have already taken one's body. 3. The reason why I gave up the book is that you, a person who seizes the body, dare to go to the big sect. Even if you can't find it in the foundation building stage, can't you find it in the pill forming stage? You can't find it in the Dan-Jie stage, but in the Nascent Soul stage, there should at least be some heart-felt tests when joining the sect.
Title Introduction Persuading Resignation
Even if you write a female protagonist, or a female version of Han Lidu, the two lovers who will never change their lives in the original work will come to you to directly fight for their lives? Even if you change your gender, why don't you just write about two people who haven't met each other yet and don't fall in love? Just write a female version of Han Li? Or bringing some lily is not unacceptable.
There is no system that I like, it must be given a five-star rating
I don't like systematic reasons, the protagonist is like a puppet. Opportunity does not use brain planning, just sends it directly. Ability will not be developed using the brain, but created using the brain, and will be given directly.
When you refine the magic weapon, you only need to shape it and not embed it into the magic circle? 😌
The plot is reasonable and not trivial
The plot is reasonable, it is not a Long Aotian plot, novices should be careful!
I haven't read the book yet. I'll go and there are always people saying that the body of the Dragon Roar is in the soul, reincarnation and the body-taking. That's fine, just take the man's body directly. No matter whether the Dragon's Body is still there or not, it's successful and you can't die.
Travel through Xin Ruyin and capture the sky. . . You probably wrote this after drinking fake wine!
If you have never eaten shit, come in and give it a try. Ten words.
If you like to read nanny articles, you can read it
I won't rate it, because after all, I don't even have the desire to read it, and writing a review is just to give the author a suggestion. When I saw the synopsis, I didn't want to read it. A man transformed into a woman and traveled through time to become Xin Ruyin, and then took over Qi Yunxiao. Don't you think it's superfluous? This is a bit baffling. Wouldn't it be better if you just take over Qi Yunxiao? Why do we have to do this so much?
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